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viditifan

@viditifan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Well mera 10 posts ka kota pura ho gya tha. Isliye post nahin kar payi. So here goes the next chapter of faasle:

I ended up when adu goes home. So let us continue.

ADITI:Aditi, bua aur papa k aane se pehle sab acche se arrange karle warna bua ho jayengi shuru,k yeh aisa kyon nahin hai,woh waisa kyon nahin hai? And hundreds of questions par jawaav dene wali sirf main. I mean main akeli kya kya sambhaloon. Aur upar se woh ladka Vikrant

Kabhi kabhi toh itna sweet k insaan ko diabetes ho jaye uski baatein sunkar but the next moment kadwa karela, bajarbattoo kahika...

(SHE HEARS A VOICE)

VOICE: Koun hai bhai bajarbattoo aur karela?hum bhi toh sunein

ADITI(REALISING THAT SHE FORGOT TO CLOSE THE DOOR) :Papa, aa gye aap. Maine aapko kitna miss kiya. Pata hai aapko?

ANOTHER VOICE:Hum bhi aaye hain aapke papa k saath. Humein toh aap bhul hi gyi.

ADITI(Runs and hugs):Buaaa...aapko kaise bhook sakti hoon? Aap toh meri jaan ho.

HER BUA:Accha accha theek hai. But plzzz stop calling me bua. I mean humari umar mein kuch zyada fark nahin hai. Infact main chhoti behen lagti hoon tumhari. So call me Neens just Neens.

ADITI:Ok bua g,i mean neens.

NEENS:Better. Waise bhi mera yeh naam, Neena kumar eww so old faishoned! But neens so modern and cool u know.

ADITI: yeah I know.

Dad:Aditi beta mujhe yeh batao k yeh bajarbattoo kise keh rahi thi?

ADITI(Trying to cover up):Papa, aap bhi kya lekar baith gye. Itni door se aaye hain. Aaram kijiye na. Main zara darwaza band karke aati hoon.

NEENS:Nahin nahin ruko aditi koi aur bhi aaya hai humare saath. Bas bahar hain aate hi honge.(Pointing towards the door)Woh dekho aa gye.

(THREE PERSONS,ONE LADY,ONE MAN AND ONE DASHING BUT NOT MORE THAN VIK,BOY)

ADITI:Papa, yeh log...

DAD:Beta yeh mere business partner Raghav,unki wife Lata bhabhi and unka beta abhishek.

ADITI:Oh namaste aunty,namaste uncle.(She touches their feet)

BOTH TOGETHER:Khush raho beta.

(THEN SHE MOVES TOWARDS ABHI and shakes hand)

ADITI:Hello abhishek

ABHI:Beautiful!

ADITI:Jee!!!

ABHI: Mera matlab aapke ghar se tha.

ADITI:Oh!

(She feels uncomfortable as he does not leave her hand)

ADITI:Jee woh mera hath

ABHI(Quickly leaves it):Oh I am sorry

ADITI:Its ok

NEENS:Adu, kuch din yeh humare saath hi rahenge. Aur haan abhi pehli baar mumbai aaya hai toh use mumbai ghumane ki zimmedari teri

ADITI:Par bua, i mean neens meri duty. Kaam ka bahut pressure hai.

ABHI:Its ok Aditi. Jab tum free ho jaogi tab chalenge. Ok

ADITI:Fine theek hai.

(Halki fulki baatein karte karte raat ho jaati hai. The doorbell rings. Neens opens,the door sees vik but since does not know him is unable to recognise him)

NEENS:Ha bhai, kis se milna hai?

VIK:Jee woh aditi hai

NEENS:Jo kehna hai mujhse kaho aditi kaam kar rahi hai.

(ADITI ARRIVES)

ADITI:Arey, vikrant. Wahan kyon khade ho?andar aao na

VIK:Haan thank u.

ADITI:Papa, yeh vikrant. Maine bataya tha na aapko

DAD:Oh yes yes. Kaise ho beta?

VIK:Uncle main bilkul theek hoon aap kaise,hain?

(HE WISHES EVRYONE)

NEENS:Bas yahi kehne aaye the?

ADITI:Bua!

VIK:Nahi woh actually ek naya case aaya hai. Woh hi discuss karna tha aditi se

NEENS:Aditi konsa sari umar ghar mein baithegi kal aa jati office.

VIK:Jee actually suresh sir ne kaha hai k case top priority hai.

ADITI:Its ok vikrant. Tumne bilkul theek kiya. Chalo garden mein discuss karte hain

Abhi:Aditi, yahan karlo discuss

ADITI:Abhishek cases confidential hote hain. Inhein aise discuss nahin kiya jaata. So excyse us plz. Chalo vikrant.

(After discussing case they return back inside)

Vik:Accha aditi,main chalta hoon.

ADITI:Vikrant, aise kaise khana kha kar jao na.

VIK:Khana! Haan haan kyon nahin! Zaroor...

(BEFORE HE COULD COMPLETE NEENS JUMPS IN)

NEENS:Nahin adu use kaam hoga beta! Kyon vikrant?

VIK(after seeing her deadly glare):Haan aditi. Abhi mujhe,kaam hai. Phir kabhi. Hmm bye.

(SAYING THIS HE GOES)

(Next day in chowki)

(Time is around 7:30 pm. Adu and vik are working and joshi is also with them. When suddenly abhi enters)

ABHI:Hi aditi!

ADITI(shocked):Abhishek tum yahan?

ABHI:Haan woh actually maine socha k tumhare saath aaj dinner pe jaun.

VIKRANT(JUMPS IN)Kyon?

ABHI:Jee!

ADITI(COVERS UP):Woh uska matlab hai k aise achanak?

ABHI:Actually mujhe aapki bua ji ne hi bheja hai. Toh chalein.

ADITI:Par yahan abhi kaam hai

ABHI:Arey, aapke senior hain na woh manage karlenge.waise bhi woh aapko itni privacy toh de sakte hain na?

VIKRANT(POV):Privacy ko pati hai kya yeh aditi ka. Privacy chahiye.

Abhi:VIKRANT,sahi keh raha hoon na main?vikrant!vikrant!

VIK(COMING OUT OF POV):Haan haan sure aditi tum jao main yahan dekh loonga.

ADITI: Pr vikrant

VIK:Its okk aditi tum jao

ADITI:OKK

(they go)

JOSHI:Sir mujhe yeh banda kuch sahi nahin lag raha.

(Vikrant apna haath upar uthata hai)

JOSHI:Sir,main toh aise hi keh raha tha.,maarna mat.

VIJ:Abe shaabashi de raha hoon. Life mein pehli baar sahi baat boli hai tune.

(MEANWHILE,AT THE RESTAURANT)

(ABHI AND ADU ARE SITTING)

ABHI:So hot!

ADU:Jee!!

ABHI:I mean khana

ADU:Oh!

Abhi:Well can I dance with u?

ADU:Jee!

ABHI:As a friend.

ADITI(HESITATINGLY):Ok...okk

(the song plays aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya hai)

SO, THERE WERE TWO THINGS WHICH WERE MAKING ADU UNCOMFORTABLE:

first,abhi's touch

Second,the song

So how was it. Read and comment plzzz

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@Sakshi_04

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Wow...awesome.. Yr PR Bua ne vik khana khane nhi diya...kitni buri hai vo...and abhi jaldi pitega vik se...aur aaj toh joshi ko vik se sabashi mili wah...kya baat...please update next part soon...can't wait...

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siya

@loveinshi

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Great chapter vandita. Ye abhi mujhe bhi thik nahi lag raha..😕

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Shruti

@mitras

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Mujhe bhi lsdka somewhat thik nahi Raha par update mast hai

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AMIKA14

@AMIKA14

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Kisi ka death certificate banane wala hai yahan!!!Abhi toh gaya!!🤣By the way buaaa kitni cool and suddenly rude..😵..Joshi ka toh din hi ban gaya !!plz update soon

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Babygirl728

@Babygirl728

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Yaar ye Bua aur Abhi dono pr mujhe gussa aa rha hai,Viditi k dushman.

But update mast tha,& now u r a groupbie to 20 posts/day hi gye hai tumhare. Cont. Soon

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Nimisha

@Nimisha1111

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Eagerly waiting for the next chap!

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Angel500

@Angel500

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Yeah so called Neens bua adu ki setting karwane pe tuli hai Abhishek se ... Bichari adu ... Jaldi update karna

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viditifan

@viditifan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

So guys here I am with third chapter of faasle... Toh I ended at when adu and abhi dinner k liye jaate hain and adu feels uncomfortable. So let us continue

(Adu and Abhi return home after dinner)

DAD:Aa gye beta? Kaisa tha dinner?

ADU:Papa,aapko kaise pata?

NEENS:Adu maine bataya tha. Mujhe laga k tum dono ek doosre k saath time spend karoge toh tum dono ki dosti ho jayegi.

ADU:But Neens main vikrant ko wahan akela chodkar aayi thi. Woh akela kaise sambhal raha hoga sab kuch?

Abhi:Adu...

ADU:Call me Aditi plzzz

ABHI:Yeah, i mean aditi. Vikrant tumhara senior hai. Itna sa kaam toh woh sambhal hi sakta tha. And waise bhi uski permission lekar hi gye the.

ADU:But woh completely agree nahi kar raha tha. Usne upar upar se hi di thi permission.

ABHI:Toh aditi tum toh aise bol rahi ho jaise k woh tumhara pati ho.

ADU:Toh pati toh tum bhi mere nahi ho k itna interfere kar rahi ho. Main bua i mean Neens se baat kar rahi hoon na.

NEENS:Adu beta toh kya ho gya agar usne kuch aisa bol bhi diya. Tu na over react kar rahi hai. Aur kya galat kaha abhi ne. Woh itna lamba chauda toh hai tera senior. Itna sa kaam nahi sambhal sakta kya.

ADU:Neens!

DAD:Bas ab iss baat par koi behes nahi hogi.

ADU:Fine. Main sone jaa rahi hoon.

DAD:Par beta khana?

ABHI:Uncle hum khakar aaye hain.

DAD:Oh toh theek hai beta tu jaa.

(Adu goes into her room. Use neebd nahi aa rahi. Aayegi bhi kaise bechari vikrant k baare mein jo soch rahi thi)

ADU:I don't know k vikrant kya soch raha hoga mere aur abhishek k baare mein. Mujhe us se baat kar k sab kuch clear karna hoga.(Woh uska no dial karti hai par phir kaat deti hai)

Par main kahoongi kya? Yeh k mere aur abhishek k beech kuch bhi nahi hai. Par mere aur vikrant k beech mein bhi toh kuch nahi hai toh main use clarify kyon karoon? Aur agar usne bhi yeh hi pooch liya toh?

(Suddenly her father enters inside)

DAD:Adu beta, soyi nahi abhi?

ADU:Nahin papa,woh neend nahi aa rahi thi. Aap aayie na baithiye.

DAD:Hmmm. Accha beta tujhse ej baat karni thi.

ADU:Kahiye na?

DAD:Beta tujhe abhishek kaisa lagta hai?

ADU:Par aap yeh, aise achanak kyon puch rahe hai?

Dad:Beta,tu jaanti hai na k main koi bhi kaam bina kaaran k nahi karta. Toh abhishek aur uske parivaar ko yahan laane ka bhi ek maksad hai.

ADU:Woh kya papa?

DAD:Teri aur abhishek ki shaadi

ADU:kya? Papa plzzz main koi shaadi vaadi nahin karne wali.

DAD:Par beta...

ADU:Plzzz dad. Aap hi ne kaha tha na k main apne saare faisle kgud le sakti hoon. Toh itna bada faisla mujhse bina puche kyon papa?

DAD:Nahin beta agar tujhe yeh shaadi nahin karni hai toh its okk tujh par koi dabav nahi hai. Main unhein mana kar doonga.

ADU:Plzzz dad just do that. Mujhe abhi shhadi nahi karni.

(Her father goes away disappointed. After some time, her bua enters)

Neens:Adu..

ADU:Arey neens, aayiye na.

NEENS:Mujhe tujhse baat karni hai.

ADU:Agar aap bhi shaadi ki baat lekar aayi hain toh mujhe koi baat nahi karni

NEENS:Nahin Adu, main tujhse tere papa ki baat karne aayi hoon.

ADU:Papa ki?woh theek toh hain na?

NEENS:Nahi

ADU:Kyon abhi toh theek the kya hua unhein?

NEENS:Sadma laga hai

Adu:Sadma? Kis baat ka?

NEENS:Yeh hi k unki beti unki nahin rahi.

Adu:Kya matlab hai aapka?

NEENS:Batati hoon baith.

(Both of them sit)

NEENS:Adu,tujhe pata hai na k tu adopted child hai?

ADU:Jee

Neens:Toh tu bhaiya aur bhabhi k baare mein kya sochti hai?

ADU:Unhon nein ek anaath bacchi ko adopt karke ek ghar diya,ek parivaar diya. Bahut bada ehsaan hai unka mujh pe.

NEENS:Toh iss ehsaan ko chukane k liye tu kya kar sakti hai?

ADU:Apni jaan bhi de sakti hoon.

NEENS: Woh nahi karna hai. Bas abhishek se shaadi karni hai.

ADU:Bua aao yeh kya bol rahe ho?

NEENS:Dekh aditi, ek baap kya chahta hai? Sirf itna k uski beti uski pasand k ladke shaadi kare. Woh ladka unhon nein chun liya hai. Jo abhishek hai. Tu unhein yeh haq bhi nahi degi aditi?

ADU:Apni khushiyon ki keemat par?

NEENS:Wah re wah duniya! Yeh dekho aaj ki modern generation. Apni khushiyon ki parwah hai par apne maa baap ki nahi. Unhon nein tere liye apni khushiyon ko kurbaan kiya. Apni zarooraton ko nazar andaz kiya ta ki teri khwahishein poori ho sakein. Aur tu? Tu itna nahi kar sakti? Sirf isliye k woh tere sage papa nahin hai?

ADU:Bua!woh mere liye sage papa se bhi badhkar hain. Aur agar unka karz chukane ka yeh hi tareeeka hai toh phir theek hai. Main karoongi abhishek se shaadi.

Neens:Sach!

ADU:hmm.main papa ko batakar aati hoon.

(SHE GOES,TO HER FATHER'S ROOM AND INFORMS,HIM ABOUT THE DECISION. He becomes happy and informs all.)

(NEXT DAY)

ADU:Gus mrng all!

(She notices that everywhere decorations have been started)

ADU:Papa!yeh sab kya ho raha hai?

DAD:Beta woh aaj shaam ko teri sagaai hai na abhishek se. Usi ki tayaariyan ho rahi hain.

ADU:Kya!aaj shaam ko? Itni jaldi?

ABHI:Kya hua aditi? Kabhi na kabhi toh sagaai karni hi hai na toh aaj kyon nahi?

ADU:Par abhishek!

Neens:Bas adu! Tu abhi chup kar. Tu jaa jaakar fresh ho ja aur bhi apne saare friends ko cards baant aana. Hmm. Aur sun apne us lambe chaude dost usko bhi bula lena.

ADU:Bua,vikrant naam hai uska.

Neens:Woh jo bhi ho? Bula lena

(Aditi freshens up and leaves for suresh sir's office)

ADU:Sir,may I come in?

Sir:Arey aditi aao na. Baitho. Kya hua?

(She hands over the sweets,and card to him.)

SIR:Yeh kya hai aditi?

ADU:Sir,aaj shaam ko meri sagaai hai. Yeh usi ka invitation hai. Aapko aur vikrant, dono ko aana hai.

SIR:Congratulations! Par itni jaldi?

ADU:Sir,kabhi na kabhi toh karni hai toh aaj kyon nahi?main chalti hoon.

SIE:Par vikrant ko tum personal invitation kyon nahi deti?

ADU:Sir,woh actually mujhe kuch kaam hai. Aap de dijiye na. Main cahlti hoon.

(She goes away but does not notice that vikrant had listened their convo)

(Near aditi's car)

VIK:Aditi,ruko.

ADU:Vikrant,tum?

VIK:Haan main kyon? Apne abhishek ko expect kar rahi thi.

ADU:Nahi woh actually...

VIK:Aditi,kyon kar rahi ho yeh sab. Main acche se jaanti ho k tum iss shaadi se khush nahi ho. I mean jis bande k saath dinner p jaana tumhare liye uncomfortable tha..uske saath poori life. Are u mad?

ADU:Par mere,papa toh khush hain na. Aur unki khushi mere liye sab se upar hai.

VIK:Aur tumhari khushi?uska kya?

ADU:Mere papa agar khush honge toh main bhi khush houngi vikrant. Aur haan sagaai mein zaroor aana.

(Saying this she goes with teary eyes. Vikrant feels a pinch in his heart.)

(At the engagement venue. Vik and suresh sir arrive. Soon adu and abhi also arrive. Adu looks more than awesome in her blue attire abhi ki tareef toh main karne se rahi.)

(Soon,they exchange rings.)

NEENS:Arey bhai, ab ceremony toh ho gyi dance toh banta hai na.

ABHI:Jee zaroor neens kyon nahi.

(HE GOES MEAR ADU)

ABHI:May I?

(Adu.looks in vik's eyes which say a big NO but then she looks into her dad's,eyes filled with joy. She gives him her hand. As soon as the dance begins,vik imagines himself dancing with adu)

SONG:

Dhoop se nikalke,

Chaanv mein phisalke,

Tum mile jahan par lamha tham gaya...aaa

Aasman pighalke,

Sheeshe mein dhalke,

Jamm gya toh tera chehra ban gaya...aaa

Duniya bhulake...tumse mila hoon

Nikli hai dil se yeh dua...aaa..aaa

Rang de tu mohe geruya...aaa...aaa

Rang de tu mohe geruaa...

(the sound of claps brings him out of his dreams.)

(The ring ceremony is over and abhi plans a dinner for himself and adu but her father as a responsible and protective father sendsvik with them.)

(At the restaurant)

(All the three are seated.)

ANCHOR:Ladies and gentlemen. Aap sab logon k liye aaj yahan oar ek special competition hai. Jiska naam hai "Made For Each Other". Aapko zyada kuch nahi karna hai. Hum aapko ek pen aur paper denge aur aapse kuch sawaal puchenge jinke answers aapko uss paper par likhne honge.aur jin do logon k sab se zyada answer match karenge,woh ban jayenge humare "Mae for each other couple".

(soon the competition starts)

ANCHOR: Toh,aapke sawaal hain:

Zindagi mein sabse zaroori kya hai?

Aap sabse zyada nafrat kis se karte hain?

Aap ko sabse zyada darr kisse lagta hai?

Etc...etc...

So,guys the competition is over. Ab hum aapse yeh collect karne wale hain auemr jald hi results humare saam ne honge.

RESULTS TIME:So guys, i am upset as well as happy. Upset because sirf do log hain jinke answers match karte hain. Only two. But happy because jinke bhi yeh match karte hain,unka ek bhi answer different nahi hai. So guys the winners of this contest are...are...are Mr. Vikrant and Ms. Aditi. Plzzz give ahuge round of applause for them. May we,plzz have u on stage Mr.Vikrant and Ms.Aditi.

(Both of them go on the stage.)

So guys!what a lovely couple. Vaise vikrant and aditi. Kuch khali khali sa lag raha hai. I mean aap abhi bhi juda lag rahe ho. So guys,why not call them "Viditi" what say. The winner of this contest Viditi. Sach mein bilkul ek duje k liye bane hain aap. Ek dum ram milayi jodi. Aap logon ki jodi bahut jamne wali hai guys.

ABHI:Abey oye!kya bakwaas,kar raha hai? Aditi,meri mangetar hai. Aur woh sirf mere sath achhi lagti hai.aur yeh kya hai haan viditi, kitna sada hua sa combination hai bilkul tere contest ki tarah.

ANCHOR :dekhiye sir,we are vry srry. Humein nahai pata tha k aap dono engaged hain but sir humara yeh contest aaj tak fail nahi hua hai. I gaurantee it.

Abhi:And I gaurantee it k agar ab tu kuch bola na toh single piece ghar nahi jayega.

(Soon fight begins between them)

TO BE CONTINUED.

Well a very long chappy right. I will try to post next chappty soon guys.

Till then take care,gud bye

And plz dont forget to comment below

Plzzz

Edited by viditifan - 7 years ago