ShraMan SS: The Light of Her Life Update ~ 08/05 IMPORTANT NOTE Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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I know my "I will update this week or next week" turned into an entire decade (you may throw anything you wish at me, I deserve it) to the point the topic closed. Anyways, inspiration struck and so we're back with this. I'm going to try my best to finish this, updates would be irregular because I'm shit at managing my time, but nonetheless, I invite you all back on this journey

You can catch up on Chapters 1-5 in the link below:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-duje-ke-vaaste/4783660/shraman-ss-the-light-of-her-life-chapter-5-updated-04-07
So now, onto this, this is the next Chapter 6, previously we had seen that Shravan was not on good terms with his father, and was related to Kamini in some way. Sumo and Shravan were best friends since childhood, but for some reason he had to leave her and go to London, although they still remained the best of friends. Aaryan is Suman's fiance who is a bit of a dick.
In this update, we will get to see why there is tension between Ramnath and Shravan, and a bit about Shravan's past and their friendship as well Aaryan and Suman's relationship.

Chapter 6

10 Years Ago

"Hi ma, what time are you coming to pick me up? Shravan chirped on the phone

"I'll be there in 10 minutes, beta, have you eaten your lunch?

"Yeah ma, but I'm still famished, jaldi aao he complained

"Okay, bye

He saw her car on the other side of the road, he waved at her, smiling at her brightly and she gestured him to come quickly. He ran as fast as he could, a skip in his step, and the biggest smile just to see his beloved mother. He stopped to let a car go past him, and then again looking at his mother he continued walking. As he was walking towards her, he suddenly dropped his bag, the smile that was plastered on his face just moments ago turned into shock, "MAAA, was the only word he could utter.

***

He woke up with a jolt, sweating profusely with his tank soaked through and his hair wet. He had frozen completely, his heart stopped, and he was paralysed. It happened again, the nightmare had resurfaced the nth time since the accident that had changed his life forever.

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10 Years Ago

Shravan Malhotra was one of the brightest students of his grade. He brought home straight A's, had loving parents who were also well to do and was the apple of their eye. He was also an only child which made him even more beloved. However, he had to wake up from his picture perfect life someday.

It was a regular day at school, but unlike most days when the driver would come pick him up, his ma' had decided to, and thus, began his never ending nightmare. He was crossing the road when he stopped to let a car go past him. Then all of a sudden, another car came at full speed and crashed into his mother who was waiting on the road full of other parents. He screamed and screamed for help, but no one came forward. So as best as he could, he moved his mother's body on the passenger seat, and drove the car to the hospital. He didn't have his licence but he couldn't let anything happen to his ma, she was his life and he wouldn't let God take her away from him. By the time she had gotten to the hospital she had had a lot of blood loss, and by the time he had come out of his shock and informed his dad that his mum was in hospital, it had been too late. Nirmala Malhotra had breathed her last, but just before closing her eyes with all the strength she could muster she whispered to his father, "Shravan ka khayal rakhna, and just like that, she was gone.

A couple of days later, there was a funeral held in memory of his mother. Throughout this time, he had had irregular sleep, waking up at wee hours of the morning or in the middle of the night, holding onto her clothes or just anything that would give him the semblance of her presence. He hadn't cried yet and this worried someone. Someone who he knew would always look after him.

Suman Tiwari saw what Shravan was going through, she could see it every single day, she could empathise, for she was also someone who had lost her mother. One day, she saw Shravan was missing from class and as she knew exactly where he was. It was the park near her house, where she would also often go to think and contemplate life. However, that day what she saw broke her heart.

Shravan was huddled at the steps shaking with hot tears rapidly pouring out of his eyes. She ran to him, dropping her books and hugged him tightly rocking both of them gently.

"Shhh, Shravan, it will be okay, it will, I promise you, please, stop crying, Nirmala aunty would hate to see you like this,

He looked up at her with his cheeks stained with tears, eyes bloodshot red and swollen, a runny nose and pouted lips, "She left me Sumo, she left me, what am I going to do without her?

"Shravan, it hurts I know, I know how cruel it feels, but you have your father, and he loves you just as much, he will look after you,

"You don't understand Sumo, that man doesn't care at all,

"What do you mean Shrav,?

Shravan explained everything to her, how a few days after the funeral, he had brought his mistress, Kamini, home, who he was seeing for the past 6 months and was going to leave his mother for. She had a son from her previous marriage, Pushkar, who was a few years younger than him and Shravan knew right there and then, that he was now all alone.

***

"Hello, Priraj dining, this is Suman speaking, She answered abruptly in an upbeat voice, thinking there was a customer on the other end.

"Oh wow, Miss Chef, didn't know you were also working as the receptionist as well, he smirked

"May I know who is speaking? She enquired

"Nice to know that my fiance is so preoccupied with so many other things that she doesn't even recognise my voice, He sneered

"Oh sorry Aaryan, I was at work so I wasn't expecting your call, what's up?

"Yeah, how would you expect my call, you're busy with Shravan all day anyway. Anyway, I would be dropping by your house at 5pm, so just make sure you are at home, I need to talk to you, He said spitefully

Suman heard a long beep, before she realised he had cut the call. Sighing to herself, she continued with her day, luckily as she was the owner, she could leave and come as she wished, but this did not mean that she wanted to abuse that power. This restaurant was her baby, and she needed to prioritise it first in her life. She had sacrificed too much for it.

She got home at 4:30, allowing herself to take a quick shower and relax a bit before she would have to put up her mask of indifference and listen to Aaryan's "complaints with her. She had just left her room, when there was an urgent knock on the door, "speak of the devil, and the devil is here she smirked as she walked towards the door. She opened the doors, and as their eyes met, he was seething with anger, his eyes had a burning rage in them. He grabbed her arm and dragged her to her room and swung her into it, throwing her off balance.

"WHAT IS THIS? He roared, shoving his phone at her face.

"What's what? Sumo meekly answered, trying to keep her composure.

"THIS ARTICLE!

She slowly took his phone from his hands and saw the photo of Shravan and her dancing. It was a photo someone had clicked from the party at Mehra's a few nights ago. Underneath it the caption read, Hotshot lawyer Shravan Malhotra no longer single?' It all made sense now, his anger was the result of the article, and seeing her so close to Shravan.

"Aaryan, I can explain... She began,

"Oh don't bother, I just came here to tell you, we are getting married at the end of this week, and before then, you need to cut all ties with Shravan, he came closer to her, leaning down to her face and in a strong whisper he sneered, "otherwise the consequences won't be good for you, or your family,

She gulped in response, tears threatening to fall, but she had to stay strong, she couldn't let him win. Before she knew it, he had pushed her harshly, and she hit a wall and with that he banged her door behind him and left.

Suman fell to the floor, staring at the bruises on her forearms that his fingerprints had left. Before she knew it, the tears that she was trying to keep at bay, started to fall, drop by drop until they had started streaming down her face and before she knew it she was sobbing uncontrollably.

Kisse puchu, Hai aisa kyun?

Bezubaan sa, ye jahaan hai

Khushi ke pal, kahan dhundu

Benishaan sa waqt bhi yahan hai

Jaane kitne labon pe gile hai

Zindagi se kai faasle hai

Base jitte hai sapne kyun aankhon mein

Lakire jab choote in haathon se yun bewajah

Jo bheji thi dua

Woh jaake aasmaan

Se yun takra gayi

Ki aa gayi hai laut ke sadaa

***

The song that I decided to go with for this update was Dua, from the movie Shanghai (2012). It shows Shravan and Suman's predicament perfectly, how hurt they are, how helpless they feel. Shravan with his mother's death and Suman with her upcoming marriage with Aaryan.

Anyways, I really really hope you enjoyed this update and I haven't lost my touch. Please like and comment, and let me know what you think about Aaryan, Ramnath and Kamini (even if we dont know much about her yet!) and I promise the next update will be as soon as possible and it will be a big one. Safe to say this story is going to be speeding up now.

Love,

Aanchal

P.S. I will be sending PMs tomorrow, so if anyone wants one, just buddy me and I will send you PMs of the next chapter

P.P.S. Thankyou to each and every one of you who commented on this and used to read I know it's not fair to you when you are invested in the story and it just stops getting updated or written. I know, and I really thought I wouldn't be able to finish it, but now I think I might.

A/N: In no shape or form do I condone Aaryan's behaviour, he is not a real man, and is ridden with insecurity and that's why he doesn't understand Shravan and Suman's friendship. And it is really important to know that no matter how strong you may feel a person may be, they still may be stuck in an abusive relationship and if you know someone who is, just let them know you are here for them and help them regain their strength to leave. It is quite tragic how Tellywood normalises women to be punching bags to insecure men, because they are hurt and I hope that future shows aren't like this as they don't show what real romance or love is. Thankfully, EDKV was quite good in that aspect.

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Index:

Chapter 1-5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-duje-ke-vaaste/4783660/shraman-ss-the-light-of-her-life-chapter-5-updated-04-07

Chapter 7: https://https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4985606&TPN=2&#p148535506


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey nice update!!
U know I have been thinking about this story like forever. Coincidentally I made the post today looking for this story 😊 and akrocks77 replied it could be the one you posted today.
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OMG! You updated this chapter after ages..
Aaryan 😡 how can he behave like that with sumo? I hope he gets beaten black and blue..
Poor shravan 😭 he really had to suffer a lot in his childhood.
Very nice update..


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Finally this story is updated.
Kamini, the evil mother, ramu the evil father and pushkar, how is he?
Both shravan and sumo are all alone..
Why this Aaryan is behaving like a psycho obsessed person?


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Originally posted by: avni01

Hey nice update!!

U know I have been thinking about this story like forever. Coincidentally I made the post today looking for this story 😊 and akrocks77 replied it could be the one you posted today.


HAHAH, yess I saw the post a couple of hours later. What are the chances! I'm really glad you liked it enough to remember it!!
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Originally posted by: Sumodreamer05

OMG! You updated this chapter after ages..

Aaryan 😡 how can he behave like that with sumo? I hope he gets beaten black and blue..
Poor shravan 😭 he really had to suffer a lot in his childhood.
Very nice update..


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Shrujani


Yeah it's been a while hasn't it? Well when Shravan is there, nothing can happen to Suman so don't worry! Thankyou so much for liking it
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Originally posted by: Arpi1234

Finally this story is updated.

Kamini, the evil mother, ramu the evil father and pushkar, how is he?
Both shravan and sumo are all alone..
Why this Aaryan is behaving like a psycho obsessed person?


Love
Smita


Safe to say, I can't write Pushkar is in a bad light, Pushkar Malhotra will be introduced in the next chapter and I can't wait for you to meet him. The beauty of Shravan and Suman is that even if they are alone, they have each other.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey guys, currently writing Chapter 7, should be up by tonight!!
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Hey guys! Back with the next update, I know I said this was going to be a big one, but I decided against it. This is really short, but the story is going to really pick up from here. So without further ado, here is the next update:


Chapter 7

"Hi Shravan, this is Aaryan speaking,

"Hey man, what's up? Shravan replied, controlling his emotions. His Sumo, was going to be someone else's tomorrow and he couldn't do a single thing about it.

"I really wanted tomorrow to be perfect for Suman, after all it is her wedding day, and I know the day would be incomplete for her without you, so it would really mean a lot to the both of us if you were there. It's not every day that your best friend gets married, he replied.

"Yep, I'll be there, I told Suman that as well, Shravan responded, trying to keep his tears at bay.

***

(Suman's POV)

I stared at all the wedding finery in front of me. Luckily, I had a few moments to myself before all the girls came in to get me ready. There was the lehenga which was nothing like I wanted it to be, the chuda which was nothing impressive, and the jewellery which wasn't my mother's, it was modern and expensive and wasn't me. Slowly, I put on the blouse, which was peach in colour and had gold embroidery with small ball-balls hanging off around the sleeves and the waist. I put on the skirt next which was extremely heavy due to the heavy embroidery and the jewelled strings to hold the ends together. Next, I put on the chuda, one by one, it was bright red with white bangles in between and was nothing exciting. I stared at my mehendi and saw his name, written across my wrist, right there in bold, blank letters, "AARYAN. Someone else's name was meant to be there instead, but that dream was left unfulfilled many years ago.

Knock-knock, I jerked out of my reverie as I saw Preeti and my Mamiji barge in.

"Haaye meri beti, kisiki nazar na lage tujhe, you look so beautiful, my aunt took a bit of kajal from the corner of her eye and put a dot behind my ear. It is believed that now all evil eyes would stay away from me. Hopefully it works with husbands as well, I laughed humourlessly to myself. My aunt left the room to allow Preeti to talk to me for a bit, alone.

"Hey Di, how are you feeling?

"I don't know Preeti, how should I be feeling? I hate him, he hurts me, he doesn't think of me to be my own person, he can't deal with my friendship with Shravan, even if it's the only thing that keeps me happy, even if Shravan's the only person that I can completely be myself with. I hate how I can't be with Shravan and I hate how Mamiji thinks it's completely okay to f**king blackmail me to marry him. Why is no one listening to me, why doesn't anyone want to listen to what I want. Why am I being forced into this? I can never marry that man, That is what I wanted to say, but I stayed quiet. I had to go through with this, I had made a promise and this was the only way I could fulfil it.

"Di, is everything okay? she asked me again, the look in her eyes told me she knew that something wasn't right, but I couldn't tell her.

"Hahah, yeah, I'm just a bit nervous that's all, I tried to laugh it off,

"Di, please stop lying to yourself and to me. I can tell that you aren't happy,

"Do I have a choice? I don't, I am stuck and there is no way out, I cried out. Tears started to stream down my face. I felt I was in this cage, and there was no escape, I couldn't do anything but accept my fate.

"You do have a choice! Just say it and I'll make sure, di, you wouldn't have to go through it,

"Preeti, nothing can be done now, our family's honour relies on this, no go outside and check all the arrangements, and send the makeup artist in, we don't have much time left, finality laced through my voice.

***

(Shravan's POV)

My eyes met hers, I knew within me she wasn't happy. There wasn't that skip in her step, her face didn't have that radiant smile and her eyes lacked that twinkle I had fallen in love with. She wasn't happy, but her eyes also held something I knew I couldn't fight against. Resolve.

***

Suman made her way towards the alter and gave a small smile to her Nanu, who looked back at her with nothing but love. She chanted to herself throughout the ceremony that whatever she was doing was for the happiness of her family and nothing else, so when she got up for the pheras, when he put the garland around her, when he put the sindoor on her hairline and the manglasutra around her neck, she showed no emotion. She didn't smile or blush like the typical bride, nor did she cry or run away. She remained robotic in all her actions until she heard the words, "yeh vivaah sampan hua


***

I really hope you guys enjoyed that. I will accept all juthiya, I deserve it. You all wanted Shravan to save her, but that would've been too simple. But don't worry, have faith in Shravan, he will eventually get her out of this.

And let me know how do you find Preeti?

And how do you think this marriage is going to go?


Love,

Aanchal

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hnn nice update.
Par yaar tumne shadi kyun karwa dii 😛 abb age kya hoga.
Preeti ka character kuch samajh main nahi aaya. Thoda sa scene tha isiliye sayad..
Update soon


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