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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AD04


Beautifully written Aly ...👏
Loved the whole scene 😳
I will try to write someday ...😉 Thanks for the motivation Aly 😛



Why not today dear Just pen down a scene.. We will be glad to read your style of writing.. .😉


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Posted: 7 years ago
#22
Mujhe yaad hai Woh din Woh raat
Har pal har baat mere dil ke paas
Tere meri taraf dekhna aur sharma ke hassna
Mein Tera hu tu meri hai har ek ko batana


Mr. Khanna was in the kitchen preparing breakfast for his love. He made some sandwiches and fresh juice. He kept all this in a tray and headed towards her room. He slightly opened the door and found her playing games on her phone. He chuckled at her.
"Come on now! Breakfast is ready!! He said playfully and approached her.
"Daddy!! She six year old ran and hugged him.
He kissed her cheek and made her eat the breakfast. She ate it while still playing games on her phone. "Myra baby, have your food nd then play games. He said calmly.
She made an angry pout but didn't say anything. After having food she went to play in the park.
"She is just as stubborn as you. Never listens to me but I love her. Mrs. Khanna don't be angry on me that I broke your promise...

"Shaurya I need a promise from you Mehek said.
"What promise jaan? He asked
"That you will never love somebody else. She said innocently.
"Aww... mera laddoo how can I love someone beside you. I promise I will always love you. He kissed her gently.


...but I love her more than you. He said looking at her picture on the wall. "And Mrs. Khanna, I miss you. Bye he said and left for office.

Mujhe Shikwa nahi koi ki tu meri nahi hui
Zindagi kar jayegi meri Teri yaadon mein khoi


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After few years. Myra had turned fourteen. Shaurya wanted to send her to boarding school as he was busy in his office work and there was no one to take care of her after the death of Karuna.
He came down with some suitcases in his hand. Myra sat their crying on the sofa. "Daddy please I don't want to go.
"Myra Please baby it is for your own good. And daddy will come to visit you regularly. He consoled her.

He made her sit in the car and waved her goodbye. "I'll miss you. He said.
He turned around his face to hide his tears.

Hogi mujhe mein koi kami
Jo Teri ankhon mein nammi
Tu jahan bhi rahe bas khush tu rehna
Mujhe shikwa nahi koi ki tu meri nahi hui



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After few years.
Shaurya sat on a chair by the window dreaming about Mehek. The times they had spent with each their. His eyes were filled with tears. He was getting old and he missed Myra a lot.

Mehek was five months pregnant and she had a small baby bump with made her look cute and chubby. She was watching the view from the balcony of their room and Shaurya came from back and covered her with a blanket as it was cold. They both sat and enjoyed a hot coffee made by Shaurya. "Mehek I just want a cute daughter who is just like you. Loving , caring and cute. He pulled her cheek.
"Okay Mr. Khanna as you wish. She smiled.
"Wait don't you want a boy. Shaurya asked.
"No I too want a baby girl. Mehek said. " because then we both will team up and tease you. I want to take my revenge mr. Khanna. She said.
He laughed at her. "Any other reason?
"Yes she will take care of you if I am not there. She said. "No you are not going anywhere. I'll never talk to you again if you leave me he hugged her tightly.


He could not control his tears and he cried remembering those beautiful memories.

pal pal tere bin
Kaise pal guzarte hain
Jag jag kar raatein
Ro ro kar don guzarte hain...
Badi koshish mein karta hun par saansein rukti nahin

Mujhe Shikwa nahin koi ke tu meri nahin hui


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Clad in a black formal pant coat he tightened his tie and looked in the mirror for the last time. He went to her room and found her wearing her jewellery. He went near her and stood behind her.
She saw him in the mirror. "Dad how do I look?? She asked.
"You are the most beautiful bride I have ever seen. He pecked her forehead. "I am gonna miss you.

hum ajnabee hone lage
Yaadon se khone lage


He took her hand in his and walked down to the mandap. He took the grooms hand and handed her hand to him. "Take care of her.

sun le meri tanhayi gaa rahi hai
Meri zindagi se meri zindagi ja rahi hai
Tujhe acha laga mujhe chod kar Jana
Agar meri nahi hui kissi aur ki kehlana


He said looking at the stars after the Bidaayi of his daughter. Remembering the two most important women in his life. Both important for him to live but none with him.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#23
Am at loss of words... What an emotional nd beautiful writeup Aleysha dear...
Literally had tears while reading... Dil choo liya...
Really felt bad for shaurya...I was visualizing all those scenes...
Oh god am getting too emotional...itna mat tadpaavo shaurya ko...
Thankyou dear...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
Thank you for the PM Aly
Nice update no words to describe
You are such a nice writer... nice imagination you have keep going girl ...😊😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25
Aleysha, both the stories were superb.. I loved it..
MehRya as college lovers.. I would love to see this on the show..

The next story made me emotional while reading..and I loved it the most.. TBH, I can't ever imagine MehRya without eachother.. They are IT for me..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
Thanks for pm.
Both the parts are beautiful.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27
Such an emotional and Beautiful update Aly😊
Loved the SK and Myra bonding .
Thanks for the PM😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28
Thanks for the pm dear loved it very emotional part it made me cry pls do write more I want to see them old together really great written.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
Aly bother the stories was superb
I want to see them college mates and their love story very well imagination Aly loved it
And second one just emotional really it was impossible to live without her for shourya but he loves her daughter alot
You are a very good writer Aly
Thanks for these beautiful shots
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh god Aly baby ithana emotional story I can't handle.. My heart is filled with so much pain while reading this .. Very well written dear but reading about this lone Shaurya who is living in his Love thoughts missing the most important women in his life is painful to read yaar. ithana math thadapo shaurya ko..
Thanks for the pm dear 🤗

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