The Switching of Little Swimmers ( 5 chapters)-COMPLETED - Page 5

siya

@loveinshi

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 5 years ago

Aww... That was cute!! 😳

Jab adi vik ke Ghar pit ke Aya I thought use Girish ne Mara..

But this was good..even the happy family at the end

I'll add this to SS section!

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@Sakshi_04

Goldie

Posted: 5 years ago

Amazing yr...but kuch jyada jaldi khatam nhi hogai...mujhe mr papa singhal aur dekhna hai...btw story bhahut shaandaar thi...

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Romanogers

@Romanogers

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakshi2104
Amazing yr...but kuch jyada jaldi khatam nhi hogai...mujhe mr papa singhal aur dekhna hai...btw story bhahut shaandaar thi...

Mujhse lambi stories likhni nahi aati. Main baht curious hoti hoon kisi aur ki stories padhne ke liye to main apni stories ko kaise drag karti. Isiliye jaldi finish kar diya 😆

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AMIKA14

@AMIKA14

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Posted: 5 years ago

HAI MERI DIL KI BAAT SUN LI!!!FINALLY ADU AUR VIK KO EK CHOTI SI ANGEL MIL GAYI!!!ADI KO CHOTI BEHEN MIL GAYI!!!AUR MERE MOOH KO EK BAADI SMILE!!!LOVED THIS SS!!!FINALLY HAPPY ENDING!!!🥳

THANKS FOR THIS UNIQUE AND AMAZING JOURNEY🤗

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Shaina744

@Shaina744

Goldie

Posted: 5 years ago

Kya kya kya?????khatam ho gaya???😭

I really loved the last part..Vikrant and Aditi's daughter"Viditi"hai khusi k aansu...

Par kahin na kahi Aditi pahle se hi Vik se pyaar karti thi nehi to wo bete ka nam AdiRant hi q rakhti?😉

Chalo AdiRant ne sab theek kar diya..smart boy haan...

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Please please please Mahi di do write more more and more...

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398242

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Romanogers

Well in my story he is not a gay but thinks of himself as a GAY. And by the way who says that GAY people can't have macho looks.You must see MATT BOMER in WHITE COLLAR and NEIL PATRICK HARRIS in HOW I MET YOUR MOTHER .GAYS can definitely be all handsome and can kill ladies with their looks. And please forgive me I you didn't like the story but I wanted to add something more than Romance, Suspense and horror to the ANJAAN FORUM. May be I failed.But I will have to complete this story.

its ok dear

bus gash is my fav. toh thoda feel hota hai

and story is very funny

lolz girish ko toh gadheda bana diya!

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398242

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Posted: 5 years ago

next parts nice

lolz adirant is photocopy of vik

and cute baby viditi!

haapy ending!

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