Faasle:When only hearts talk

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viditifan

@viditifan

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Posted: 7 years ago

Guys mujhse zyada der ruka nahin gaya toh maine nayi story k baare mein socha. Well kyon ki jealousy j upar already ek story ban chuki hai toh maine suspense,hurt/comfort ko combine karne ka socha.. Toh let me tell this that I am vry addicted to emotional stories toh tis one is again one of the same genre but yeah I'll try k itna zyada bhi emotional na ho k aap log bore hi ho jao..

So,let me first tell the characters...

ACP VIKRANT SINGHAL

ASP ADITI SHARMA

MR SUDHEER SHARMA:ADITI'S DAD

MRS.NEENA KUMAR:ADITI'S BHUAJI

ABHISHEK,LATA G,RAGHAV G(Suspense mein hi toh maza hai kyon?)

Well basically speaking,this is a viditi story aap ko pata hi hai but ismein faasle hain jinke beech sirf do dil ek dooje se jude hain..

I'll update first chapter tomorrow...

I hope aap logon ko accha lage...I'll try my best

Take care

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Angel500

@Angel500

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Posted: 7 years ago

Interesting ...

Can't wait for a update

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siya

@loveinshi

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Posted: 7 years ago

Concept sounds interesting vandita.. waiting for 1st chapter

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@Sakshi_04

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Posted: 7 years ago

Nice..yr sound interesting... Update soon

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viditifan

@viditifan

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Posted: 7 years ago

Well main wait nahi kar payi so here goes the first chapter of Faasle...

(A normal day at shaitaan chowki. Aditi is already present at chowki when Vik arrives)

VIK:Hi junior

ADITI:Hello ACP sir(she stresses on the word 'sir')

VIK:Waise aaj jaldi kaise aa gyi tum. Pehle toh humesha late hi hoti ho

ADITI: Oh hello! Main kabhi late nahi hoti..woh aadat tumhari hai...Pehle toh raat ko sote late ho aur phir subah uth te nahi...late aana toh tumhari aadat ban chuki hai. Dekho aaj bhi aadha ghanta late ho

VIK:Jee toh aap jaldi utha diya kijiye madam

ADITI:Shut up vikrant... Kuch bhi ulta seedha bolte ho

VIK:Oh hello, mera matlab tha mujhe phone karke utha diya karo...

ADITI:Oh! Mujhe laga k..

VIK:Kya laga tumhein?

ADITI:Woh mujhe laga k...

VIK(moves a bit closer to aditi) :Kahin tumhein yeh toh nahi laga k main kahoonga k mere ghar par aa kar...mere bedroom mein...mujhe dheere se...pyaar se...

ADITI:Shut up vikrant! Idiot

VIKRANT:Haye!yeh adaa toh dekho...kahin vanraj se pehle yeh na maarde mujhe

ADITI(SHOUTS IN AN IRRITATING TONE):Vikrant!

VIK:Ok ok sorry baba mazaak kar raha hoon..

Waise bhi tum mere type ki nahi ho

ADITI:Accha toh koun hai tumhare type ki??

VIK:Mere type ki to koi tez taraar,chaalak aur koi attracive and mesmerizing beauty hogi

ADITI:Toh,main kya sundar aur attractive nahin hoon?

VIK:Kyon? Tumhein jalan ho rahi hai?

ADITI:Nahi toh

VIK:Accha par mujhe toh tum mein se aa rahi hai bu...oh my god aditi!

ADITI:Kya hua?

VIK:Kahin tumhare andar heater toh fit nahi kar diya kisi aatma ne?

ADITI:Ahhh!u r just impossible vikrant.

VIK:Toh impossible ko possible tum kardo... Aditi(he stresses on the word aditi)

(Then suddenly aditi's phone rings)

ADITI:Papa ka call...Hello!...Gud mrng dad...kaise ho aap...main bilkul theek hoon...kya sach mein?...main aati hoon na aapko lene airport...oh accha...okk bye...see u at home

VIK:Kya Hua?kya kaha tumhare dad ne?

ADITI:Woh papa aa rahe hain na aaj 4:00 baje ki flight se

VIK:Toh tumhein lene jana chahiye na unhein

ADITI:Main ne yeh hi kaha tha par dad aur bua dono aa rahe hain na...toh unhonein kaha k woh dono khud hi aa jayenge but mujhe jaldi jana hai arrangements karne... I hope aaj koi case nahi hai

VIK:Haan haan tum aaram se jao...yahan main dekh loonga.

ADITI:Thank u so much vikrant

VIK:Aapki seva mein yeh naacheez humesha haazir hai mallika

ADITI:Vikrant!kabhi kabhi na tum mujhe bade sweet lagte ho...but the next moment tum, oh god!

(Aise hi 3:30 baj jate hain aur aditi chali jaati hai)

VIK:Oh god vikrant,yeh ladki tujhe paagal kar degi..I mean jab yeh mere paas hoti hai,main bhul hi jata hoon k main ACP Vikrant hoon... She is just I mean I don't have words yaar...khair vikrant ab kaam karle kahin aisa na ho k tu sachmein paagal ho jaye aur beta tera demossion pagalkhane ho jaye

So guys,I know k ismein itna kuch khaas nahi tha but plzzz tolerate it...comment and like plzzz

.Take care