AvNeil SS ~ Red String of Fate{Pt-3} - Page 4

Originally posted by: nlisa

Lovely update Nivi.

I love your writing style. Keep updating.

Apologies won't suffice, par what to do! Adat se majboor, have to ask sorry for leaving this story in middle of a desert. This is a snippet, more sort of a insight into the further story. Just to check if people are still interested in reading.

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Avni hugged her knees closer to herself and sobbed...sobbed hard till lack of oxygen made her gasp for breathe. Numerous taunts re-surfaced in her mind, her ears pained to hear such ill words about her.

'STOP IT!' She screamed, shutting her ears tight.

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Leaning onto the head rest of his bed, Neil closed his eyes in despair and frustration.

'What a bad person I am!' He wondered about himself. 'How could I not save her..my Avni.'

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Sufficient enough for you to put on your thinking caps.