Asya ff DIVING IN LOVE :) CH4=PG43 UPDATED ON 21/07/18 - Page 30

Originally posted by: parakshi

Thanks for the pm

Lovely update

And I love zoya's dress😳

Originally posted by: --Aanchal--

sure take your time but do unres

I understand it happens even i have many res pending

help youre asking me? just order dear😃

Originally posted by: Silver_Shiver

I will unres by tomorrow morning InshaAllah!😊

Hahaa so sweet of you!

Actually I had a question about the story!

Answer me as a reader... and honestly without any filter!

Is the story going too slow and un-understandable?? I feel its going a bit too much slow.

Originally posted by: --Aanchal--

NOPE!!!Without any filters I don't think the story is going slow and I know why you're getting that feeling because even I get it for my stories!

its not the story which is slow its the writer who is slow!!! actually the update gets really delayed and without calculating that frequency we think that story is going too slow

in my case if I would have updated WLCWF consistently then by now I would have been updating the epilogue so that the same thing in your case also I guess

and not understandable? have you lost it, if MZH is not understandable will you please define understandable to me!!! MZH as a reader is crystal clear to me !!! its going perfectly

Originally posted by: Silver_Shiver

Its not about time pace I meant by chapters.. Like its chapter 17 and still the leads haven't even interacted properly! I just felt its too slow...

Your stories are better than me bro! (-_-)

Originally posted by: --Aanchal--

anything my stories are nothing in front of yours

I dont think so story is moving and they are interacting too, even romancing❤️ as a reader I don't think Its going slow

Originally posted by: Silver_Shiver

Everyone knows whose stories are better so stop it okay! Yours are better than mine...

ROMANCE!!!🤣

They aren't romancing babe!!😆

And I won't let them romance for long too!😈

Originally posted by: Risingsun626

Thanks for pm for part 3. Sorry for late comment.

Lovely update.

you're apologizing to me for the delay lol!!! I'm pro at it so its okay😃

Flashback is lovely. The bonding of father daughter is beautiful. How they keep on irritating razia is wonderful. But razia aunty is a lovlymother here n too influenced with tv serials. Hahaha. Her pairing with gaffur is amazing n full of love.

I'm so glad you enjoyed the family moments, yeah she has a perfect family but lets see what will go wrong😉

Present is spoiled by tanveer. She n her jammy repition so much irritating. I laughed when i saw asad reaction on hearing tanu voice even in his drunken state he want to run away. Asad n tanu both are surprised to witness the changes in zoya but were not they who brought these changes in her.

yeah jammy damm How much I hated that word it was not less than a torture to my ear yeah even in drunken state he is terrified about being with her😆😆😆he deserves it yeah they are shocked its just like after stabbing a person youre shocked that the person is dead

Waiting for next.

will update it soon😃

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

Mis lol

Need update right now means now 😡