My Visions-- one shots. The bully pg6 (28/5) - Page 4

Originally posted by: dwriter

Am at loss of words... What an emotional nd beautiful writeup Aleysha dear...
Literally had tears while reading... Dil choo liya...
Really felt bad for shaurya...I was visualizing all those scenes...
Oh god am getting too emotional...itna mat tadpaavo shaurya ko...
Thankyou dear...

thanks for our feedback shiny.
Aww.. I didn't want to make you cry. Sorry.
if you can please contribute a small piece of writing. I would be happy to see that. 😛

Originally posted by: _Buttercup

Thank you for the PM Aly

Nice update no words to describe

You are such a nice writer... nice imagination you have keep going girl ...😊😊

thanks dear. Keep giving your feedback and itni bhi taareef na kiya karo. 😳

Originally posted by: PristineSoul

Aleysha, both the stories were superb.. I loved it..

MehRya as college lovers..I would love to see this on the show..

The next story made me emotional while reading..and I loved it the most.. TBH, I can't ever imagine MehRya without eachother.. They are IT for me..

thanks a lot for your feedback Roma. I would love to see your feedback on other stories also. 😳

Originally posted by: ic_2000

Thanks for pm.
Both the parts are beautiful.

thanks for your feedback icy ❤️

Originally posted by: AD04

Such an emotional and Beautiful update Aly😊

Loved the SK and Myra bonding .

Thanks for the PM😛

thank you so much f r reading Aarti 😳

Originally posted by: Harmankav

Thanks for the pm dear loved it very emotional part it made me cry pls do write more I want to see them old together really great written.

thanks your for ur fb. I didn't want to make you cry. Sorry for going that deep.
It just came with the flow.
😃

Originally posted by: Chandana2010

Aly bother the stories was superb

I want to see them college mates and their love story very well imagination Aly loved it

And second one just emotional really it was impossible to live without her for shourya but he loves her daughter alot

You are a very good writer Aly

Thanks for these beautiful shots

Thanks for the pm

thanks f R your feedback anu di. 😳
Yaar itni bhi taareef na kari 😳
I'm this one was a little emotional. I will try not to write such os.

Originally posted by: Krishna537

Oh god Aly baby ithana emotional story I can't handle.. My heart is filled with so much pain while reading this .. Very well written dear but reading about this lone Shaurya who is living in his Love thoughts missing the most important women in his life is painful to read yaar. ithana math thadapo shaurya ko..

Thanks for the pm dear🤗

thanks a lot for your feedback kishu!! ❤️ sorry for the pain. I know I iam t wrote it out of inspiration and flow flow mein 😆

Aly exams ho Gaye hi na