Hey Aashna...!! I am back from vacations and just finished reading all your updates. 😳
I am amazed at the way the story is progressing... It's gripping, each and every update. You have maintained the interest and eagerness of the reader despite the daily updates. Great work! 👏
Putting in a combined comment for all the updates -
I liked how Naina gave it back to him understanding his hidden nature. But sometime after that just like Sameer even I could feel she was overdoing her act. Anybody who knows Naina would know that she cannot be bold with everyone and the party costume was a dead giveaway. Sameer understood it, and he played on that. He forced her reveal what she had been doing.
I was stumped at the way he kissed her in the party... I hated it... Touching a woman without affection and against a will is not acceptable, it doesn't matter she is your wife or not. And look what price Naina had to pay for his act. His one moment of revenge could have destroyed her life because it made her appear cheap in front of Mr. Saxena - not to mention that Saxena himself is an asshole. He capitalized on the information he got, but I am grateful of the fact that Sameer was the one who saved her. What touched me was that in that trouble and mess, she remembered and sought help from Sameer. And afterwards at night too she sought solace in his arms. She didn't feel unsafe with his arms around her, his touch didn't revolt her. Acceptance is there in both of them - and I am so glad to see it.
This incident shifted something inside Sameer and he realized how he missed her bright jovial nature. It also made him realize that what she was going through emotionally and physically. What happened was brutal, but looks like it paved a way for a new relation. And I am happy to read in the latest update that Sameer was successful in convincing her of his innocence. It was needed, for both of them.
I am not going to focus on Sanjay yet, I know he is a future threat, but I will wait for more information on him before commenting. But, I am really curious about Vishakha... I can barely refrain from asking what are you planning to show with her? The way she talked with Sameer and then the way she was advising Naina... She seems good one moment, and bad another.
Eagerly waiting to read more...!! Thank you so much for the daily updates...! 😳
Edited by moumita04 - 7 years ago