Asya ff DIVING IN LOVE :) CH4=PG43 UPDATED ON 21/07/18 - Page 31

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --Aanchal--


yeah exactly everyone knows that your stories are the best!
that pendant vala scene
asad's imagination hayyeee just love all that


Pendant scene??😕
i cant recall it!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --Aanchal--


okay boss 5 more mins😃
dont call me that😳


Koi se country is watch hai apke pas😕
Lol🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello to all the wonderful readers here I'm back with chapter 4 of Diving In Love, hope you all enjoy the update and do let me know how u felt about it! I will be waiting for your reviews and silent readers do like the update if u loved it!!! it means alot😃

This chapter is res to Addirita, Anopama, sneha8337, smittal07051995, sweet_tehs, shiv456, greyanastasia, --Evil_Angel--, coolhi1988, MysticRiver, ksen, ..Rosepie.., life4me, Ajuzangel, Rubyaasyafan, kabhi_asya, Linsie, asifiqbalsh, parakshi, suganti, Risingsun626 and all the silent readers for liking my story, sorry if I missed any name each and every opinion matters to me

Also this chapter is specially res to my one and only boss Sweetu(here I have updated your story hope you like it boss😃 and thanks alot for helping me to get this thread reopen dear🤗) and Maina(hope you enjoy the update dear😃)

Chapter 4

bannercredits: paaru

Zoya ranged the doorbell and after some seconds Shirin opened the door smiling widely seeing Zoya

Shirin: Zoya come inside dear

Zoya came inside smiling

Zoya: hey aunty looking gorgeous! wish I was a guy

Shirin: thanks sweetie but why you want to be a guy?

Zoya: if I was a guy I would have convinced you for an extramarital affair with me

Shirin: ya Allah! Badmaash!

Zoya laughed seeing her widened eyes, she just kissed her cheeks

Zoya: you're so cute aunty!

Shirin(pulling her nose): and you're so naughty!

Zoya: where is my best friend btw?

Shirin (sighing): where will you find her when her Abbu is out on a business trip?

Zoya: uncle is on a business trip, means no rules, don't tell me she is not yet up?

Shirin sighed nodding in yes

Zoya: Okay! I will wake that sleepyhead

Shirin: yes, please! Till then I will set a table for both of you

Zoya: nope Aunty I already had my breakfast

Shirin: still you can have some! Come fast

Zoya: you're are the reason that I cannot lose weight

Shirin: I'm so proud!

Zoya just sighed dramatically and marched towards Humeira's room

Here Humeira was sleeping peacefully hugging her pillow

Zoya: I wonder how she can sleep so peacefully after always putting me in a tough spot

She was above to wake her up but stopped with a mischievous smile on her face; she opened her side bag and removed a rubber mouse which she has bought recently for studying its inner part in detail

Zoya looking at the mice: let's have some fun buddy!

With that, she placed it carefully near Humeira's neck and played a mice sound on her phone placing it near her ear

Humeira's sleep was disturbed with the disturbing sound which was ringing directly near her ear she opened her sleepy eyes and looked around when her gaze fell near her neck and she recognized the sound and jerked off the mice from her neck and stood up on the bed screaming

Humeira: AHHH!!!!!! MOUSE!!!!!EW SOMEBODY HELP

Shirin came running inside her room hearing her shout

Shirin: what happened? Why are you shouting!

Humeira: Ammi! Mouse!!!!

Shirin (horrified): mouse!!!Where is it (glancing around the room) how many times I have told you to close the windows before going to sleep! Now where it might have gone! Btw where is Zoya?

Zoya came out behind the curtains laughing out loud holding her stomach

Zoya(laughing): here is your Zoya and picking up the mouse from the floor here is our little celebrity

Shirin: ew...Zoya how can you hold it like this

Zoya(giggling): aunty it's just a rubber toy

Shirin just sighed in relief and giving both of them the hopeless look went out of the room

Shirin(from the door): come fast for breakfast

Zoya: yes aunty!

As soon as Shirin was out of sight Zoya was welcomed by a pillow right on her face before she could say anything was welcomed by another pillow

Zoya: humi!!!

Humeira: how come you come up with all the stupid pranks!

Zoya: the way you come with all the stupid activities and also dragging me into it!!!

She said throwing the pillow back at her

Humeira: now what did I do?

Zoya: all of sudden why you want to be a swimmer!

Humeira: oh that! (Smiling sheepishly) it's a good exercise and also the world is going to drown one day so everyone should know how to swim!

Zoya: WHAT!!! (Throwing another pillow at her) and I'm the fool over here! Tell me what's going on

Humeira(sitting on her bed): actually Ayaan...

Zoya: no more words! I get it! I completely get it

Zoya sat beside her

Zoya: In a love story at some point either a girl or a boy gets sacrificed or both of them but Humeira begum in your and that raabert's love story it's your best friend who will be sacrificed! Huh! I'm not joining any swimming classes

Humeira: Ha.Ha.Ha go and tell this to your ammi

Zoya: hate you!

Humeira: please Zoya you know Abbu, how strict he is! I can't risk meeting him elsewhere, I can't lose him

Zoya(side hugging her): you will never lose him, fine I'm in but why swimming class

Humeira: because...

Before she could continue Shirin entered

Shirin: common girls your breakfast is getting cold

Zoya: yes aunty we were just talking

Shirin: do that later! You, (gazing at Humeira) your Abbu will be in a video call in sometimes

Humeira stood up shocked

Humeira: what!!! (looking at herself still in her nightdress, just ran inside the washroom)

Zoya just giggled seeing it, she moved out with Shirin when message beeped in her mobile

Zoya(looking the message): Allah Miya! What's Wrong with them, why do they always have to prepone the dates

Shirin: what happened?

Zoya: new semester registration dates have been preponed I will have to leave for college now

Shirin: arrey aise kaise? First, have breakfast

Zoya took two parathas and rolled it

Zoya: I will have it on the way

With that, she rushed towards the door taking a bite from the paratha

She again looked back at Shirin

Zoya: aunty inform Humeira I will her directly meet her outside the swimming institute

Shirin: go safe beta


PRESENT:

Zoya stood up wiping the tears and again looked at her own reflection in the mirror, she just glanced at the old picture of her in her mobile


Which was Zoya Farooqui in all means known for her lively, full of life attitude and now she looked back at her reflection which was also of Zoya Farooqui, no this is not her, it's a living corpse whose life has been completely drained out

Some more flash came in in front of her eyes,

#1 She opening an envelope

#2 a doctor telling her something

Shutting her eyes tightly she cried her heart out with continuous tears oozing out from her bloodshot eyes, she just took the coat which Asad made her wear and holding it in front of her face

Zoya(gritted her teeth): I hate you! Asad Ahmed Khan, I hate you get that straight in your mind!!!

With that, she threw the jacket on the floor and it landed near a feet, she shifted her gaze up to see the owner of that feet which was her own reflection standing with a broad smile she took the jacket hugging it close to her heart

A/N: the One with the purple font is her reflection i.e her hallucination

Zoya: I love him so much and nothing in the universe could change that

Zoya: don't you have any self-respect! How could you still love that person after what he did to you! What you had to lose because of him

Zoya(with a moist eyes): that void cannot be filled but it didn't happen because of my Asad! It happened because of you! You failed! You failed your responsibility! You failed as...

Zoya: JUST SHUT UP!!!! He is equally responsible did you get it! HE'S BLOODY EQUALLY RESPONSIBLE!!!

Zoya: he doesn't even know anything!

Zoya: that doesn't change the consequences of his actions

Zoya(angrily): it's your actions which brought this voidness! It was your responsibility! If Asad would have been there nothing would have gone wrong but you ruined everything... It was you...

Zoya just closed her ears in frustration she just took the vase from the side table and threw it on the illusion of herself breaking the vase into pieces

Zoya: JUST GO AWAY! He was not there and it was his fault

She looked back at the direction but no one was there only the pieces of glass and the jacket was there, she opened her drawer taking the antidepressant bottle she took one tablet and gulped a water in one go and lied down on her bed

Zoya(looking at the jacket lying in the floor): I hate you...

With that, medicine started showing it's effect, she closed her eyes as slumber took over her

Next day morning

Asad's suite

Asad opened his eyes as the sun rays hit his face he just got up holding his head as it was paining like hell after his yesterday's hangover

He was not able to remember anything much after he drank that soft drink only thing he knew was he was with Zoya his hand can still feel her touch

Asad: damm!

There was knock on the door

Asad: come in!

Asad saw Imraan entering with a glass

Imraan: Good Morning Bhaijaan!

Asad: morning Imraan (clutching his head)

Imraan: bhaijaan have this lemonade it will help

Asad: exactly what I needed

Asad drank it in one go and rested his head back on the headboard

Asad(closing his eyes): what happened yesterday Imraan?

Imraan: don't know bhaijaan, maybe your drink got spiked I found you yesterday with Zoya and (smirking) indeed you were too high

Asad closed his eyes firmly hearing that, after sometime they just chatted for a while Asad didn't bring yesterday's topic at all and Imraan understood he doesn't want to talk about it so he didn't say anything after sometime Imraan left from there to get ready for work and even Asad opened his wardrobe removing the shirt which he was wearing

There was again the knock on the door

Asad thinking, "for sure Imraan forgot something"

Asad: come in!

He turned around and was shocked to see Zoya instead of Imraan

Zoya immediately turned around seeing him shirtless

Asad: you here?

Zoya just kept his jacket on his bed

Zoya: you're welcome

She was going out of the room but then a strong grip stopped her she turned around to see Asad holding her wrist

Asad(with a straight face): what had happened yester...

As soon as she turned around his heart melted looking at her face, seeing Zoya nobody could tell what she went through a night before but he was Asad she can fake it in front of the whole world but not before him

Asad(with a little-composed tone): are you okay?

Zoya looked at him hearing that she gulped but she couldn't portray herself weak especially in front of him

Zoya just jerked off his hand

Zoya: next time when you are high make sure you don't leave your fiance's side

With that, she marched out of his room

Asad: sometimes I wonder if she is her look alike

Here Asad was standing near the railing outside the lab, Imran joined him there

Imraan: sir you waiting for someone?

Asad: yes for Dr Farooqui, I have to discuss with her certain loopholes but she is not yet here

Imraan: really but she was inside with captain

Asad(not taking his words seriously): yeah right Zoya is inside and there is pin drop silence, somethings can never change, anyways let's wait inside

Asad moved inside inside with Imraan only to be welcomed by Zoya and captain

Imraan(In a whispering tone): nothing is same anymore bhaijaan

Asad felt a pinch in his heart hearing that, but then ignoring that they joined them

That's it how was it? bad? worst? do let me know okay will be waiting :)

Edited by --Aanchal-- - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Res
Let's see when 'll unres 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
Zoya was pregnant or something!! 😲
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
After a long time update
Love it totally
Hmm it seems there was some intense relation between asya
Maybe zoya lost her child
Let's see what gonna happen
But please update soon
Thanks for pm

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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update!!
Loved it.
Thanx for d pm:)
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Posted: 7 years ago

something happen...
between them...
awesome update
continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
It's heartbreaking that there's so much indifference between Asya at the moment...
Was there a baby lost..? Asad didn't know...?
All Tanveer and Akram's doing...jealous gold digger and obsessed psychopath
I really wish they can have a chance to talk and share everything...

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