Viditi ff

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Shristhi19

@Shristhi19

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Posted: 7 years ago

So guys this is a viditi ff.

It is actually a prologue ( maybe a short post). I will post it tomorrow or saturday.

Here viditi are investigating on a case where female dancers of a club are being murdered strangely with lot of bloodshed in there rooms. Only vikrant went to the murder place, because aditi avoided such places or should I say vikrant avoided aditi from coming there)

Vik:(in the chowki) :ye bada hi ajeeb case hai. Victim ko itni buri tarah se maara par aawaaz nahi aayi. Yeh teesara khoon hai ek hi hafte mein.

S I :sir saari ladkiya bar dancers hai. Koi lafda hoga in ladkiyon ka, tabhi maara hai kisine. Aisi ladkiyon se aur umeed bhi kya kar sakte hai. Ek toh ladki...

Aditi(who was silent till now spoke angrily) :shut up. Zaroori nahi hai ki har ladki apni marzi se ye kaam kar rahi ho. Kuch majbooriyan hoti hai. Aur ladkiyon pe aise baatein kehne se pehle das baar soch lo.

Vikrant POV: aditi ko toh maine cute and cool samjha, par ye toh kaali nikli.

Aditi : chalo vikrant .Vikrant. Vikrant... Kaha kho gaye ho.

Vikrant who was watching all open mouthed:ha, haan chalo.

(In car, vikrant who was busy in driving, while going back home)

Aditi: waise vikrant tum kaha khoye te tum waha par

Vikrant : tum mein, aur kaha. (After he realized what he said)I mean tumhare baaton ke baare mein . You were right. Kal subah hum unke family ke paas jayenge.

Aditi : hmm.

Vikrant : toh mein tumhe pick karne aoonga.

Aditi: no no no vikrant no.

Vikrant(who was bit shocked) : arre pick karne aa raga hoon. Uthake shaadi karne ke liye nahi.

Aditi: no vikrant kal mujhe much kaam hai, so late ho jaungi.

Vikrant : ohhhk.

Next day

Vikrant waited for aditi for long. He tried calling her but she didn't pick up, she was also not at home.

Vikrant:(while calling joshi) : ye aditi bhi Na. Batake nahi jaa sakti. Ek toh iss musibat uske liye 4G network jaise hai ,kahi bhi mil jati hai. Aur ye aise akele chali jaati hai. Mujhe bolti toh kya aatma ke saath uska friendship toot jaata. Haan joshi aditi ka pata laga Aur mujhe call kar.

In night vikrant got call from joshi and was shocked to hear the information. He rushed to the bar where murders were taking place.

(In bar)

Host:toh logo, dil thaam ke baithiye, aa rahi hai Mumbai ki nayi sensation, aap sab ko ghaayal karne, adaa.

Imagine kajra re song(or any one you like) in the dress which madhuri wore in ghaagra song.

As soon the girl turned...

Vikrant was completely to shocked to see...

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So guys I am done, pls share your views

I hope you all like it

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siya

@loveinshi

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Posted: 7 years ago

I love it shristhi!😛

Vikrant is being so obvious about his feelings..😆 waiting for the next part.. will vikrant get over protective of the new "dancer"?😳

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Shruti

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: loveinshi
I love it shristhi!😛
Vikrant is being so obvious about his feelings..😆 waiting for the next part.. will vikrant get over protective of the new "dancer"?😳

protective ? are u kidding kisse ne paas bhi jaane ki koshish ki na pakka maar milegi and meanwhile the concept seems interesting

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viditifan

@viditifan

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Posted: 7 years ago

Meri kya I guess sab ki sixth sense keh rahi hogi k haan woh aditi hai. Woh adu hi hai

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Angel500

@Angel500

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: viditifan
Meri kya I guess sab ki sixth sense keh rahi hogi k haan woh aditi hai. Woh adu hi hai

yeah absolutely right

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Babygirl728

@Babygirl728

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Posted: 7 years ago

Interesting prologue,jaldi first chapter post karo.

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@Sakshi_04

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Posted: 7 years ago

Oh bateki vo aditi hogi na!!!!!!! Nhi!!!!! Aacha concept hai please chapter 1jaldi update karna...

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Shaina744

@Shaina744

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Posted: 7 years ago

Wao love this one a lot...aditi as a dancer...mujhe intezaar nehi hota...I am dying to read Vikrant's expression..

Update soon

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AMIKA14

@AMIKA14

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Posted: 7 years ago

SHRISTI!!!THAT WAS A SUPERR UPDATE!DAMN VIKRANT EXPRESSION...A MIXTURE OF SHOCK ANGER AND MESMERISED😛 INTRESTING FF!!!🥳PLZ UPDATE SOONISH

Edited by AMIKA14 - 7 years ago

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Shristhi19

@Shristhi19

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Posted: 7 years ago

#10

I am Sooo sorry guys I am late.

So here it goes

Vikrant was so shocked after seeing the dancer that he nearly stumbled upon his place, his mouth was soo wide open that flies and mosquitoes would have easily settled with their colony.

Yes, he knew that she was brave enough and daring, but never in his life did he expect aditi to become a dancer for this case.

Acp Saab was deeply into his thoughts, when finally aditi, oops adaa's performance was over.

The hoots proved that Mumbai had got it's new crush. But someone was happy, he was vikrant. His face closely showed anger and now he needed answers.

All the dancers departed to their rooms.

As soon as the crowd cleared, vikrant went to search for aditi.

Vikrant : What is wrong with aditi? She took such a huge decision without my permission .I mean seriously, itna hi shouk tha case mein involve hone ka toh mere saath chalti,lekin nahi madam ko dance karna tha.

While searching for room ,vikrant collides with one of waiters and asks him.

Vikrant : Abey sunn, wo Nayi dancer ka room kaha hai.

Waiter : kaun Adaa ji, sir dekha ache acho ko flat kar deti hai. Sir sensation hai sensation. Aag jaisi hai. Dekha sir, aap bhi Khud ko rok nahi paaye ,sach batau sir, Pehli baar mujhe yaha kaam Karne me maza aa gaya.

Bechara waiter, he told the right thing in front of wrong person.

Vikrant (holding his collar): saale,bada maza aa raha hai tujhe. Ek lagaunga na ,toh aisa sensation create hoga ki sense hi nahi rahega. Chup chap bata room kaha hai.

Waiter :aage jaake left .

Vikrant went in the direction not before giving a deadly warning to the waiter.

Waiter (after vikrant went) :na jaane iss system ka kya hoga. Policewaale sach sunte hi Nahi.

Vikrant found aditi's room and entered in it without anyone's notice.

But the scenery in front of him made our acp Saab forget everything.

Aditi was still in that dress and was removing her jewellery. Her hairs were flowing in air.This made vikrant Soo lost in her ,that he stepped towards her unconsciously.

Vikrant : beautiful

Aditi who was startled at first and later satisfied seeing vikrant.

Aditi: tum ho vikrant, main toh darr hi gayi thi.

Vikrant (who came out of trances ):haan mein hu Adaa ji, aap mujhe jaanti hai. Suna hai aap sabko ghayal Karti hai aur gumrah bhi.

Aditi:vikrant I am sorry,, sab itna jaldi hogaya ki..

Vikrant :ki tumne mujhe batana zaroori nahi samjha.

Aditi :pls vikrant, samjho

Vikrant : kya samjhu aditi, aur yaha aayi bhi toh kaise, dancer banke.

Aditi : vikrant, yeh best solution tha .Aur waise agar mai tumhe batati, toh kya tum mujhe aane dete.

Vikrant :nahi kyonki tum yaha safe bilkul nahi ho. Aur mein yaha tumhe hargiz kaam Karne nahi doonga.

And he began to drag her holding her hand.

Aditi :vikrant Pls. Agar yeh case solve karna hai toh tumhe mera saath dena hoga. Mujhpe bharosa rakho .

Vikrant giving up :fine, but you will handle everything all by yourself OK.

Aditi: OK sir,(to lighten his mood) waise mein dance kaise Karti hoon

Vikrant remembering it :zabardast... I mean to say nice

Aditi blushing :thanks, OK now go. Or someone will suspect.

Vikrant :before leaving : Acha tum apna khayaal rakhna, yaha kisi se bhi zyada baat mat Karna, yaha ke logo se door Rehna,khaas kar ke waiters se. Koyi kuch bhi kahe toh mat lena, khaana bhi mein ek undercover officer se bhejunga, wahi khana, thik hai. Aur mujhe roz call karna.

Aditi :thik hai sir

Vikrant (don't know what happened to him suddenly, he hugged her) :pls take care aditi. Tum bohot zaroori ho. OK. Bye.

Aditi was touched and reciprocated it :dont worry, aur waise bhi tum toh ho.

Vikrant :hmm. Bye. Good night.

Both wished each other and went away.Today both slept peacefully.

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Finally done. Pls post your comments.