Avneil After 10 years OS

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Hello everybody!! After watching today's episode I felt like writing how I wished for the Avneil reunion to be..This my first time writing a fan-fiction and so please do let me know if you people liked it or not...
After 10 Years of Pain

Avnis PoV
Neel how could you?? I loved you even after the extreme rude behaviour you exhibited towards me but now I don't trust you anymore. You are taking my son away from me and asking your future and yes I'm breaking by the mere thought of Mitali being your future and moreover being the mother of MY child..OUR child..our symbol of love...Why Neel why?? Please don't take mowgli away from me. He is my sole reason of survival..Yes I told saisha that I love her more than my own child but today when I am at the verge of losing my child I realise that no I don't and I can't love saisha more than mowgli..

End of PoV
To present scenario
After the first hearing of the custody case between Avni and Neel, the Khannas went away in another car back to Khanna Mansion completely disappointed in their son due his burning rage against Avni because of which he was ready to separate a child from his mother. This is something they are sure their son would never do. And to top things up his decision of marrying Mitali even after finding out about mowgli being his and avnis son was not an easy thing for the Khannas to digest..
Unaware of their sons real I tentions they drove away home..
On the other hand Neel and Mitali were engrossed in a very serious conversation.
Neel - " Thank you Mitali for being a true friend and standing by me whenever I need support.. Thank you for helping me in my plan of getting the actual reason why Avni left me out of her mouth. But to be honest it is very difficult for me to behave so rudely with Avni and that too after meeting her after 10 years . It is even more difficult to put our son through this pain of choosing between his mother and father and also looking st those tear filled eyes of Avni and not go and wipe them off.. But this engagement with you this custody case everything is necessary to get the truth out of avnis mouth.""
Mitali- " Never forget that I'm your best friend and will help you reunite with the love of your life."

Engrossed in their conversation they never realised that Sunheri who had come to give Neel a piece of her mind had walked away with a smile on her face thinking about the happiness that was knocking at avnis door..

Avni At Ayesha Maas grave
Avni-"Maa why would Neel do this to me Maa why ??" She asked her mom crying.
"Because you have been lying for too long now ms Avni Ayesha ." Came Neels voice from behind.
Avni turned around completely shocked to see Neel at Ayesha Maas grave.
"What are you doing over here Neel ?" Avni asked with confusion blended in her tone.
"I have come over here to seek for the truth my wife has been hiding from me" replied neel moving closer to her till her back hit a tree and she was enclosed in Neels arms..
Avni-"Which truth Neel ?"
Neel-"Stop lying Avni.. Our life along with our sons is at stake. So for gods sake tell the truth" Neel replied in an angry tone.
"Our life? You are engaged to Mitali Neel so please stop playing with my feelings as well as hers and let me go" Avni replied crying silently now.
"Avni if you trust me please just blurt out dads truth to me. I know that you wanted to protect our perfect family" replied Neel as he had now lost his patience.
Avni looked at Neel with shock.
"Yes Avni I know the god damn truth. Sunheri told everything to me. And before you curse her for betraying you she heard mine and mitalis conversation about how we had planed this entire fake engagement and custody case. Yes all this was faked. How could you even think that I moved on. I love you more than anything. I always felt that you were hiding something from me and so hatched this plan with Mitali. But you are such a tough nut to crack. Sunheri was also not ready to tell anything to me but I made DD to ask her and she could not lie to him now, could she? I know that this was tough on us but we can at least work on it together and come up with a solution to dads problem. But only if we are together. So Mrs.Avni Neel Khanna are you ready to come back into my life along with our son?"
Shock would be an understatement to avnis condition. She was only able to respond by hugging Neel tightly and shedding a few tears of happiness.

They did discuss about the entire plan Neel had planed and also thanked Mitali for helping them that evening. They also did at last sleep on the same bed with their son sleeping in between them after 10 entire years. The smile on their faces definatly was enough to figure out how happy they were.

The Prakash fiasco was yet be sorted but that could definitely wait till the next morning.
The new day brought a bundle of happiness in their life...

The end

It is my first time writing a ff so please bear with the typos and suggestions are most welcome..
Thanx and hope I didn't bore you people..

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanx a lot!!
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Thanx a lot!
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Thank you so much😳

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