Dream come true s2 part 1 page 1

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank u all for liking my first TS.Here is the second one hope u all will like it.


DREAM COME TRUE


Prologue


Gauri enters the serial set and looks at her surrounding wide eye, She was seeing a location for the first time,The location seem familiar to her . Her friend Richa's cousin is working here and on Richa's recommendation he has agreed to give her a job.

Ri:Don't worry gauri u go Mumbai and meet Dandi bhaiya. I have said everything. You will be safe there

She remembers Richa's word.A man comes to meet her.

Dandi: Gauri sister don't be afraid,Its your first day in Mumbai and at work. Riya has told me everything, you will be safe here.

Gauri nodded

Dandi: Do u know what your job is

Gauri nodded no

Dandi:you are a help on the set ok.

G:Help maane

D:Matlab u have to help everyone on the set, the actors ,actresses, then the technician etc etc.

G:Teek hein dandi bhaiya

D:Toh let me give you first duty

Gauri nodded

D:Ok from that corner turn left there will be many rooms. Go to room 36, 40 and 42 and say them director is calling as shot is ready

G:Kya ready hein?

D: shot gauri

G:Acha teek hein

Gauri go from their little nervous as its her first day.

Om's POV ( reading the script given)

Hey bhagvan what all romantic scene are there in serials. I mean see this scene. Savitri keeps hand on Dev's cheek accidentally and Dev feel as if everything has slowed down and get lost in that touch.I mean seriously, aisa hote hein kya by touching the cheek in real life. Answer for this only will be with Rudra,He is the play boy always teasing me that I am a virgin, so what , I want to wait for my soulmate.Ab how will I give that reaction. I am sure if savitri uff ridhima touches I m not gonna feel anything so atleast if I had experience kuch toh karte. Ok Om take a deep breath jo bhi hoga dekha jayega. Zyada se zyada director say its not good so I will improve that's it.

(Om hears knock on the door two time)

O:Yeah coming

I opened the door and saw a short girl looking something on her right and patting my chest without knowing I opened the door.

Nobody's POV

Gauri was nervous and nobody is opening she was looking on side searching other room numbers. She dint notice Om opened the door and knock on his chest. Gauri frowns feeling weird and trace her hand on Om without looking.Om was about to say something but stopped when Gauri rest her hand on his right cheek and feeling pricky she look wide eye and look at Om. Om looks at Gauri lost in her touch and looks at her hand on his cheeks.

Gauri whispers Dev'. Om looks at her. Gauri realizing take her hand back.Om become little disappointed due to the sudden loss of contact

G: Sorry sir ji vo

Om came out of his trance and rubs his eyebrow with a finger

O:Kya hua

G: Vo vo (mann mein sanka lag gayi lanka I forgot what dandi bhaiya told me, what was ready)

O: Bolo

G: Director sir has told something is ready for you so come

O: Ready for me?

Om frowns,realize and chuckles

O:You mean shot is ready

G:Haan vahi

O:Ok I will come now

G:Ji

Gauri goes

Om: Why did I feel special when he caressed my cheek. Is that what mentioned in the script.One minute what I am thinking. That was accident ok, Stop thinking too much,but she looked cute and pretty. Om stop blabbering,shot is ready

Om goes to the set.

Gauri: (This is the set of the serial I and richa used to watch. I touched Dev's cheek. Pagal gauri u should be careful they all are big people.)

Gauri see Room 40 and knock it. The door opens and Svetlana comes out

Sw:Yes

Gauri get little afraid seeing her.Why not ? she is the most cruel and wicked women she ever saw. Always hurting poor savitri. Richa has told her real name is Sultana.

G:Vo vo

S:Good morning

Gauri get afraid assuming Svetlana will be rude in real life too

G:Sul sultana madamji

Svetlana frowns and chuckles

S:Eventhough I look like one, the name is Svetlana sweet heart

G:Swe swot

S:Never mind

G:Vo sot ready hein

S:Sot? U mean shot

G:Haan vahi toh kaha sot

S:Shot

G:Sot

Svetlana smiles:Never mind I ll come after touch up

G:Ji

S:Listen

Gauri looks at Svetlana

S:Are you new recruitment?

G:Recru kaa

S:I meant is this your first day here

G:Haan,

Gauri get tensed

G:What happened did I do anything wrong,I am sorry, Its my first day na please don't complain

S:Relax sweet heart. I just asked as I haven't seen you before

G:Acha

S:Why are you so tensed seeing me

G:vo I am little afraid of u

S:Hmmm seems like u watch the serial

Gauri nods

S: Whats your name

G:Ji gauri

S: Acha naam hein, you go I ll come in 2 minutes

Gauri:Ji thanku

S smiles: Why are you thanking I should thank you for informing, thank u

Gauri nods and goes to the next room

S: "Thanku how cute

Svetlana smiles and closes the door.

G: (Seems like she is good, now next room no: 42.)

She knocks the door.Ridhima opens the door and frowns at Gauri

R:What is it

Gauri look and smiles seeing the heroine of the serial savitri who made her and richa cry many times.

Ridhima snap at Gauri

R:What

G:Vo director is calling

R:My make up is not over tell him to wait for 5 minutes

Gauri frowns seeing her indifferent behaviour

G:Tell him to wait?

R:Yeah if u understood what I said why are you repeating, naye ho yahan

Gauri nodded

R:No wonder, now don't irritate me when I m done I will come myself, you may go

Ridhima shut the door on her face, gauri jerks due to sudden action.

Gauri: (She is so different from the serial,I felt sultana madamji would react like that but here savitri)

Just then someone tap her shoulder,Gauri turns back to look

"Its ok ridhima maam is little rude , u r new right u will get used to it come

Gauri goes with the girl.

B:By the way my name is bhavya and you

G:Gauri, you are also working under dandi bhaiya

B:Yeah its been a month now in the set

G:What are our jobs

B:Nothing in particular what all Dandi say we need to do

G:You call your boss by name?

Gauri ask looking wide eye

B:Vo I mean dandi sir, come there will be some work in the set.

Gauri nodded and walked with bhavya

Om was reading his script once more sitting on the set. Gauri comes to Dandi.Om looks at her

D:Kya hua

G:vo I told ridhima madam that director is calling she said she will be ready in five minutes and come, Other two had come na,I tld ridhima madam to come

Dandi keep her hand on gauris shoulder.Om looks at them

D:Relax sister, you did perfect. Don't worry

Gauri nodded

D:Did u have breakfast

G:Yes

D:Ok then you

Dandi see bhavya going and stop her

D:Bhavyaji

Bhavya stare at Dandi

D:Mera matlab hein bhavya this is the new girl I told yesterday

B:yeah I met her

D: Ok take her with you and give flowers to put during that romantic scene.

B:Ok, come gauri

Gauri goes with bhavya.Dandi went near Omkara and was checking everything,Out of curiosity.Om looks at the paper and ask

O: Dandi

D: Yes sir

O: Who is that girl whom you send to call me?

D: What happened sir did she do something?

Omkara remembers her holding his cheek and say lost

O:Haan(coming out of trance) I mean no I just asked

D:Sir its her first day if there is some mistake please forgive

O: No no, I was just asking, you know her before?

D:Yes sir, she is my cousin's best friend.

O:Ohh acha, her name

Just then the director call dandi

O: (was close to know her name, what had happened to you Om why you are so curious about her)

Svetlana come and sit beside Om

S: Hey

Om smiles.

Om: Looking pretty as always

Svetlana smiles

S: Ready for the shot

O:Yeah was just looking

S:Aaj bhi savitriji late hein

Om rolled his eyes: yeah

Svetlana chuckles: Relax

O:Hmmm, Where is Rudy

S:Don't know I think he has shot only afternoon so

O:Ohhh

Om again looks at Gauri frowning when bhavya give flower to

her and explain what to do.Svetlana looks in the direction and see Om observing gauri

S:What are you looking

O:Huh, nothing I was just looking the new girl

S:Kaun gauri, I liked her she is very sweet

O: Her name is gauri?

S:Yeah, kyun it's a nice name right

O:Yeah ofcourse I was just

Ridhima comes to Om

Ri:Hey how is everything going, ready for the shoot

O:Kab se

Svetlana chuckles

Director says to come for the shoot.

Svetlana was standing beside gauri on the left side as the romantic scene was shooting.

S:Hey

Gauri smiles.

S:Can I also put flower?

G:Ji?

S:Please na, give some

Gauri frowns and give some flower to her also. She takes it and goes to opposite side to Bhavya saying hi. She stands their with bhavya.

Director say action Om comes to Ridhima , she goes to touch Om's right cheek.

O:Nahi

Ridhima frowns and takes her hand back.Director say cut

Director:Kya hua Om

O:Vo u touch me on left cheek not on the right cheek

Ri:Why?Whats the problem with right one

O:Vo

Om rubs his eyebrow and look at gauri who was keeping the flower back

Ri:What

Om:I am comfortable with left only

Ri:Whatever

Director say action and Ridhima touches his left cheek. Gauri put flowers on them, Om turns his head lightly to look Ridhimas hand, but instead of that he looks at Gauri putting flowers.Svetlana sees this suspiciously

S: (I think his vision is somewhere else, hmmm.)

Svetlana looks and see Om observing gauri

S:Kya mere observation sahi hein?

B:Kya observation

S:Kuch nahi

B:Arre go its your entry

S:Yeah yeah going

Svetlana comes and shout

S:WHAT THE HELL IS HAPPENING,YOU MADE A MESS HERE

Om comes out of his trance and look at Ridhima. Gauri too get afraid due to the sudden shout.Bhavya calls gauri to come to her.Gauri carefully go other side.

Gauri sighs

G:I got afraid due to the sudden scream

Bhavya chuckles

Svetlana tells her dialog ridhima too, Om was busy observing our chiraiyya standing behind Ridhima. He escaped as he doesn't have any dialog, it's just he has to observe Ridhima but he was observing gauri.

Director say cut. Still Om was looking Gauri

Svetlana waves in front of Om. Om blinks and looks at Svetlana

S: The scene is over stop staring

O:I was just

The director comes to Om

Director: Wow Om you made the romantic scene perfect in first shot for the first time, good job

Om: Really?

Director: Yeah

Om smiles.After the shoot Om goes to his room

Om: (What the hell is happening, why am I getting attracted to her, Oh God it's the first time I m seeing her and why am I feeling like this, I dint even allow ridhima to touch my cheek as she touched there.)

"O

Om turns and sees Rudy

Rudy: Whats up

O: Kuch nahi. Lunch break, did u have lunch?

R: Yeah

O: ok I will have and come

R:Yeah I am also going to get ready.

O: See you

Rudra goes to his room.

Gauri goes to Svetlana's room with juice.Gauri knocks

S:Come in

Gauri opens the door. Svetlana smiles seeing gauri

S:Arre tum aao aao

G:Vo madamji

S:Arre don't call me madam,call me Svetlana

G: I m sorry

S:Why

G:I cannot pronounce your name, vo kya hein na, I m not that educated I m just 10th pass that too hindi medium, that's y I was calling you sultana,madamji

S:Toh call me sultana I don't mind, unique name

Svetlana winks

Gauri looks at her wide eye

G:Your juice.

S:did u have lunch

Gauri nods no

S: Come we will have together, my mom na kept plenty of food,chalo

G:No no you have I will have from there dandi bhaiya told there will be lunch served

S:Arre eat with me na, vaise bhi I feel bad u r afraid of me,come

Svetlana make gauri sit and serve her food

G hesitate

S: Arre eat na, u dint like it?

G:No no I am eating

Gauri eat with tears

S:Arre why are you crying is it spicy

G:No its just after a long time someone is caring for me so I

Gauri wipe her tears.

Svetlana smiles.

S: Toh do one thing we will eat lunch together every day what say, toh friends?

G:Friends? with you?

S:Yeah, why? u think I m cruel so u don't want to be friend with me

G:No no sultanaji i mean you are a very big artist and I am

S:So what, friends toh ban sakte hein na, even bhavya is my friend. Friends?

Gauri smiles and nods.

G:You are so nice

S:Tum bhi, but you talk less

Gauri smiles thinking how once she was chirpy girl, her mother always scolds her, for one minute give rest to your mouth, but destiny even change people.

G:I will go bhavya will be searching for me

S: Ok , come for calling for shoot, u r lucky for me

G: Ji?mein?

S: Haan, director told that was my best shot

G: You think I am good omen for you

S: Haan y

G: Nothing.

Gauri goes

S:Poor girl, I think she is little sad for something

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Posted: 7 years ago
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I just loved it... Imagining a good svetlana was fun...Om is feeling attracted to her from very first meeting .. really excited for upcoming updates ... update soon and please do dm too...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing prologue
Please continue soon
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This was super fun to read...Good job😊😊
So excited to see swetlana enacting a character that actually likes and cares for gauri👏👏👏

Ridhima as always😡😡😡

update soon
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I love this
THis svetlana is a treat... positive and caring...
Waitng for the next update
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G goes to call Rudy for shoot.G knocks the door.R excited

Ru: Why are u late today darling.

Ru smirks and opens the door after opening the buttons of his shirt.

Ru:Hi sweet (realizing its gauri) heart

G look wide eye at Rudra.To her he is Viren, the brother in law who is sweet but silent.

Ru:Yes?

Ru looks and button up his shirt

G:Director sir is calling you

Ru:Sheher mein naya maal aaya hein

G:ji?

Ru:kuch nahi, y u came?Mirchi madam kahan hein

G:Mirchi madam?

Ru:Yeah usually she come to call me, arre the one with cat eyes.

G:Bhavya?

Ru:Ohhh her name is bhavya, ok tell her to come and call me

G look wide eye

Ru:Please na, tell her not to keep me waiting

G nods and go

G goes to bhavya who was busy watching something from window.G taps Bhavyas shoulder.B turns back

B:Kya hua

G:Vo Viren told u should go and call him?

B:Viren?

G nods

B:U mean that dumbbell duffer

G:He is actor in the set , u cannot call him like dat

B rolls her eyes

B:I wont go to call him

G:But he told he will not come unless u call him

B: God he is getting on my nerves.

B goes to Ru's room.

B:What sin did I do in previous birth that you are giving me this torture, now he will come shirtless, besharam insaan

Ru opens the door and smirks

Ru:U came, y were u so late. I was waiting for u

B:shot is ready come

B turns to go

Ru:So much anger, is dat coz I came late today.

B get angry and turns and points finger at Ru

B:Listen I have told u several times don't try to flirt with me, Its my mistake that I told u to button up your shirt once. If your flirting is over then come they all are waiting for u

Ru:U call an actor like this for shoot?pyar se bulao

B:I know only this way to call

Dandi come there and see B and Ru

D:Not again.

D turns to go

Ru:Arre dandi

D closes his eyes and turns

Ru:Teach your assistant how to behave, she is just a help and her attitude is huh,tell her to respect me else she will be out from here.

B:Respect?It should be earned not asked . huh

Ru:see how she is back answering?

D:Bhavya madam please

Ru:Why are u calling her madam, she is working under you

D:Vo

B goes from there

Ru:Ohh hello kahan chali, I m not over

Ru smiles seeing her leave

D:Sir ji why u always irritate her

Ru:She look damn pretty in anger,isliye. I don't get the mood to act without irritating her, usse nikalna mat ok. A help with arrogance and attitude, I love it

D nods.Ru pats his shoulder and go.

After some days gauri get close to bhavya and Svetlana. She is little nervous to talk to the actors and ridhima.Dandi had given a 1bhk flat for her to live.Swetlana had given her two wheeler to ride as she needs it.Om still glare her whenever she is beside him but is in no mood to accept it.

Gauri Bhavya was going to call for shoot. G smiles hearing B's talk

B: see now, again that dumbbell duffer will flirt, he just don't get tired, I just hate him.listen I will call omkara too ok. U call ridhima and Svetlana

G nods

G goes to call Svetlana.G knocks the door

Svetlana comes out smiling

S: How am I looking

G: you come like this for shoot?

S: Why, is it not good?

G: I mean they are setting up a big fan, seems like there will be wind na, so u will have disturbance if u let your hair loose

S looks at G

G:No no I just told, u come like this only

S:Actually u r right, I dint think like that, it's too irritating if hair fall on face I will tie and come.

S goes come back, pats on G's cheek

S:You are a darling

S goes .G smiles.

Om hears knock on the door,Om smiles thinking its Gauri

O:She is late today.

Om look in the mirror adjust his hair and open the door and get little sad seeing Bhavya

B:Shot is ready

Om nods.B goes

O:Why dint she come to call, didn't she come today

Om goes to the set with loose hair and get irritated due to the wind but give his shot against Svetlana. Director say cut.

O:You are very clever, tied your hair and dint bother to tell me, so bad

S:actually I also forgot, gauri reminded me.

O:Gauri?She came today?

S:Yeah

O:Then why dint she come

S:huh

O:Nothing.

O comes after the shoot and see a help

O:Listen send gauri to my room,ok

Help:Yes sir

G goes to O's room tensed.

G:what did I do that he is calling, I haven't even seen him today

G knocks on the door

O:Come in

G opens the door and get in

G:U you called me sir ji

O was sitting. O looks at G.

O:Why dint u tell me to tie my hair, is the tip only for svetlana

G:Ji?

O:Why dint u come to call me for shoot

G:Vo bha bhavya told she will call so.

O gets up suddenly and G moves back getting afraid

O:I don't want to hear any explanation, from now on u should come to call me for shoot is that clear

G:But why I

O moves close to G. G moves back and hit the wall

O:Don't question just obey.

G closes her eyes remembering some visuals

(G:Ajay ji lekin kyun

Aj:Your mother dint teach you that , don't question your husband just obey. Seems like I should teach you everything.

Ajay keeps her hand in hot tava,G screams in pain

Aj:Will u question me ever

G nods no

)

O notices G getting restless and nodding her head in no. O in soft voice.

O:Gauri

G:no no please don't do it, I will not question you ever, please its hurting

O:Gauri gauri

G:Please

O shook G from shoulder

O:Gauri

G opens her eyes and see O.O look worried

O:What happened

G wipes her tears and look the surrounding and nods her head and goes.O hits his hand on the wall

O:Damn it, I scared her.

G runs wiping her tears and bumps into Svetlana

S:Easy sweetie.

S looks and see G worried

S:Gauri what happened,G nods no crying.

S:Come

S takes G to her room

S:Kisine kuch kaha kya,uss ridz ne kuch kaha

G nods no

S:Then what happened

G :Kuch nahi

S:Dekho u shud not hide anything from your friend so tell me

G:nothing its just I

G wipe her tears

G: I m ok

S:But what happened

G:Lets have lunch come

G smiles and hugs S.

S frowns and hugs her back.

At night

O remembers Gauri getting scared.

O:But why was she telling its hurting I dint even touch her, is there something else? What had happened to me,why I got angry when she dint come to call me.God this feeling is getting strong day by day.i should say sorry to her tomorrow.

Next day morning.

Gauri nervously goes to O's room and see the door slightly opened.Gauri knocks the door,but no answer

G:Sir ji

G opens the door slowly and get wide eye seeing Om standing on the couch.

O :Sh sh

O looks and see Gauri and look worried

G:Ky kya hua sir ji

O:Vo vo there is a rat here

G:Hein?

O nods:Yeah

G:Where

G looks here and there.

O: I don't know it was running here and there

G:you are afraid of rats?

O pouts and nods.Just then rat runs and Om shouts

O:AAA see see its coming near me, sh sh go from here security, dandi somebody help

G look wide eye seeing Om's fear and remembers in serial he fighting with men for heroine

G smiles and laughs seeing Om's panic

O hearing gauri laughing and get angry

O:You

But he stopped being mesmerized seeing her laugh.

G laughing:The hero who fight with hundred people is afraid of a small rat.

O:Haan so what, I can even fight with a lion but rat no. stop laughing and make it leave

G throws a bottle at it and it run outside the room.

G:Its gone

O:Pa pakka

G:Ji.

Gauri chuckles.

O:Y r u grinning?

G:No I was just

Gauri goes to keep the bottle beside the couch but she get tangled on her dupatta and fall on Om.Om fall on the couch.They both get lost in each others eyes.Om's both hand on her shoulders and hers on his chest.

G:vo I I am

O: What happened ab hasi nahi aa rahi huh

G:huh vo hum

G tries to go but Om pulls her back.G look wide eye at O

O: Don't say it to anyone, ok

G looks at Om without blinking

O:will you?

G nods no

O:Good

G tries to go again but Om again pull her back,G again look wide eye

O:Gauri

G:J ji

O:I m sorry

G:Huh?

O:vo I was rude yesterday, I dint want to scare you but

G:Its ok

O:I scared you right?

G:no no its not because of you.

O:Then

G:Vo

Rudra enter without knocking

Ru:Om do you have the hair gel

They both come out of the trance and gets up seeing Rudra,

Ru:Did I disturb something?

Gauri make her hair right and leave from there.Ru smirks seeing Gauri running.

O too look everywhere but Rudy

Ru:What happened

O:Huh nothing?

Ru:That girl

O:Yeah she is gauri

Ru:Let it be, what were u doing in the couch? So u found your soulmate?

O:What?no no its not like that she just fell down on me and its nothing

Ru:Hmmm,give me your gel

O:Haan

O gives it to Ru.

Gauri comes back to the set and was arranging the kitchen for the shoot.Gauri smiles remembering Om's panic. Svetlana comes and taps her

S:Oh my God, I cant believe it,you are smiling alone?Hmmm what happened let me also hear

G:Nothing sultanaji its just

S:Pakka?

Gauri nods.

S:I have brought something for you

G:For me?

S:Hmm hmm

Svetlana gives her a brochure

G:This?

S: Night classes for your higher studies. Class starts from tomorrow

G:But the fees

S:That all I paid, u have to just study and score nice marks

G get teary eyed.S roll her eyes

S:Not again,I do it to see my cutie pie smile not to cry

S pulls G's cheek

G smiles and nods

G:You are doing this much for me, how will I repay

S:Repay? Make your bareily spl ladoo and bring tomorrow

G chuckles.

S:Come on you are a family, itna toh kar hi sakti hoon for u

G:Aap bahut ache hein sultanaji

S:Din mein sau baar yeh bolke takti nahi ho tum

G:Apko ek aur baat bataye

S:Haan

G:Pehle na hum savitri ke fan the

S:U mean ridhima

G nods:Par ab

S:Ab?

G:Hum apke no:1 fan hein

S:Awww dats so sweet of u

S hugs G

S:Acha suno today bring scooty to my home before you go to home,my neighbor needed it

G:Ji

S: Ok I am going time for shoot

G nods

G see O walking and controls her laughter. Om sees it and comes behind G.G doensnt notice it

O:you dint stop laughing still.

G stiffens hearing Om's voice as his breathe fans her neck. Om sees her reaction

O:Kya hua

G nods nothing and turns to Om

O:It was not that funny to laugh again and again

G:Laugh? I laughed

O:Then what were you doing seeing me

G getting teary eyed

G:I laughed?

Om frowns

O: Ab why are you crying

G:Nothing I

Gauri wipe her tears

O:Seems like I m making you cry always

O turns to go sad

G:no its not bcoz of u, its just that its been long time I have laughed like this

O:huh?

G:U made me laugh sir ji, thank you, I

O comes close to Gauri

O:But why is it like that

G:Vo

Ridz come and see O G

Ri:What are u doing here om,come for shoot

O:Yeah

O looks at G and go with Ridz

G: (what did I do, why was I going to share with him my personal matter. Why was I feeling goosebumps when he was near me.I m thinking too much?)

Evening

Om was stomping the tyre as it got punctured

O:ab how will I reach home before dadi go.

Om tries to hire a taxi but it will take time. Gauri comes out and takes her scooty, she see Om standing restless

G:Kya hua sir ji

Om looks at Gauri and show the tyre.

G:Ohhh tyre puncture

Om nods and pouts.

G: Hmmm ok bye sir

Gauri wears her helmet.Om looks at her.

O:Hey

Gauri looks at Om

O:Will u drop me to my home please

G:Hum? Vo bhi in scooter how can I

O:Please , dekho my dadi is going to haridvar today 8 pm, I wanted to reach before she leaves, so please

G: But how will u sit in a two wheeler

O:Arre I will adjust

G:But

O:Please

O show puppy face

G nods

Om smiles and side hugs gauri happily

O:Thank you

Gauri look shock

O:Sorry vo out of excitement

Gauri nods

Gauri gives him helmet

O:Should I wear it, my hair will get spoiled

G:You have to wear. Ek toh its rule, and second if u sit without helmet na, everyone will see you and if they take photo with me, no no I cant take risk

Om: Risk?What risk

G:I dont want my photo to come with u?

O:Excuse me?

G:No I meant I don't want anyone to see my pic

O:Why is it so?

G:I think you are getting late right?

O:Yeah

Om wears helmet and sit with gauri.

G:Vo ap apke ghar kahan hein

O:Oberoi mansion

G:Vo kahan hein?

O look wide eye

O:U don't know oberoi mansion?

G nods no

O:Are u serious, Mumbai ke bache tak jaante hein and u don't know

G:I am new in Mumbai only 3 weeks sirji

O:fine I ll direct you

Gauri starts the scooty.

It drizzles .

O:Its raining

G:Yeahh

G puts the glass of her helmet and drive

Om looks at G's shoulder and see a drop of water in her shoulder. Om gulps as he feel the urge of touching it. He unknowingly touch the drop with his fingers.Gauri startles and look from side.Om acting ignorant look to other side keeping his hands on her shoulders.

They reach the mansion

O:Stop here this is my home

Gauri stops and look wide eye seeing the home

O:Do u want to come in?

G nods no

O:Ok cool then,thanks for the ride

Gauri nods

O:why you always nod ur head without talking

G nods her head nothing

O:Again?

G look confused what to do

O:Bye

O goes with the helmet.

G sits in the scooty and she get call from swetlana

G:Haan ji

S:Kahan ho tum, yaad hein na scooty laana hein

G:Haan hum bas aa hi rahe the sultanaji

S:Ok

G sits put the helmet and remembers

G:Arre he went with the helmet inside, now what to do


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Posted: 7 years ago
#7

SHOT 1B


Gauri sighs and looks through the gate

Khanna comes to Gauri

Kh:yes maam what can I do for you.

G:Vo sir ji took my helmet and went?

Kh:Sir ji?

G:Omkara Sir

Kh:Omkara Sir in your scooty?

Gauri nods and a security assures she is telling right.Khanna nods and let her in.

Kh:you go to mansion I ll inform.

Gauri nods and look in wonder at the mansion

G:Is it a home or a palace?

Gauri enters the hall and see Anika coming and shivaay come behind and turns Anika

Sh:Cant u understand what I say,its not necessary to disobey everything I say, u r not well go and rest

A:I m fine shivaay

Shi:What fine? U are looking so tired, I think I should call the doctor

A:No no I m fine, fever was 3 days before shivaay, I m alright now

Gauri remembers

(

Gauri was having high fever and was lying down.Ajay comes and see this

Aj:GAURI

G gets afraid and gets up.

Aj:What is this, why are u lying down now, how much work is there in home, whom do u think will do it

G: I am not well, I m having fever

Aj:Ohh fever? From when?

G:From morning, I feel weak

Aj:Its all your reasons to be lazy, go and wash my clothes. And clean the vessels

G:I I ll do it later

Aj:Later? I said now

Gauri:Ajay ji I

Aj forcefully make her get up and brings a hack of clothes and throw it to her. Gauri feel dizzy

G:Ajay ji I

Aj:I said do it now?

Aj splashes a bucket full of water to Gauri and hold her tight, Aj:else get ready for punishment.

G:No no I ll do it

Gauri wash the clothes )

Shivaay get khannas call and he cuts it

Shi:What fine u come with me

A:No I m

Shivaay lift anika and go.Gauri watches it with teary eyes

Some one tap her shoulder.Gauri wipe her tears , turns back and see Pinky

P:Who are you beti?

G:Vo I

P:What happened why are u sweating,are u not well?

Gauri wipes her forehead with her dupatta and nods her head.

P:Come

P makes her sit in the couch and give her water

P:Drink it

Gauri drink it and sigh

P: Kisse milna aaye ho

G:Vo sirji

Khanna comes

Khanna: Pinky Maam she came to meet omkara baba,I called shivaay sir but he cut the call

P:Offo khanna,if she come to meet omkara then u shud call omkara not shivaay, anika is saying right you are shivaays wife only, always calling him, now go

Khanna:Ys maam

Kh goes

P:U should have told na beti, I will call Om

G nods

Pinky smiles and caress her cheek and tell the servant to give gauri something to eat,Gauri stands up

G:No no madamji I don't want anything

P:Aise kaise, u sit

G sits,P goes.

Gauri looks at the mobile.

G:Its 7 30 when will sir ji come and when will I go

Just then Tej and Shakti comes.

Shakti:Thank God we reached now ,else maa would have scold us

Gauri stands up seeing tej and Shakti

They both look at Gauri

Tej: Arre sit sit, who are you beti

Gauri: I vo I am gauri

Shakti:Arre sit na

Gauri:No no its ok I will

Tej:Aise kaise its ok sit

G:How can I sit in front of you

Shakti:Why

G:Vo

Gauri remembers

(Ajay: You don't even know that cultured women don't sit in front of men, they just stand in a corner.)

Tej make her sit,Gauri comes out of the trance

Tej:Why are u scared?Did someone tell u anything

G:No no

Shakti:Ok so why u came?

G:To see omkara sir

Tej:Ohh ok, did no one in the home see u

G: vo madamji has went to call him

Shakti:Which madam

G remembers khanna telling her name

G:Pi pinky, pinky madam

Shakti:Ok ok

T:Are you working with Omkara?

G look confused what to say and nods

Shakti:Ohh u also act?

G:No no I m help in the set?

T:Help? Means

G:I do whatever work told, I give lunch to people, I call them when sot is ready

Tej:Sot?U mean shot

G:Ji sot

Tej smiles and nods. The servant comes with the snacks and tea

Gauri stand up

T: arre y u stand up all time ,sit

G sits

T: Drink the tea

G: No no sir ji I don't want

Shakti:Aise kaise u have come to our home first time and don't drink tea, I ll make it for u

Shakti pour the black tea and milk. Gauri look him with teary eyes and remember her father.

Shakti: How much sugar

G:huh

Shakti: Sugar? 1 teaspoon?

G nods.Shakti gives tea to G.G takes the tea

Shakti:What happened y r u crying.

Tej and Shakti sit next to gauri nervous when she cries

T:Did we do something wrong,

Gauri nods no

Shakti:Then

G:Vo pa papa ki yaad aa gaye

G wipes her tears

Shakti:Papa? Where is your papa

G:He died when I was 10.

G looks down and say.Shakti and Tej get sad hearing it.

Shakti keep his hand on her head

Shakti:Its ok u can consider me your father

G look wide eye at Shakti

Shakti nods.

T:not one but two fathers

Gauri looks at Tej too

T:Now eat

Tej take ladoo and give

Shakti:What are you doing bhai,sweet with chai no no

Shakti take pakoda and try to feed her

Shakti:eat it beta

G:No no sir ji I don't want

T:See she only want laddoo

G looks at tej and tej tried to feed her

G:I don't want anything

Shakti:good girls don't say no to fathers,open your mouth

Gauri opens her mouth and Shakti feed her

Shakti:Very good

T:My turn

Tej give her laddoo,Gauri have it too

O:Who has come to meet me now?All know na no I dnt like visitors in home for professional purpose

Om comes down and see them both competing with each other to feed gauri,Om look wide eye at the scene

O:Gauri

Om's eyes shine seeing her

Om:Guys whats happeing here,

Gauri gets up seeing Om

Shakti:What Om let her eat peacefully, y u scared her

O:Peacefully?Is this the way of eating peacefully, u r suffocating her by feeding

Tej Shakti look each other and nod.Pinky comes

P:What happened

O:See choti maa, dey both were feeding gauri forcefully

Pinky stares at them both

Tej Shakti shook their head and point one another.

G:no no I m fine they were just trying to feed

P:You both go and change

Tej Shakti nods

Shakti:Come often beti

G nods and bends down to take blessing from both,They hold her from bending

Tej:Stay happy and don't be scared

G nods

They both go.Om looks at her

O:I m sorry they both

G:they are really nice.

O:Why u came

G: u dint give me the helmet

O:Helmet? U came to take the helmet

Gauri nods

O: I would have brought it tomorrow

G:I need it today sultanaji need it

O:Sultana?

G:Sultana madamji your co actor

O: Who

G:Ka kavitha

O:Kavitha is swetlana,

G:Dats what I told sultana

Om laughs

O:Ok you drink the tea I ll come now

Gauri standing take the tea and drink little.

G: (These people are so nice, dat girl is so lucky to get such in laws)

O:Gauri

G turns and the tea fall on Om's T shirt

O:Ohh damn

G cups her mouth

Om wiping his shirt ask Gauri

O:Are u ok?

G:I m I m sorry I dint do it intentionally

{

G mistakenly pour water on Ajay

G:I m sorry its by mistake

Aj:Mistake, u always do mistake,

Ajay sees hot water in the kitchen and pour it on gauris hand, gauri scream in pain

}

G: Please don't punish me

Gauri cries in fear

O:Punish?for what

Gauri cries

G:I ruined your shirt

Om cups her face and wipes her tears

O:Arre pagli, its ok, its just a shirt who will punish for that?

G:He used to

O:Who

G nods and hug Om.Om reciprocates the hug and cares her back.

G:Aap bahut ache hein

Om smiles

O: acha, for not scolding u? then yesterday I was bad right I scolded u

G:No u dint scold it was I who

Gauri looks at Om and realize their position,Om looks at Gauri,Gauri leaves Om.

G:Sorry vo,

Gauri get a call

G: I I need to go

Gauri take the helmet and go

Om stand there seeing gauri leave.Pinky comes and taps Om's shoulder

Om looks at Pinky

P:Kya ho raha tha yahan

O:No Nothing

P:Nothing? hug and all in home huh

O:Vo she was scared so I ,dats it

P:Ohhh like in serials right, hero console heroine

O:Aap bhi na, vo I ll go and see dadi

Pinky nods ,Om goes

P:Hmmm that girl is nice, thank God Om likes her not that heroine ridhima,so many gossips that om loves ridhima I got scared, but dis girl is nice, bas little scared of something. Seems like I should tell jhetaniji not to worry about Om's marriage

Pinky smiles mischievously.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#8
superb...
waiting for next.. update soon
plz next part k liye jyada wait mat krana
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Posted: 7 years ago
#9
So nice yaar, waiting for next part. Jaldi post karo, ok?
&. Do send the pm...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#10
Superb update
Loved it
Waiting for next

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