Short stories: Fourteenth one up; Page 13

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I am making this thread to post short stories based on my random thoughts to keep the forum activity going😃

In this I would be posting short one page stories...may be drabble sometimes...though I haven't tried a drabble writing till now...but I would try soon😛

Hopefully you would enjoy reading😃

If you want you too may give me some ideas on which you want me to write...I would love to try writing something on them too😊

Till then you enjoy the first short story by me in the next post😊

Tum mere saath ho...


You are not what you show


Tum yahan kaise...


Your smile is my present


Main tumhare saath hu...


Ruthe ho mana lenge...


Hum...tum...aur noodles...


Yeh tera ghar yeh mera ghar


Tum hi ho mere khayalon mein


Tum ho mere liye anmol...


Agar tum saath ho...


Tere liye main...


Tum ko dekha to...

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Zindagi se mulakat karani hai


Ashu and Nidhi had just started to grow as friends with Nidhi gradually realizing that there lies a soft hearted person behind this hardstone Doc. She was trying to make him realize that there is much more to life than just hospital and his patients. One Sunday morning she forced him to come with her as it was an off for both of them. Despite his repeated asking she didn't tell him where they were going and just asked him to drive as she directed him. She stopped in front of a temple and asked him to come inside. He refused to go inside as he believed that God is responsible for taking away his Baba from him and he being forced to lead the life of an orphan.

But she was determined to take him inside today. She went inside alone and once she disappeared from his sight, he heard a scream ... one that was so familiar to him...that made his heart skip a beat... That belonged to Nidhi. He immediately rushed inside the temple and saw her on the floor holding her ankle. "Nidhi kya hua tumhe? Gir kaise gayi? he asked. She immediately got up and he was shocked to see her standing up without any pain.

"Tum to theek ho fir wo cheekh? he asked her and his face had doubts written all over his face. " Wo cheekh to aapko andar bulane ke liye thi...ab andar aa hi gaye hain to mere saath andar bhi chaliye she spoke in her usual bubbly style. He became offended and stood facing away from her. She held his hand and pulled him with her and took him near Lord Ganpati's idol. She offered prayers there and he kept on standing there silently but slowly as time went by, he started to feel better over there as if all his restlessness ...his pain and anger were being taken away. He had tears in his eyes and Nidhi saw them when she patted his shoulder lightly to bring him out of his trance. He wiped his tears and tried to hide them from her but how could he? She had seen them already and she knew what he was feeling at present.

"Aarti lijiye... she told him and as expected he didn't know how to do that. She signaled him about the way to take aarti and he followed her. After completing the prayers they went back towards their car. "Thank you Nidhi he said...and she knew what he wanted to say. She just smiled and said " aapko mujhe thank you bolne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai ... Main jaanti hu aap kaisa mehsoos kar rahe hain...kabhi kabhi muskura liya kijiye... Achha lagega aapko... Aur un sab ko bhi jo aapko muskurate huye dekhna chahte hain... Both of them smiled and went back to their homes.


The end😊

Please do and review...would be trying to post short stories frequently😊

Edited by braveheartdoc - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful... ⭐️👏
Emotional as well as too sweet.. 😃

Lovely n great start to the short stories dear... 👏
Good move.. plzz keep on doing the good job... God bless.. !
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Posted: 7 years ago
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First of all, thank you so much for the fresh story thread Manisha 👏 It's like we are gifted with the special treat from you 🤗
This short shot is so cute and beautiful once again! The bubbly, chirpy Nidhi has taken out Ashu from the firm decision of not going to the temple or what! Nicely woven the cuteness and Ashu's heart melting down to the Holy atmosphere he was standing in and all of a sudden he felt of the feeling of meditation, very sweetly shown ❤️
Loved it, and am looking forward to more stories from you, as you are here ready with loads of them 😃
Do pen down time to time, we will be waiting for the adorable touch from ya!
Luv ya, as always, without fail ❤️ 🤗
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Originally posted by: bawaswift

Beautiful... ⭐️👏

Emotional as well as too sweet.. 😃

Lovely n great start to the short stories dear... 👏
Good move.. plzz keep on doing the good job... God bless.. !


Thank you so much Bhaiya...hope I can write as many short stories as possible😃
Bless you too🤗
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This is so sweet Bhaiya😃👏
TFS Bhaiya😃🤗
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Originally posted by: Swatishubh

First of all, thank you so much for the fresh story thread Manisha 👏 It's like we are gifted with the special treat from you 🤗

This short shot is so cute and beautiful once again! The bubbly, chirpy Nidhi has taken out Ashu from the firm decision of not going to the temple or what! Nicely woven the cuteness and Ashu's heart melting down to the Holy atmosphere he was standing in and all of a sudden he felt of the feeling of meditation, very sweetly shown ❤️
Loved it, and am looking forward to more stories from you, as you are here ready with loads of them 😃
Do pen down time to time, we will be waiting for the adorable touch from ya!
Luv ya, as always, without fail ❤️ 🤗


He has been forced by his circumstances to lead a life that he is into now...but Nidhi has come as an Angel in his life to make him realise that its not that difficult to come back to life if you have someone to care for you😃
Thanks for loving this short story Bhabhi...love you loads😃🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Anjani thanks a lot😃
Can we have few words from you as well😃🤗
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Tum mere saath ho...


Ashu was about to leave the hospital after the day's routine when the rains started pouring down. Ashu was never fond of rains and so he kept on standing at the hospital entrance waiting for rains to stop so that he could reach the parking lot when he noticed a girl standing in the park outside the hospital with her eyes closed and no umbrella with her. She had her arms open as if trying to hold on to the rain droplets in her hands.

He was surprised to see someone doing this as he never could think of doing the same... After few minutes he realized that she was none other than Nidhi...she was enjoying the rains to the fullest and he couldn't understand what made someone enjoy these rains... everything became so messy during the rains and he hated that. After some time when the rains slowed down, Nidhi came back to her friend who too had been waiting for the rains to stop.

She asked Nidhi...yaar tu bhi na... kaise bachhon ki tarah baarish mein bheeg rahi thi...sab kya sochenge? Nidhi as always had her answer ready... arey baarish sirf bachhe enjoy karte hain...aisa kisne kaha? Baarish ki boondein jab chehre par padti hain ek alag hi khushi ka ehsaas hota hai... Jaise wo har boond dil tak pahunch kar use ko thandak de rahi ho...kabhi tu bhi try kar...tab pata chalega ki kaisa lagta hai she said. Ashu who was listening to all this found all this so strange and he smirked as he saw both of them leaving in light drizzle only.

He too left after some time and reached home...late evening again it rained heavily and all her words kept echoing in her ears... unknowingly he went out in the lawns with an unknown force taking him outside and he stood there in the rains with his eyes closed... feeling each and every rain drop on his face. He had never experienced a feeling more divine than this ever before... how he felt all his pains and sorrows being soothed and the drops seemed to extinguish the fire of loneliness, anger and frustration inside him. After some time he had a smile on his face and he could see Nidhi's face flash in front of his eyes as if she was saying...dekha ...maine kaha tha na... and he instantly spoke up to himself...haan tumne theek kaha tha... ". The rains stopped after some time and he opened his eyes to find no one there but he felt as if she was with him and her invisible presence with him gave him the much needed solace.

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