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Posted: 7 years ago
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Tum yahan kaise...

Nidhi had gone to her cousin Nikita's house on her birthday...there she and all her friends had a great time in the birthday party. They were dancing and enjoying themselves and didn't notice the time when the door bell rang. Her cousin opened the door and someone scolded her for so much noise at 1 am. Nikita felt sorry for disturbing everyone's sleep when Nidhi came over to see who was there to disturb their party and was shocked to see Ashutosh standing there. "Sir...Sir aap yahan? she asked. No wonder the party is going on till late night...he thought. "Achha to aap bhi hain yahan... Yeh question to mujhe poochna chahiye kyunki main to yahin rehta hu he said. Nidhi sulked and mumbled...yeh bhi har jagah pahunch jaate hain mujhe daantne ke liye. Ashu asked her what she was mumbling and she told him that Nikita was her cousin and it was her birthday party. Ashu asked them to end the party as they were disturbing everyone and asked Nidhi to report at 8 am in the hospital for her duty. He left and Nidhi told Nikita that he was her Dean and both the cousins laughed knowing about their interactions in the hospital and how both of them ended up thinking in opposite directions invariably. Nikita told Nidhi not to think much about him as its commonly said that opposites attract. Nidhi patted her shoulder and all the friends went to sleep after chatting for some more time.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice n cute... 😛
It had to be Dr. Dean at the door.. n i loved Nidhi mumbling... 😆
Hardstone ready to kill his pupils.. n ordered Nidhi to be on time the next day... For God's sake Ashu... for once can you have the mercy on her.. ?/ She was at her cousin's,, n your repeated commands target her here too... 😉
Maza aa gaya... 😆 n loved Nidhi laughing on the interactions.. n made the atmosphere easy for her cousin n friends.. ! Lovely,, cute,, want more from you.. ⭐️👏
Thanks dear.. n God bless. .!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
Awesome, cute and very cute, loved it Manisha 👏
It was confirmed that hardstone will be of the same nature even outside KGH 😛
Loved how Ashu and Nidhi met and talked, and other side of their hearts were saying another story 😉
It was obvious that Nidhi had to talk of him, to her friends. Talking of Ashu was her nature after joining KGH, and talking of his tantrums and stonic heart, was what making her so close to him!
Loved the little shot, with her friends laughing over the Dean's behaviour. i wish Nidhi had a sound sleep after that incident 😉
Thanks dear, for the amusing shot, luv ya so much ❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25
Thanks everyone for your comments to the previous story😃
I would reply to each comment individually later😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Your smile is my present

Nidhi came to know from someone that it was Ashu's birthday the next day...she had started to develop feelings for him but couldn't express it ever. But she definitely wanted to make it a special day for him...she went to the market and brought a present for him. Next day she went to meet him in his cabin and wished him on his birthday. "Thanks Dr Nidhi but as everyone knows I don't celebrate my birthday ever...so you should also take care of this... He said. She told him that birthday is always a special day and that comes just once a year...so it should be celebrated in a special way... and she offered him the present she had brought for him. Initially he refused to accept the present but she kept it on his table and asked him to throw it away if he doesn't want to keep it. After she left he got busy in his work and forgot about the present but while leaving for home in the evening, he saw it and he picked it up and went home. On reaching home he opened it and found a light blue shirt inside...a smile came up on his face as this was his favourite colour but he had never thought someone would know it without him telling her. He was impressed with her sweet gesture and he thanked her at heart for giving him a present on his birthday...his first ever in his life. Next day he wore that same shirt gifted by her and went to the hospital...Nidhi saw him wearing it and her smile gave him an immense pleasure which was unknown to him till now. He too responded with a thank you signal through his eyes which could be seen and understood only by the one for whom it was meant.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very lovely story Manisha... ⭐️👏
Your little stories are a watch... !!!
Loved how Nidhi is feeling for Ashu by now n thought of the perfect gift for him.. n so loved him loving n accepting it by wearing it on the next day only...

Hmm... something is cooking up at both the sides... 😉 loving it... ❤️

her smile gave him an immense pleasure which was unknown to him till now. He too responded with a thank you signal through his eyes which could be seen and understood only by the one for whom it was meant.
Lovely lines... very well put in... 👏
Thanks dear.. n God bless..
Edited by bawaswift - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
If you only knew the way i look at you, when you have your back at me -
I smile wider than the sky, cos i love you endlessly!


Lovely shot once again Manisha dear 👏
I loved the Title - her smile is his present, and so is his smile to her. And the " Present time " is all their smiles to each other. So, both the present time and the gift are what matter right now!
Loved to see him attired in her gift. Loved to see him so happy after times. Loved to see her happy to see him happier in his gift!
The smiles they have given to each other - by acceptance and by acknowledging, they both have gift each other an unknown feeling that has a large from to fill their voids and get them to the reach of love!
Beautifully expressed AshNi' s feelings in the last lines dear ⭐️
Thanks so much for the lovely shot, it's so pleasant to get these little shots from you in this so silent forum!
Luv ya dear, just luv ya ❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30
Thank you all once again for your comments...I would be replying to every comment very soon... for now I am posting another short story for you all😃

Main tumhare saath hu...


The lift doors opened and he found her standing inside alone...she straightened when she saw him. He asked her "where are you going? She told him that she was on her way to the ward on the 5th floor as she was posted there on her night duty. The lift was on its way up when suddenly the lights went off... His fears which were there in his heart since childhood came afresh in his mind when once he was stuck alone in the lift for more than two hours. He usually avoided lifts but since he had hurt his right foot few days back...he had to use them. He closed his eyes... stumbled out of his fear ...tried to hold on to something... his hands took support of the lift bar...and instantly he spoke up...Baba jaldi aa jaao Baba...mujhe darr lag raha hai... Nidhi heard this and not being able to understand anything...but she could make out that her strict Dean was scared inside the dark lift. She held his hands and tried to comfort him...Sir don't worry...main yahin hu ...aapke paas...dariye nahi. He held her hands tightly and held onto him until the lights came on... she found him sweating, shivering and anxious. "Aap theek hain Sir? she asked and he signaled that he was fine. The lift started again and both of them came out and he went towards his office. She accompanied him and as he sat on his chair... she offered him water. He had water and asked her to leave as he was fine now... she needs to report on her duty and he didn't want any problems to any of his patients. She was about to leave when she turned around and said...Sir... apne andar ke darr ko bahar nikalne ka sabse achha tareeka hota hai ki us darr ka samna kiya jaye...koi apna saath ho to yeh aur aasan ho jaata hai...aur aaj aapne us darr ka samna kar liya hai...ab aapko lift mein darr nahi lagega... She was about to leave his office when he called her name...Dr Nidhi... She stopped and looked towards him...thank you so much ...he said and she smiled on hearing this and she went to complete her work in the ward.


End of this😊

Edited by braveheartdoc - 7 years ago

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