MG SS My Love Story/Thread 2 Link on Page 1 - Page 70

Created

Last reply

Replies

727

Views

35.1k

Users

82

Likes

2.1k

Frequent Posters

pixelflower620 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

Hoo buddy after ages...

Tell me one thing is it the potion that made maan confess r he truly said her his heart...
He did have feelings for geet..Don't he...
Ok so not only amrita prince maan and geet both knew they r from future...
If aryan was not the real villain than who is it buddy...
Who the watching one..
Was aryan being plotted by him too
As amrita said leave the revenge what does that mean..
Seems like he wasn't really in love with geet ..Aryan wants to hurt someone either maan r geet...
I love the way ghosty got stomped buddy
Thanks for updating



Hehe buddy updating you will know 😆
pixelflower620 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

eagerly awaiting update





Updating 😃
pixelflower620 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor

Lovely update so princess Geet knew about future Geet how? And she didn't even replied this to Maan... You making me more confuse. To potion Maan pe gira or wo ab Geet ki taraf attract ho raha hai. So what he said is his actual thoughts or forced thoughts because of the effect of that potion. I don't know right now I am confused again. All four danced. And FG sach me kharab dancer hai... Poor Ghosty 😆

LOVE the update buddy...
Thanks for pm



Hehe buddy let me think ab jo samajh aaya likh diya hehe😆
pixelflower620 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sanam1234u

very nice story...

geet is reborn but maan is in a time loop...

aryan is doing all this but then who is the 3r person which is following them...??????😲

and all characters in past recognised maneet...😃

now waiting for next part...



Thank u😊😊😃
pixelflower620 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 7 years ago




Thank you for your support😃




Happy belated Birthday to Sanju buddy 😃😃🥳






Part 16



Aftermath







"The one I love is you...Geet, He said shocking her. She never thought her dream will be realized one day and she will get the greatest joy of her life ...her feelings being reciprocated by her beloved.








"What...did you just say, She asked to reconfirm what he said just moments ago. "Do you not believe me, He asked. "...But you loved Amrita...and ..., Before she could complete he interrupted her.









"...I'm sorry about my previous behavior ...I had a reason but I really do love you, He repeated to make her believe. It was not that she didn't believed in what he said but just the fear that the dream might end once she would be awake bothered her. She wanted her dream to last forever. "I do trust you, She said.





Ghosty and Geet tried to look for clues and came across a door which was locked. "I can sense something from behind this thing, Geet said. "Me too, He said. "It is where he has locked my Divyansh, They turned to see Amrita standing there. "Someone is coming we must hide, The Ghosty said hearing footsteps. They came back to their room. "It is guarded by strong magic...but there has got to be a way to get in, Ghosty said. "It can only be accessed by Aryan or anyone from his Kingdom, Amrita said.









"Then I can get in if I try, Geet grinned. "How, The other two asked. "Remember I'm his descendant so if anyone from his Kingdom could get in then his descendant should be able to right, She explained. "Wow...I never thought you had brains in there, Ghosty said mockingly patting her head earning him a punch. "You are right, you can but what are you thinking of, Amrita asked. "Wait for few days...I think I'm getting closer to a very important clue, She grinned. They assured Amrita and she went back to her room.




"What are you thinking, Ghosty asked. "Curious, are we, She said. "Yes and tell me what you will do, He asked. "Ever heard of the story of how a magician's life was bound to his parrot ...so we are just going to grab the parrot in this case Aradhna, She grinned.








"Whattt...have you lost it ...really you are his true descendant ...you are trying to kidnap her and make her a pawn how manipulative of you, He said not liking her idea. "So what do you want ...to see yourself getting killed again...if we abide by your great principles trust me you will lose again, She said. "But..., He was still not satisfied with this plan. Geet came forward and held his hands, "Listen Ghosty, there are many things in this world which we may deem wrong but sometimes you have to chose the wrong path to right the previous wrong that is all we are doing. "There will be no difference between him and us then, Ghosty said. "Well we have to take this chance anyway as the wedding is nearing, She said. The Ghosty nodded reluctantly. "Good now let us sleep, we have a mission to accomplish, She said.

The Princess escorted the Prince to his room. He kept muttering incoherent words and kept professing his love for her again and again. She somehow managed to make him lie down but he held her tightly not letting go. "You are leaving me again, He said. "I think you should rest, She said. "Do you hate me, He asked. "I don't hate you My lord... what made you think so, She asked. "You are not staying with me ..., He said. "I..I am, She said. "I really do love you...I agree that initially I had been very impolite towards you but trust me I really started liking you more when I got to know you. It is not an obligatory feeling but a true love which I discovered later...Whatever I felt for Amrita is nothing in comparison to what I feel towards you..I feel happy when I see your smiling face, worried when you are not around...I'm scared that he might hurt you ...so I had to continue behaving rudely with you..I'm sorry for that and..., Before he could say anything further the Princess kissed him shocking him. "I understand and









I'm really happy that my dream has come true ...but what if you forget everything I say to you ...if you are under a spell of some kind which is making you say all this...I don't want you to say sorry for anything ...I just want your love. "Y..You kissed me..., He said. "I..I'm sor.., He did not let her complete kissing her and it turned to a long night...


(Rest Imagine yourself hehe I'm sorry but I'm pathetic with 18+ scenes so ...the pic says it all I hope )😆😆



Next Day, the Princess quietly left the room...She has lived her dream but knew he might not recall anything...so with a heavy heart she left to her room without being noticed though she was noticed by Geet who fumed to see her Granny crying and went back to her room to do the best thing to vent out her anger punch the Ghosty who was quietly sleeping in his bed. "Ahh...what the hell was that for, He yelled at the sudden hit rubbing his jaw.







"You made my Granny cry, you creep you used her and made her cry I will punch you black and blue, She said now pulling his hair. Poor Ghosty was cursing his past self now. "Hey, I'm already dead so go and hit him now why are you hitting me, He said. Geet stopped hitting him thinking he was right. "Alright...but don't think I will let you off that easy..Now come on we have to meet Aradhna, She said bossily. "Don't you think we are forgetting something, He said. "What, She glared. "Like you owing me an apology for this monstrous behavior of yours, He said. "You want to get hit again, She said. "Umm...no, He said getting his answer.

Prince Maan got up looking around for the Princess.. "Where has she gone...did she think I used her...I must find her soon, He said.


Geet and Ghosty reached the village to find Aradhna. She smiled and welcomed them as she was now close to Geet so she didn't suspect them. Aryan saw them entering her house and was shocked to see that they are close to discovering his secrets so he silently waited for them to leave. Geet and Ghosty left after a while and Aryan took that as an opportunity. "What were you doing with them, He asked once he entered her house. "Geet is my friend, she just came to visit and Aryan I don't understand why you want me to hide, Aradhna asked. "I see so you don't trust your own husband now ...it seems like that kid is poisoning you, He said. "No, please it is nothing like that...I..I'm sorry...if you want I will ask her not to visit me, She said. Aryan nodded and left but now Aradhna was curious as to what was he hiding from her that he has asked her to stay in this house...He said he was forced to be betrothed to the Princess and he will tell everyone about her soon but now she had waited long enough.

"He is her husband ...ahh...my poor Granny was surrounded by creeps my grandpa being the head of them all, Geet said frustrated. She found no response from Ghosty only to see him staring at a particular direction ...What are you staring at.., She said turning her head in the same direction and was shocked to see what she found...It was their home ...the Mansion they lived in the current era ...



Prince Maan found the Princess sitting alone in the garden. He approached her with slow steps not wanting to scare her... "You are here My Lord,She said without turning. "Why did you leave, He asked."You were under a spell Sire..,She said. "So you don't trust my words or my love for you, He asked. "You asked me, how did I know of our future selves, She said not answering his question. "You did not answer my question, He said. "You know Sire...I'm the most powerful sorceress that is to be in my Kingdom ...and many Princes desire me to use me as a tool for power...the power to transcend time ...the past, present and the future...that child has got my powers ...she don't know them yet...he is after her..., She said. "You have the power to transcend time..., He was shocked to hear that.









"Yes Sire..I wanted someone who would not desire my powers but me ...and I found you ...I'm happy, She smiled. "And I intend to keep that happiness forever...Thank you for loving me Geet, He smiled.



So here is the next part, this story ends in maximum 4 to 5 parts though I intended 8 more at least but will wrap up in 4 to 5 parts, please do give your honest reviews😃



Precap - Wedding and the Final Showdown
Edited by pixelflower620 - 6 years ago
IMA9167 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 7 years ago
Buddyyy
I lobbb u
Koi hai buddy jisne Wada kiya aur todh Diya
I simply said dub maro
U knew who that devil is moving on
Lovely part and guess long one tooo
Oh my kitna secrets and mysteries hai buddy
Maan Geet found the door where he kept Amrita love captivated
What exactly this aryan creep is buddy
He stalks Geet
Married to Aradhana
Bm Amrita
What this creep wants
Seems like maan Geet knew about some he'...was that he is aryan...but I think no
Geet knew Aradhana was aryan weak thread he panicked seeing Geet Aradhana friendship what exactly was there in the house so he kept Aradhana guarding it
Maan confesses even he remembers his night with Geet but poor ghosty got beaten up by Geet seeing princess Geet cry
Maan Geet Amrita even aryan knew maan Geet are from future
Mansion !? How come the mansion they living in present was there buddy
Nahiii
8 parts karo
Don't rush
deep002 thumbnail
Visit Streak 500 Thumbnail 13th Anniversary Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 7 years ago
awesome update dear, loved it...
jasika08 thumbnail
Visit Streak 1000 Thumbnail Visit Streak 750 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely update
Waiting for next update. . .
metromasti thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
awesome update . prince maan confessed his love to princess geet & they became one . princess was very happy but prince was under spell so she thought he will forget everything so she left his room quietly . she was crying & geet saw her & she was angry . poor ghosty faced her anger 😛 . prince didn't forget their closeness & princess told him she has a special power . that aradhna woman is aryan's wife .
waiting for next
SheenGcian thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Allah Allah always because of past Maan, ghosty becomes the one who bears geet's wrath 😆😆
Poor guy.. lol
All are nice except Aryan.. even his wife is a nice person.. and geet is right she is his weakness...
How come their present mansion is in past 😕
Waiting for next update

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Mridzy

1 years ago

Maaneet NEW SS - Contractually Yours - UPDATE: Part 3 - Page 14 - 3/3

Hello again everyone! Thank you so much for the warm welcome and for reading and loving my OS - Elevator Encounters. Motivated by that, here I...

Expand â–¼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Mahimaan

3 years ago

Geet ff do dil part 7 on page 6

Do dil.....

Expand â–¼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

2 years ago

Tera Hone Laga Hoon #2 Chapter 74 pg 46 Updated 28/07 Tera Hone Laga Hoon #2 Chapter 74 pg 46 Updated 28/07

Chapter 52 Sameera watched as Maan arrived at her house. He hadn’t visited for a couple of days and Aavya had started asking when her new friend...

Expand â–¼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

11 years ago

Priya Fan fiction - Update thread /pg 121-2 aug

hello friends... am not able do pm regularly... so please my all friend follow this thread... i post the link here... so you get link easily of

Expand â–¼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: SillySoni

8 months ago

Winter wedding / Maaneet FF • Chapter 3 page 4 • 2/1/25 Winter wedding / Maaneet FF • Chapter 3 page 4 • 2/1/25

This story is about teenage Maan and Geet who met at a marriage. Whoever is interested in reading pls responds to this post. Ignore if not...

Expand â–¼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".