The story is all over the place

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Right now I feel the show is all over the place.
1) Why is Zoya babysitting Mahi? Why is she still living in Siddiqui house

2) Why this sudden inclusion of 2min Maggi love story of Mahi? Is it absolutely required for a show like Bepannaah to go the cliched way of showing a love triangle so soon? I thought the show is much more than that.

3) Why Adi has to use Zoya as a primary source of entertainment in his life? The girl has just come out of a rude shock. Handling a suicide trauma is not a matter of joke. He should give her some space and most importantly not play with fire (read: Mahi) to get to Zoya.

So let's try to help out the makers by chipping in with our ideas. How do u want the show to progress from here onwards?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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None of it makes sense, but this is a Hindi serial trying to win the trp game, so don't have too many expectations. They somehow have to make Mahi hate Aditya, so CVs are mouldng all the characters accordingly.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Don't expect too much from an Indian show 😆 I think coz of IPL they are showing filler episodes once Apurva Agnihotri makes his entry story will move forward and become more interesting hopefully 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Neemsundari

None of it makes sense, but this is a Hindi serial trying to win the trp game, so don't have too many expectations. They somehow have to make Mahi hate Aditya, so CVs are mouldng all the characters accordingly.


Agree with you😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Out of the three points you mentioned, Mahi crushing on Aditya seems most believable. I don't really have a problem with that. We all know why this is happening. Mahi needs something personal against Adi.
But I absolutely CANNOT fathom why Zoya's still living with the Aroras. This is not how you make a fresh start, Zoya! I was actually waiting for Zoya and Noor to get an apartment together, but, eh, I guess they are on a tight budget.
And Adi's purpose until he goes back to piloting is to annoy Zoya under the pretext of getting her ~to live~ apparently.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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They have been trying too many formulic things at once call it trp pressure or whatever it just looks like they never had like rough story progress planned and are bringing some formulic stuff per week!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Agree with you with 2nd & 3rd points...
Talking of Zoya still staying in in-law house is that she don't want to loose those relations for which she has struggled just after Yash death.. She doesn't consider Madhu Mahi responsible for any wrong doing.. & more She considers her in-law as her own family. .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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My answers in Bold

Originally posted by: Shaenma

Right now I feel the show is all over the place.

1) Why is Zoya babysitting Mahi? Why is she still living in Siddiqui house? Because she's the mahaan heroine of daily soaps😆

2) Why this sudden inclusion of 2min Maggi love story of Mahi? Is it absolutely required for a show like Bepannaah to go the cliched way of showing a love triangle so soon? I thought the show is much more than that. They need to show Mahi turning into an evil vamp so they need to find a reason for that. The so called Creatives have no creativity. 😆

3) Why Adi has to use Zoya as a primary source of entertainment in his life? The girl has just come out of a rude shock. Handling a suicide trauma is not a matter of joke. He should give her some space and most importantly not play with fire (read: Mahi) to get to Zoya. Because every daily soap consists of hero heroine nok jhoks. As I said, Creatives have no creativity. 😆

So let's try to help out the makers by chipping in with our ideas. How do u want the show to progress from here onwards? Less Mahi and more AdiYa and ArNoor.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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I so agree with you. Since Zo suicide attempt, the CVs seem lost or unsure in how to take the story forward.

Mahi falling for Adi was so unnecessary. There was no need for her to have a reason as such for revenge cos she has enough reason to hold against Zoya and her hatred cud be enough to ruin whatever Zo loves including Adi (at some point)

Staying with Arora isn't so bad cos end of the day Zo still considers it her in laws place so her place cos they weren't divorced so she is still Yash's widow so she has every right to stay there.

Adi was supposed to be more sympathetic towards Zoya...annoying her and all is so out of context...wudve been nice if they showed them as friends and how they eventually fall for each other and fight out against the taboo's of the world.

Am also not hugely convinced with the current track

Kat
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I have to disagree on Aditya being jerk to zoya...

After zoya tried to commit suicide mind you he tried very hard being nice and sympathetic to zoya, even brought office staff and acted all the way to make her comfortable.
In the end zoya was just running back to mussorie when Aditya had to provoke her to stay and pick herself up.

also if you all remember there was warm welcome to zoya in office also but she didn't even smiled. after all Aditya's efforts failed he had to do what he is doing. he may say its for his entertainment but he hasn't gone lowly as to trouble zoya for no reason. its the only thing that gives the feeling of her being normal.

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