Akdha ss- Mera Maasoom Patidev -Part 7 /29-MAY-18 - Page 25

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great prologue

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Part 6

Jalal pickup juilee in his arms and juile showing her tongue to Jodha while Jodha mouth open widely.

Jalal: see Jodhaji , she is my juilee..my darling..with smiling face..and look at juilee, as well side hug to Jodha ..she is my Jodhaji.. my best friend

Juile and Jodha fuming hearing my word from Jalal mouth..

Jodha (mind): my juilee , Jalal..even that creatures ur darling with angry glaze to juile (dog)

Juile (mind): my Jodhaji..even she is ur best friend but I am ur best friend..same angry glaze to Jodha..

Jodha Vs juile cold war started through their eyes..

Jalal (mind) with confused look at Jodha and juilee: what happened to them, why they showing their big big eyes while scratching his hairs through his fingers

Jalal: Jodhaji ..

Jodha come out from glaring session: yes Jalal..with little grinning voice

Jalaleet sit near bench of course juilee sit near of Jalal foot as her eyes watching closely with Jodha .

Jalal: how is simar di and baby and di has taken her medicine regularly with excited voice.

Jodha smiled: both r fine and my bhai take care her medicine and health properly

Jalal cute angry face: in ur home no one there except ur bhai

Jodha confused look at Jalal: no , mom , dad in home , Jalal ..

Jalal: then why ur bhai take care simar di ..and doctor said ur bhai stay away from simran di. Why he stay with di with fuming voice but in his angry also clearly visible his concern about simar and baby health .

Jodha remember hospital visit and Jalal ka innocent question as she want bang her head into wall even she admiring his innocence , how much he was pure soul and worried about others even though he do not know anything about simar bhabhi , three days before only he saw her ,now he worried about her and baby ..he so cute without remove her eyes from Jalal while she admiring him.

Jalal shook her arms , Jodha come out from her Jalal fantasy land

Jalal : Jodhaji , why everytime you r in sleeping mode even with out close ur big eyes with chuckling face

Jodha: I am not sleeping ..wait u said , my eyes were big one with o shaped mouth

Juile barked while guesture , Jalal was right (mind): ur eyes was bigger than my eyes .

Jodha eyes lash down to juile side : u shut ur mouth .., her eyes shift to Jalal face , Jalal, really my eyes were big one with pout face.

Jalal cupped her both cheeks through his palm : nahi.. ur eyes so shinny and attractive ..Jodha eyes searching something in his eyes and juile mind thought what happening yaar while Jalal continues , and big also with teasing tone.

Juile grinning look to Jodha , Jalal was laughing and Jodha hit his shoulder playfully.

Jalal held his ears : sorry ...with smiling face.. Jodha stopped .

Jodha: Jalal, tell me about ur family details with little serious tone

Jalal : my family ..with excited face.. me , dadi, Samira , nakul kaka, badimaa, badipapa , Adham bhai and said some of servants names with respect manners .

Juile barked as I am also ur family Jalal.

Jalal hit his forhead : and my juilee darling.. they r my family with innocent face.

Jodha: hmm, say anything about them

Jalal: dadi , she was wonderful lady, if u met her, u also love her and she also loving u as she was loving me with happy face.. and sowamya was baby sister, she so sweet, she only protective me from everyone scold and nakul kaka was elder to me, he such a caring person..

Jodha: Adham with grinning teeth.

Jalal: he was my chota bhai..he was studying college and showing his palm to Jodha .. see my hand paining ..

Jodha caring his palm with worried tone: what happened , why ur hand paining , if anyone did anything with u.

Jalal: nahi Jodhaji ,yesterday I did it Adham bhai ka assignment ..whole day I typed his assignment document that only yesterday I am not came to meet u with pout face.

Jodha (mind ) that idiot made his assignment by my Jalal , how dare he, its my fault , if am not burned his assignment , he did not gave his work assignment to Jalal because of my revenge , Jalal got suffered

Jodha :sorry Jalal with guilty face

Jalal: why u asking sorry for me ..

Jodha : why u did that moron assisgment

Jalal:oh Adham bhai assignment

Jodha: yes , that stupid Adham with irritating face.

Jalal: Jodhaji, I am only doing his every assignment , works everything , u kow Jodhaji, when in my childhood , I asked badipapa, I wish going to school, but badipapa beated me so much after I never shared any wish with badipapa . everyday I am seeing school children, iam also craving going to school with them but I fear thinking badipapa s beat and one day Adham bhai said that I use his books in home but returns , he want as I am doing his homework , everyday my eyes eagerly waiting for Adham bhai return to home , after I finsh his home work , I read his book with help of dadi without knowing badipapa and badimaa..

Jodha stunned hearing his childhood craving and her heart felt his pain , his each word killing her heart and without her sense , tears flowing in her eyes .

Jalal wiped her tears : what happened , Jodhaji, why u crying like my dadimaa ..

Jalal ka touch only Jodha realize , she has tears in her eyes ..

Jodha : nothing Jalal , what about ur parents .

Jalal sad face: when my childhood , my parents died in car accident with moist eyes .

Jodha: sorry Jalal with guility face.. she thought she making remember his parents

Jalal: nahi , Jodhaji why u asking sorry for me, u know they r with me inform of stars.. every night , I am sitting terrace, I am looking my parents in sky ..u know two stars twinkling when ever I shared my happiness and sad to them..so they were with me right with smiling face.

Jodha : u r so cute Jalal.

Jalal: I am not cute Jodhaji with grinned teeth.

Jodha giggled : yes , ur my Mister cutie ...

Jalal jerk up from bench : I am going ,bye ..

Juile eyes sparkling hearing bye word and barking (mind): lets go Jalal , I don't like her ..

Jodha sad face : Jalal, u angry with me ..

Jalal: nahi, why I angry with u.. if badipapa know about my outside visit ..he will beat me, before he coming to home , I go back to mansion then I will escape from badipapa whipping .so tomorrow I will meet u in same place while kiss her forhead and left the place as usual leaving to Jodha in shocking state.

Jodha confused : why he kissed my forehead rather than my cheeks ..her mind got it , he kissed her like Harman kissed her before he left the place even he did it same place when Harman kissed her.. Jodha cheeks changed to little pink in sake of his possessive nature with her.

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Next day

Harman.. while seeing his wrist watch mind: omg today my first day joining to hospital , but my car tyre punctured ..this time, no one cab ,auto not coming in this street..god plz help me .

One scooty coming in same direction of Harman standing , he handle signal to scooty for lift ..

Scooty stopped in side of Harman..

Harman: Ms, plz drop me to city hospital, my car tyre punctured .

Girl cover her face through his dupatta and wore googles in her eyes and girl nod her head ..

Harman smiled : thank u .. he take his things from car and sit back to scooty..

Girl drive to scooty with silent and Harman initate his talk ..

Harman: thank u so much for ur help..i never forgot u in my life time..

Girl not say anything and harman closed his mouth..

Girl enter in city hospital parking area and harman step down from scooty.

Harman seeing his wrist watch : opps ..i need go now..he almost running to inside hospital.

Girls gang in front of girl : Samira, who is he..

Girl remove her dupatta from face , yes she is our sowmanya , our Jalal ka baby sister.

Samira: I don't know who is he...he asked lift ..i dropped him that it .

Girl : don't lie madam..he is ur boyfriend right .

Samira: stop ur rubbish girls.. even I don't know his name also.

Girl: u don't know , let go find his biography ..

Samira: stop girls , now we need go attend patient..we r final year student of MBBS .. don't forgot , we r doctor , we have responsibility ..

Girl : Samira mata , stop ur lecture ..let go inside first otherwise our senior doctor scold us, confirm ..

Samira mind : yes ..he really handsome..

Girls gang doing their work..some time chatting , checkinh patients ..

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Harman is walking in hospital corridor while checking one patients file and girl bumped to his hard chest or he bumped to her soft chest...whatever both bumped with each other..both not see who come infront of them

Harman : oh god, my shirt spoiled ..while rubbing coffee marks from shirt.

Girl : sorry sir..with sweet voice.

Harman: just shut up, u spoiled my shirt , ur eyes were front or back side .

Girl mouth open widely : hello , mister, even its ur fault , u only bumped me ..but u showing ur attitude with me ,

Harman : hello , its ur fault not mine ..stupid girl

Girl : stupid girl ..with fuming face.

Harman: by the way I have no time with ur silly fight and I never want see ur face anymore .. left the place.

Girl shout behind: u stupid , idiots , moron... I hate u..

Samira, stop ur cursing him.

Samira : today morning he said I never forgot u in my life and now he said , I never want see ur face. With angry face.

Girls gang: Samira u trust it or not ..most of hero and heroine , start with fight and end with love..i think ur love sorry also like that wtith teasing tone

Samira irritating face: u shut ur mouth, I never fallen love with that idiots ..my wish also same , I never saw his face anymore .

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Mansion..

Gabir breaking everything in his room while he behave like psycho and pretto hearing breaking sound come to their room..

Noor tried to stop him but he pushed her awasy from him and continuously breaking everythings ..

Noor : Gabir ji..what happened, why u behave like mad with shouting voice.

Gabir look at Noor face: yes , I am mad .. my dream shattered today ..

Noor making sit in their bed and sit next with him and handover water to him..

Noor : now tell me, what happened ..why u behave like hyper .

Gabir narrated what happen in office ..

Noor got shocked : now what will we do..if within 1 month, Jalal not married to anyone , this whole property goes to Mohammed trust ..we cannot take single penny amount from this property..

Part end

Precap : harman and Samira shocked😲😲

Gabir and Noor next plan .😈

(They don't know their plan will be backfired for them only😆)

Akdha and juile combo .😆

Akdha SS- Mera Maasoom Patidev

Awesome update dear

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Res Akka

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Unres akka

Amazing chappy Akka

Nice convo

Loved their fight

Shocking news

Precap is interesting

Update soon Akka

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Thanks for pm akka

Awesome update!!

Nice update
Jo and Julie's fight was hilarious
Ja is so cute, he asked why jo's brother is taking care of his wife 😆
Harman and Samaira had a cute start
continue soon and thanks for pm

Good one