Kaleerien - The Meervaan Saga

Kaleerien - The Meervaan Saga

Part 1

"Just go away or I might just start hating you more than Pammi Kappor. His words kept ringing in her head as she left the hospital premises. Her tears were not in her control. Meera had never imagined that things can take so much wrong turn while she was trying to help Vivaan. She wanted to make him meet his mother. Just when she thought she had cracked her mission with the help of Friends book everything shattered. She knew how much Amaya means to Vivaan and she can understand what Vivaan is going through but she was very hurt when he blamed her for everything but she hadn't had any words to defend herself. She kept pleading to him to listen to her once but all in vain. Why every time when they both just come a little close the destiny apart them. Why there are so much misunderstanding in their relation?

She kept walking on the road all shattered and broken. Was Amaya really in this condition because of her? What was her fault? May be everyone says right that she is not perfect to be someone's wife. She doesn't know how to be responsible. Her family has to bear so much because of her. Her father and mother are always worried about her. Now, look what she did to Vivaan and Amaya. This cannot be forgiven. Vivaan was right when he said that she was a curse in his life. Tears busted from her eyes. He thinks that she was a curse for him. She didn't knew why his every word was affecting her so much but they were killing her.

Meera started climbing the stairs of the temple. She was here to pray for Amaya. Today what was about to happen with Amaya shocked her to her core. How can a mother to this to his daughter? Was Vivaan right? She somehow managed to save Amaya from those goons but she ended up being critically hurt. Meera too was hurt and even her previous day wounds were afresh but she was not worried about herself today. All she wanted was welfare of Amaya. Doctors said there is very less chances of her survival but she had full faith in god. He will never let this happen. She pledged to not have a single drop of water until Amaya was back home.

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The whole Dhingra family was in hospital with Vivaan. He was very cynical and afraid. He somewhere deep down in his heart knew that there was no fault of Meera but he was not able to forgive her. Somewhere his brain overpowered his heart. He was not in a condition to think about Meera now. The doctors have informed them that Amaya was responding to the treatment but the next 24 hours were very crucial. Dolly was worried for Meera and asked Amar to check with her once but he decided to stay with Vivaan now as he needed support her now. Daadi also made Dolly understand that Meera must be upset and they should give her some time to handle this situation. Still, Dolly was not relaxed until she called home and a servant of Kapoor Mansion informed them that she was back home.

Vivaan was again very upset knowing that she left for home despite of knowing the condition of Amaya but he preferred to ignore her.

"You are a curse in my life. Just get the hell out of here. He remembered his shouting but his anger for Meer didn't let him realise what he had done

Meera came into her room and her mind flashed with the previous night images when she and Vivaan were so close. How he was kind of jealous knowing she was going to a party to meet her FB friend. She had never imagined this in her wildest dream that everything will end up like this. Meera was so broken, hurt and bruised that she didn't even realised when she fainted out of hunger and wounds thinking about what all had happened.

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So, guys this is my first attempt to write a fiction on this forum. Please let me know your views about this. Do like and comment if you want me to continue.

Good start😊

Emotional start n beautiful situation to portray meervan feelings

What a wonderful write up. So hope CVs read this.👏

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Part 2-

Everyone was still in hospital waiting for 24 hours to pass. Mrs. Roma Kapoor had also reached hospital and blamed the whole Dhingra family for everything wrong happening in their lives. She asked them to leave as this was the perfect chance to take Amaya and Vivaan back to London. But Vivaan stopped her from insulting Meera's family. He knew they are good people and genuinely care for them. Roma was very frustrated and then she started blaming Meera for everything and questioned how can she leave Amaya and Vivaan alone in this condition to take rest at home? Vivaan had nothing to say. He himself was very angry on Meera. He was also broken by seeing the condition of Amaya.

It was noon when doctor came and informed that Amaya had gained conscious and was all hale and hearty. Though she was still in shock but her survival is miracle. The doctor asked them to call Meera as Amaya wants to meet her and continuously taking her name. Vivaan rushed inside the ward to meet his sister. He hugged Amaya tight, he cannot lose her. She was his only family.

"Bhai, I am fine now. Relax. Amaya tried to assure Vivaan.

"Ssshhh... Don't you dare to say a word? Do you realise what would have happened...if...if something happened... Vivaan was extremely emotional.

"It's okay Bhai. I am fine. Where is Meera Bhabhi? I want to meet her and...

"No, you stay away from that girl. He said loudly. His anger was prevalent in his tone. "I am fed up of her childish nature and interference. You and Meera never listened to me but now see what all is happening. All because of her.

"Bhai, what are you saying?

"Please Amaya, don't try to defend her. I had already asked her to stay away from you. You both don't understand how dangerous Pammi Kapoor is and look what happened because of Meera today. I could have lost you. He cupped her cheeks as his eyes filled with tears.

"Yes, you could have lost me if Meera had not came in time to save me from those goons in time. Bhai, what you have done? How can you blame her for all this?

"What do you mean? She saved you...? What are you saying?

"Bhai, how is Meera at fault? I saw her messages with mom and I decided to go to the hotel but I got surrounded by goons and if she hadn't come in between without caring about herself then I don't know what would have happened... She shivered to the core imagining the incident.

"She saved me from those goons. She is so selfless that she never for a moment thought about herself. She was also hurt badly. A goon give her a bad cut with knife but she didn't care. She managed to get me to the hospital in time. How can you blame her for everything? You should be thanking her for saving me...If she wasn't there then I might not have survived...

Now this came as the biggest shock for Vivaan. He had blamed her for everything when she was the reason that his sister was alive. What have he done? His mind flashbacked with all things that Meera had done for him. Last time when was about to slap her made her so cold toward him and this time he had said a lot to her. She is not seen here since last light. She must have fought with him if she had been typical Meera to let her stay with Amaya but she left. Amaya said she was also hurt badly and also Sheri had wounded her. She herself had put her life in danger to find the truth about his mother. Yes, at times she is very immature but her intentions had been always very pious and pure.

"You are a curse in my life. Just get the hell out of here.

"Just go away or I might just start hating you more than Pammi Kapoor.

"Since we have got married you have made my life hell.

"Bhai, where are you lost? Where is Meera Bhabhi? Please go and bring her here. I want to meet her. Amaya broke Vivaan's trance.

"You take rest Amaya. I am not going anywhere leaving you alone here.

"No bhai. I want to meet her. You go and get her. I am fine now. Please bhai.

Just then everyone came into her ward. Everyone started checking with Amaya. Vivaan asked Amaya to rest and left to meet the doctors. He was extremely shocked with this new progression in the story. He tried calling Meera but her phone was not in reach. He called home to check with the servant but he told him that he had not seen Meera since last night. She had not came out of room. This made him more worried about her. He had said a lot without giving a thought but he was not in his sense.

It was evening and everybody was still in hospital. Vivaan asked everyone to go home and rest but everyone denied going home. Dolly was constantly worried about Meera as she had not seen her from last night after her fight with Vivaan but she knew that Amaya needs her now. Doctor asked Amaya previous medical history and report and someone had to go home and bring them. Vivaan was not sure for leaving Amaya here.

"Vivaan puttar, you don't worry. We all are here. You go and get the reports. It is only you who knows where they are. Dolly said to Vivaan.

"But aunty...

"Don't worry, Amaya is like our daughter. We all are here to take care of her. Vivaan nodded and left for home. He also wanted to check Meera. Where was she? Was she fine? Mrs. Rooma Kapoor was very much frustrated by Meera's family. Why they are being so nice. This time she won't let them win. This is the perfect opportunity she will use this to take these both stupid back to London. This is the best time to end Meera's chapter from Vivaan's life. He had blamed Meera for everything. She was sure he won't forgive her this time. As soon as Vivaan left for home. Mrs. Kapoor too left for office and for other planning. She needs to get everything set.

too good!!

Love the way the story is going..waiting for the next