|| @@ Dear Friends Happy Holi @@|| - Page 5

Originally posted by: sugar.and.spice

i just completed reading Mere rang main rangne waale deep 😳 and just like your other stories, it was awesome 👏 ⭐️

Thanks a lot dear...😳

you have a special skill of writing very interesting beginnings! 👍🏼 your beginnings make the readers want to read more, and this fs is no exception 😳 madhu's dream sequence was lovely and the scene right afterwards generated curiosity as to what the past was 😲

aww that's so sweet of you Tina ..❤️

RK's and Madhu's scenes were super entertaining ⭐️ ⭐️ there was both romance ❤️ and humor 😆 RK's jealousy was the best 😛 and the mirchi wali gujiya's experience of RK 😉 😆

RK's confession and his reunion with Madhu was also lovely 😳 i am glad they opened up to each other ❤️ the way RK scolded himself + Madhu's response to it was super cute 😳 teda hai par mera hai 👍🏼 😉

Hehe ..ya afterall its Rishbala's holi 😉

the social media scene was a great inclusion 👏 it added detail to the story since RK was a celebrity ⭐️ (and yes i agree with the fan that wanted a movie with RK and Madhu together ❤️ 😉)

the shower holi after that ☺️ hehehe super fun and romantic it was 😳 Madhu's filmy dream came true in the end 😳

another great thing is that you didn't rush the story deep 👏 you concluded it gradually by showing RK and Madhu at the Holi party, the use of the gujiyas 😆 (+RK's action hero avatar 😳), those close to RK and Madhu etc. 👍🏼

the last bit was truly beautiful with the dialogues on color linking to the setting of the fs 😳 thanks for this colorful love story dearie ❤️

I am so happy you loved it