(MG-SS)REVENGEFUL MARRIAGE SEASON 6 (MR.ABDUCTOR)THREAD 1 (PARTS 1-8) - Page 10

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Posted: 7 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: -Mitu-

omg u stared season 6

Inliked the prologue ... I want lots of office secne n original srrial wala msk ...

i was waiting for it from the day when u told me about it ...

so revenge started ... this time dont make geet fall easily with maan

let him to do some gooD Papad rolling this time



Original serial MSK...Done...
Office scenes... You gotta wait a little maybe...

papad rolling and MSK, far fetched thought...But, yeah...He has to after all kidnapping Geet isn't a piece of cake... 😉

geet falling for maan...Hmm...That you will know soon by second or third part...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Kkiran

looking forward to the read.


okhh... 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: sumasridhar

Starting hi abducted but intesting kya huva ki bahut hi chota pro mila so arjuna groom n as orthodox family kya harsh Karen ge so waiting for next update


Hmm

yes

wait for next to know more
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Posted: 7 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: angeldream14

intriguing

he intruded into her room n she is talking to him like he is guest
so how will she react when she wakes up
she made it so easy for him to abduct her


hehe yes...

well lets find that out in part 1

Thanks dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Kawan

congratulations for new story...

nice prologue..
so geet is marrying Arjun???
and maan want his sister to marry Arjun.
well why don't Arjun say something..
why should geet say no...
now that maan kidnapped her everyone will think she ran away...

continue soon
waiting


yeah...She was...

Thanks dearie...

sure

wait for more
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: love2_soma

lovely ...

continue next prt soon plz...

waiting eagerly...


Thank you dear...

sure
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Posted: 7 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: Dragon-Heart

Congrats sweets for new season... Looking forward for this one... 😉


Thanks dearie...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: vasavi_sri

Congrats for the new story

Very interesting prologue
Maan was asking geet to cancel
Her wedding as the groom and his
Sister were in love and the groom was
Forced to Marry Geet left with no choice
He abducted her


Thank you dearie...

Yeah...

correct
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: i rok

hey
thanks for the PM
loved the prologue...
The idea is really nice of geet coming out of the bathroom and finding maan instead of her friends...
Maan being a gentleman before kidnapping her telling her to say no herself LOL...Then he kidnaps her as he sees no option...
continue soon...


Heyaa...

you are welcome sweets...

Thank you dearie...

sure
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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART 1

6 Months Later, Delhi,

Geet look at the building from the other side of the road...she removed her sheds and read the name plate she has been searching the background of...Khurrana Constructions... A bitter smile appeared on her lips before it fades in no time and she again shielded her eyes from everything...

Maan was working in his cabin...When he got a call from his receptionist who informed him of certain Geet who wanted to meet him...And as he was free, he called her in...But was left shocked as Geet entered after greetings and sat in front of him with a smile...Totally enjoying his perplexed expressions of his recognition of her...

Geet:- Hope you remember me??? (Finally she started a convo between them, as he seemed too shocked to react)

Maan:- No...Who are you???(He took his time to study her and replied)

Geet(smiled as she was expecting this from him):- Hmm, playing games haan...Alright...(She paused and then started)Am the same girl whom you The MSK -kidnapped... 6 months ago, broke not only her marriage with your friend, but her all ties with her family... friends...relatives...Whom you almost forced her when she was your captive... Now, can you recall anything??? (She didn't wait for his response as she added) I know, you can...and you will...

Maan was dumbfounded hearing her, of course he has recognized her, remembered everything that has happened between them both, the moment she entered...But, he didn't want to give away anything...so he pretended otherwise, till she reminded him in detail...and he knew, he stood no chance of negating her...

Maan(sighed and nodded after recovering from shock):- What do you want???

Geet:- Payback...(That was her instant reply)

Maan:- Huhh...Really...(First he was taken aback, then smirked)

Geet:- Hmm...Really...

Maan:- And how are you going to do so???

Geet:- Since you are a big name so I think you wouldn't want me to announce that in your very own office...worst to the media...(The last line was uttered in whisper)

Maan(cut her in anger):- Girl, do you even know whom are you talking to???

Geet:- Yes, I very well know...Mr. Abductor... (A name that he has given to himself for her...and with that told she leaned back and Maan saw her confidence...she has changed lot, so he accepted)

Maan:- What's your payback???

Geet:- Nothing that you can't fulfill... First, take me out on a lunch...

Maan(was flabbergasted):- what??? Is that all what you want???

Geet:- I said, First...(She leaned forward and emphasized on her word)There's a list you are going to fulfill...

Maan(clenched his fists in anger, she was messing with MSK):- Don't play with fire Geet...It only will burn you...

Geet:- Look who says this...Who himself has played with someone's reputation...Her life...Her dreams...Her dignity...(Maan looked away at that)I already am burning in fire, ignited by you...Now, its your turn to accompany me...I will do the same with you...Get ready...

Maan(laughed):- Really... You think, you are going to punish me like this by doing silly things like lunch and etc???

Geet(smirked):- This only is the beginning Mr Khurrana...Lot more has to come...

Maan:- Well, you are messing with wrong man girl...You can't blackmail me...

Geet(stood to her feet and whispered going near him):- I already have started... Its show time now...

With that, she took the notepad from his table and pen...and wrote down her phone no...throwing that near his hands reach she waved a bye...

Geet:- Call me whenever you are free to take me on lunch... I will give you 5 days...Then I will go to press...Do I need to remind, why??? (She mocked at him with a smirk and then turned to go)

While Maan only gaped at her...The blunder he did months ago, now came back to him as a harsh reality and he knew she will do what she has threatened him of...and he cursed himself for adapting that way for helping his sis and friend...

He certainly wasn't going to let her play with his hard earned repu...So, he dialed a no and booked a hotel for their lunch...He was going to clear her mess today itself...

PAST

FB...

Arjun and Annie loved each other from their college days and being Maan's best friend, it was easy to ask his friend's sister's hand for marriage...Maan was happy to marry his sister-Annie with his buddy...But, the only hindrance came in form of Arjun's parents, who were all set to marry him with their friend's daughter...Geet...In turn converting the business friendship into family one...Arjun knew he stood no chance in front of his orthodox family... who would never have accepted the fact that their son chose a girl for himself... Arjun turned his all hopes to his friend...Maan, Who, also knew his family Background...Being a big shot himself in the business...He knew, what his family was capable of...so, he decided to help both, his friend and his sister...But...He didn't want to do what his friend suggested...

Maan:- But, this is wrong...

Arjun:- We don't have an option yaar...

Annie:- Arjun, can't you talk with her once and try to solve this matter ???

Arjun:- Listen guys, the girl belongs to a very conservative family...She is a villager and will do what her elders would ask her...So, its useless wasting our time in talking and by that, she might tell everything to her family and we will be in trouble then??? (Maan and Annie exchanged looks and Annie looked down, knowing whatever Arjun was saying was quite possible and Maan, being practical, has agreed)

Maan:- Alright I will help you...

Arjun:- Thanks man...

Annie:- It's a good thing, the girl belongs to a village and coz of that, you will also not be exposed...

Maan:- That's what am counting on Annie...But, first I will talk to her...To find a way out for you both...

Arjun(offended hearing his friend):-Maan, she would never say no...

Annie:- She belongs to a village Bhai...Why would she go against her parents decision that too on last mints???

Maan:- Annie...We are playing with someone's life...With someone's image...And before doing that, we must think of an easy and right way for you...

Arjun(thought and now seconded Maan):- Yes Annie, she is some village girl...But, is educated...She might understand and backs away...If Maan talks with her???

Annie has nodded and wished she could agree with what her Bhai was going to say to her...

End of FB

So here they were...With no option left Maan had to kidnap the Bride and portray her badly... destroying her image in front of her and groom's family...It was Maan's plan B...Since plan A didn't work out well, so he was left with no choice...He was heading towards a hut inside the jungles of her village...Though he felt bad for the girl...But, his sister came first for him...

Geet opened her eyes and found herself in a moving object...She tried to shout but her mouth was covered with a cloth and her hands tied with rope...She glanced around and found herself in a jeep that her Kidnapper was driving...It was dark now, but she could figure his features out...He was the same man who has been with her in her room...Geet tried to remove the cloth, but Maan's hand reached out...

Maan:- Don't you dare...

But, she didn't listen to him and tried to remove again...when he applied brakes and glared at her the next moment...scaring her...

Maan:- If you make any noise am going to kill you here itself...(And when his threat settled within her brain he noticed her eyes that were threatening to shed a tear)

Maan opened her hands and now tied them at her back...Then resumed their journey...All the way he noticed she only was looking at him...But, he didn't spare a single glance at her way...He stopped his jeep at their destination and that was when she again was scared to see them both in a dense jungle...in the dark...with some stranger...who has kidnapped her from her home...

She wriggled as he tried to get her to the small hut...and in frustration with her no cooperation behavior, he took her up in his arms amidst of her struggles and dropped her on heap of straws...Bending down at her face, he silently sent her threats that she now has understood...and left to close the door...switching on the only bulb in there...

PRESENT

Geet opened her eyes as someone lit the light and she sighed, seeing her only support for the past 6 months-Sheena standing with a defeated look...She came and sat beside her placing her hand on Geet's shoulder...

Sheena:- Geet, I think you should let go...

Geet(shook her head):- No Sheena, I have to do this...I have to go through this no matter what...

Sheena:- Geet, you don't realize he is someone big...And when time comes, everyone will go with him, no one will stand with you...You can't just go and accuse him without solid proofs...

Geet(looked at her friend):- You trust me naa??? You will stand with me right???

Sheena looked at her friend...One night, she found her friend at her door after her broken marriage...her parents wanted her to stay away from the girl who was the cause of her family's defamation... But, when she heard Geet's story, she felt for her friend and decided to help her get outta her mess...But, then she didn't know who her Abductor was...And, when she told it was MSK...Sheena didn't know what to do...Her father was a client at Khurrana's and she felt herself at fix, when Geet assured her she was going to keep her profile low and nothing will happen to her and her family...

And Geet did her part too, as she moved out from her friend's house a couple of days back and was switching places after places after that, having no permanent job, it was meant to be like this...

Sheena:- Geet, I will be honest with you...I trust you with your side of the story...But, at the same time, it is very difficult for ..even me to believe MSK could do such a thing...But, I do believe you...and then his sister being happily married to your Ex, has completely justified your story...But, you are not seeing what am trying to make you see Geet...He is big shot...Nothing, absolutely nothing will bother him, neither your pleas nor your threats...What I fear for you is, he might do something and you will be vanished from this earth...You know what I mean...Trust me, he is that powerful...

Geet:- I know...I know whatever you are saying is all correct...But, I want to take this chance...I don't want to live my entire life, hiding from my parents ...My loved ones...when I never was at mistake...He will have to understand me...my pov...my anguish...my hatred for him for making me go such rough days...(She had a forlorn look on her face as she looked lost somewhere) I still get nightmares of those painful, horrible nights...in that forest...

Thanks so much for the warm welcome to the 6th season to RM...Hope to get showered with such responses in every part of this Season...😊

Well, the past months will be revealed like this...in bits and pieces this time...Since am trying to make this as short as this can be, so incorporating past and present together in a part...Its something new for me to write and maybe new for readers to read too...

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