TS:Murder In Somani House(PART-2 UPDATED)PG-12 - Page 12

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Posted: 7 years ago
Poshampa bhai poshampa somani house me kya hua keshav ka murder hua ab toh dadi ko jail me jaana pdega jail ki roti khani padegi jail ka paani peena padega ab roh jail me aana hi padega😉
What a suspence thriller👏
Ramdhari was the actual killer no one would hve thought👍🏼
Aww sam boy is free now😛
Ashu baby ne kisse inspiration li hai vaise i liked his character😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
This was brilliant minu👏
Ise kehte hai ek teer se do nishan... Keshav bhi mar gaya aur daadi jail gayi... Wonderful.

The twist in the end was so surprising... Suspence was kept intact till the end... Never expected ramdhari to be the murderer...
'This secret was safe with him and would go with him to the grave'... This line reminded me of malayalam movie 'dhrishyam'.

Emotional, comedy, sensuous and now thriller... U wrote stories in so many genres... You have so much talent in you... So please never stop writing.

Love and hugs❤️
-Simi
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Posted: 7 years ago

Thanks for the PM.. I was waiting for this part..

It was Superb update.. you are brilliant at keeping suspense till the end 👏

I was expecting dadi is murderer.. last mein Ramdhari nikla.. par koi nahi jail ho gayi I am happy for that

Awesome TS Minu.. Loved it 👍🏼

Thank you for this 😊 .. Keep writing more..

Edited by msdfan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
I am late to reply. I know. :(

But Munshiji made his entry in the story in this part at right time. 😛

And comes the property paper twist.😲

How cute! Sameer linked Rohan's attitude with Naina's antics.😛
And caressed Rohan's hair. Brother's bonding. 😳

How did the vase break?😲

After Post Mortem report they goes and now lil Deepika is called. Yehi baaki tha!

Amul chocolate bar brought Sameer's smile 😃

Toh Sameer broke the vase.
And he was suspected..😲

Dadi in her character pushing back locks behind ears. 😆

Wow, now dadi is the suspect. 👏

Kya explanation from Ashu for suspicion. 👏

Imported jug in jail. 🤣

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Wow, now Ramdhari enters the story. He is the killer!!!

It was totally unexpected.

So, you brought the story to the end after many twists and turns and successfully could send the evil dadi to the jail. That's the best thing for now. 👍🏼

Thanks for making our wish fulfilled. Though in reality we would not like anyone to be in jail for false allegations. Yet for this story we accept it heartily.🤣 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Rucha21

Wow...This was brilliant..👏

I will not write anything more so that the suspense remains intact..😃

You introduced chingari in this..kale ke hunger strike ka effect hain..😉

I am amazed at your writing skills, you captivate the reader's attention to every minute details and that is unbelievable..

Keep Writing..👍🏼

THANKS Dear..😃 Effect to thaa..😆 Glad that you loved this so much.😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing. .loved the twist..keep it up
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Posted: 7 years ago
Minu Darling,
Now you are truly my sister... (please don't make me an aunt..in spite of my 'old' age!)

I really need time to enjoy this story...
Need some time read this at leisure and enjoy it..will come back.

Meanwhile please send a PM once you update the next part.

Love
Kshithi

PS: Did you know I once wrote a story from a rat's POV? No, really!! That is why you are my sister!!
Edited by Muggle_Diaries - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Muggle_Diaries

Minu Darling,

Now you are truly my sister... (please don't make me an aunt..in spite of my 'old' age!)

I really need time to enjoy this story...
Need some time read this at leisure and enjoy it..will come back.

Meanwhile please send a PM once you update the next part.

Love
Kshithi

PS: Did you know I once wrote a story from a rat's POV? No, really!! That is why you are my sister!!

I am myself an aunt of 3 school going kids..😆 Take your own time Sister sweety.😳 Its completed.So you can enjoy more.Take better care care of yourself..🤗
Link PLZ for the story.😳
With love-
Minu.

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