Akdha ss- Mera Maasoom Patidev -Part 7 /29-MAY-18 - Page 26

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The Jodha- Juilee cold war was quite amusing.

Jalal recounting how he gave up wishing to go to school after being beaten by his Badipapa was painful to read. Fortunately he was homeschooled by his Dadi.

The innocence of Jalal is so endearing.

The Harman-Samira love story started with a pleasant scooty ride but has become unpleasant due to the collision episode.

Gabir and Noor have to come up with a plan fast to get Jalal married to keep the property from being taken away from them.

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Part 7

Mansion..

Gabir was breaking everythings in his room yeah he behaving like psycho person and Noor hearing breaking sound come to their room..

Noor tried to stop him but he pushed her away from him and continuously breaking room items,he messed room totally..

Noor : Gabirji..what happened,why u behave like mad with shouting voice.

Gabir look at Noor face: yes,I am mad .. my dream shattered today ..

Noor making Gabir sat in their bed and sat next with him and handover water to him..

Gabir pushed glass to floor and glass broken into pieces, Noor grabbed his shirt with angry face

Noor : tell me, what happened with hard voice ..

Gabir narrated what happen in office with mad face

Noor got shocked and Gabir continues: now what would we do,within 1 month, Jalal not married to anyone,this whole property goes to Mohammed trust ..we cannot take single rupee amount from this property..

Noor smirked face:hmmm but its good news right why u tensed with calm face

Gabir look at Noor to weird face : now u only behave like mad person. we r going to loose whole property u saying its good for us, which angle u thought its good for our life with angry face

Noor placed her hand in his shoulder : Gabir ji,listen,how many days we were waiting for this property to our own just for us, u r waiting rules the Mohammed empire as owner not any monthly salary employee while now u doing with grinned teeth, we enjoying Jalal s property but we have nothing in our hand own,God give have a chance getting this whole property in our names.

Gabir confused look at Noor and Noor evil smile to Gabir

Noor: arryeah.. Gabir ji this whole property under in our names when its will be happen

Gabir :Now you became mad,after Jalal marriage whole Property under to Jalal and his wife name.if Jalal and his wife only transfer whole property into our names ,is it possible one , No right with mocking tone and Noor raised her eye with evil smirk face.Gabir hit his forhead himself & gave best sheepish smile ..omg Noor u r..

Noor:I have criminal mind,u don't think this is our golden opportunity with evil smirked face.

Gabir doubting look to Noor : Jalal do what I am saying like my pet dog but why his future wife also will do like him with taunting tone

Noor angry with grinned teeth: hmm,u thought I select Bride for Jalal like educated , brave and well knowledge girl who rules this Mohammed empire in future without anyone help.u think I am fool .. what type of girl , I select for Jalal, she not open her mouth infront of me even she did not touch piece of food without asking my permission, she become slave under my foot.i select one more servant of Mohammed mansion in name of bahu rani.

Gabir: Noor ,u r the best then only I am saying everytime that u r my lady jaan ..After property transferred why we need them ( Jalal & his wife) infront of our eyes..

Noor jerk up sofa and angry face to Gabir : because I hate this Mohammed family and Jalal Parents, what they did with me ,I would return to their bahu more than I got by them,I never forgot my insult.. I will show that idiot Jalal parents ,how their son and Daughter in law tortured through my hands with closing her fist tightly.

Gabir : calm down Noor , we already designed hell life to Jalal now one more members being add to that list .. we need celebrate this happiness..

Adham enter and over their conversation long time stand in door step:dad & mom atleast close the door then planning and excute ur master plan ,if some one over heared ur conversation then ur plan will be flop.

Gabir patted Adham cheeks lightly : My son,this mansion is my empire , if anyone against mine , next day they breathe would be stop permanently from their body with smirking face.

Adham: u don't think u r over confident with ur hawk eye ,dad with mocking tone

Noor : Adham,if ur dad not with me , I did not achieve this status in this society . don't underhestimate power of ur dad.

Gabir: nahi jaan , u r my master mind... without ur brain,we did not getting our luxury life and what that Mohammed heir's Jalal deserve it , u cherishing, Adham.forgot it

Noor : why that Mohammed only got their luxury why not mine that question raised my mind long ago then only we r here with evily smirked face

Adham: mom, u said u want that stupid parents suffering seeing his suffer but they already died when Jalal in childhood.

Noor eyes raised as gesture u did not understand and Gabir smirked look to Noor then eyes shift to Adham

Gabir: arrhhh.,my bhai & bhabhji living in heaven na they should watching their child, what their child getting from his own home with sheepish smiling face.

Noor: Adham,call ur uncle

Adham: uncle ..with confused face

Gabir: My brainless son,ur materal uncle living in hoshipur village na.

Adham : haan dad but why I calling him
Noor rolled her eyes :call ur uncle ,tell him, search pure village girl for Jalal , send her photo and her family detail with in one week.clearly mentioned what type of girl , I want bahu rani for my pyaari Jalal beta with evily face.

Adham : yes mom with smirk face

Noor: and don't open marriage matters with Samira until everything finalize with warning tone

Gabir : yes, Adham becareful with ur own sisters, I don't know what curse I got with previous birth,she totally different nature unlike us.

Adham: yeah dad, ur ladli girl , love that idiot Jalal more than me even though she consider Jalal only her brother not mine with grinned teeth.

Noor : their bonding also + point for us, Jalal do anything for Samira,she one of the golden trump card for me ..so don't interfere their bonding..

Adham little shocked & Noor guessed what he thinking.

Noor: why u shocked , u thinking what type of mother am I, play with her own child for money, if I wish anything,I just want otherwise i don't mind to sacrifice my own blood to through fullfil my wish.its not only for money,its was my revenge with Mohammed with spraying her venom

Gabir held her shoulder : he know what we were.. with evil grin.Adham gulped his saliva.dont do any mistake.

One more person also hear their conversation,stand in numb state.

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Park

Jalal showing his back to Jodha sat on bench with grummy face and same way Jodha also sat opposite like him but with angry face. Juile sat in floor and one leg cratching her head,one look to Jalal & then to Jodha , Jalal to Jodha ,Jodha to Jalal with confused face.

Juile got irritate seeing their silent cold war and barking heavy sound through their angry mood.

Jodha angry glare to juile: u shut ur mouth because of u, we both were fight.

Juile signed to Jodha: what I did it with casual look

Jalal: Jodhaji don't blame my juile ,its not her fault , u scold her, u also did mistake with baby stubborn face and juile wining grin to Jodha.

Jodha : acha, I did mistake ,this creature suddenly went to road side ,that was my mistake right and one bike rider tried to hit her that my mistake ,u jump to save ur juile like hero saved his heroine..( Juile look at Jodha like yes I am herione ) that was my mistake, ur hand scratch with rock stone insake of ur stunt because of ur juile ,that was my mistake right.one minute my heart stopped seeing ur stunt that also my mistake.. Jalal tried stop her but she continue while angry glare to him.

Jodha: yeah I shouted this dog for ur wound..that was my mistake right..

Jalal: nahi Jodhaji with pout face and juile did not intentionally na..she hurt because of ur angry words.its not good shouting anyone with angry face

Jodha: now also u thought this dog hurt because of my shout ,but u did not thinking about me , u think only about this dog with angry face

Jalal gulpes his saliva: Jodhaji..she is juile not dog..with slow voice.

Jodha: eh.. no dog with warning tone..

Jalal: juile

Jodha: dog

Jalal: juile

Jodha: dog..

Jalal: juile

Jodha: juile was dog..i hate this ..before she finish..m.shape lip place in her lip, her eyes popped out not only Jodha, juile both eyes ball come out like touch to ground.Jalal remove his lip from her

Jalal: juile

Jodha: yeah juile..with shocked face & whishpering tone

Jalal: see , u also accept..she was juile not yuck dog with huge grinning face.

Juile just faint in floor and Jodha also in same state..

Jodha: why u kissed me in mindly clear.kiss word nahi just peck..without remove her eyes from him

Jalal: stop ur argument with casually said

Jodha: this is way u stop argument with everyone grinning tone

Jalal: nahi Jodhaji, first time I tried with u, its great success with huge happy grin.

Jodha: what..

Jalal: Last week,I watched movie scene same way girl argued with boy,suddenly boy place his lip to her,girl stopped her argument with boy..now I understood..

Jodha: what u understood with meekly tone

Jalal: movie showing everything true one..with sheepish smile

Jodha mindthought: hey bhaghwan how u created him ,he not think about our kiss rather thinking about movie showing everything truth ,time god he watched only kiss scene, he watched some XXX rated mean ,her mind thinking xxx scene with Jalal,chi chi babaji what I am thinking.

Jalal checked his watch : opps Jodhaji..i already late before badipapa coming home..i need to home..bye Jodhaji..juile come..

(what come, poor juile already faint seeing ur kiss scene with Jodha...)

Juile raise her head and gave blank look to Jalal ..

Jalal: uff juile ..come na..juile nod her head & walking behind silently with same face..

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After two day

Mohinder come to mansion and servant welcome him and make sit in hall sofa and inform Noor to mohinder visit in mohammed mansion

Noor come & sat opposite sofa to facing mohinder with one leg cross position infront of him.

Mohinder : Namastey Noor ji.

Noor ignored his wish : suddenly u come to mansion, if any urgent purpose.

Mohinder :yes Noor ji..few days Jalal turned into 25 years old, u know very well, I take caring some Mohammed property

Noor: so..u want that property for in ur name na..with accusing face

Mohinder smiled : I am not a person enjoying other property like their own ,indirectly mocking Noor..

Noor grinned teeth: mohinder ji.

Mohi: Nahi Noor.. I am not mentioning u,my visit main reason,after Jalal 25 th birthday, I need handover this property to Jalal beta hand so I just come inform Jalal guardian..you are Jalal guardian na (mohi stress guardian like this tone remain u r servant of mohammed not owner)

Noor get up from sofa: thank you for reminder ..now u can..showing entrance to mohi..

Mohi smiled meekly and left the place..

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Hospital

Samira & her gang doing routine work in hospital

Samira friend: hey Samira this weekend u bring ur bhai too our outing.

Samira eye brow raise: u mentioning Adham bhai na..he is busy with his Girlfriends.

S.F : No no.. not Adham..u r Jalal bhai with sheepish smile

Samira : don't drag my Jalal bhai in ur fun saying warning tone.

S.F: nahi re..why we do teasing ur bhai..last time u intro ur bhai with us right and he so cute & more handsome with dreamy face

Samira hit her forhead through her stestcope : last time I did big mistake I introduced my bhai to u all and because of ur tease , he did not come out with me anywhere & he not comfortable any girl except me & dadi.

Same time Jalal enjoying Jodha with somewhere, poor Samira trust Jalal more.

S.F : trust me, Samira, we tried close with ur bhai but he ran out that place.we did not teased him.

Samira: No way.. & he is nave & not ur type so don't take my bhai name..

S.f: ok yaar with sad face ,hmm tell me, today u meet ur Dr.hero with teasing tone

Samira irriatate face: he is not my hero,he was villain in my life

S.f: then it more good..nowdays u seeing movie..villian is more handsome than heroes..with teasing tone.Samira hit her forhead left the place & hit to someone

Samira mind thought: oh not again.

Miss u have only work to bang me with little harsh voice.

Samira: No sir..mistakely I did..sorry

U know how to say sorry..Good Miss

Samira: Samira ,Dr.Harman sir with grinned teeth

Harman: Good, u know my name also not bad

Samira: excuse me sir, I have a work

Harman move one side and Samira left

Harman: she is different with little smile face.

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