ViDiti SS: Jealousy [Completed]

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siya

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Posted: 7 years ago

This is babygirl287's new SS. She will be updating it soon. Enjoy!!

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Chapter 08 (last chapter)

Edited by loveinshi - 7 years ago

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Babygirl287

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Posted: 7 years ago

Hi guys ye chota sa prolog and end me jo imaginary character k bare me kaha tha uska description, padhke batana kaisa lga.

Vikrant: Aditi tum abhi tak ghar nahi gayi?

Aditi: bas nikal hi rhi thi

Vikrant: chalo mai tumhe drop kar du aur ye Guru gya?

Aditi: ha wo use ek bhangarwale k pass jana tha toh woh jaldi chala gya.

Vikrant: wah ajkal bhangar khud bhangar wale k pass jane lag,kya baat hai

Aditi: Vikrant kya tum bhi uske piche padhe rehte ho hamesha

Vikran's thought: main uske ni wo tumhare piche padha rehta hai

Vikrant: aisa ni hai,khair chodo,dinner k liye chalte hai fir tumhe ghar chod dunga.

(Tabhi ek call ata hai Vikrant ko aur wo Aditi k sath ek bungalow pr pahuchta hai)

Vikrant: Desai kaha hai victim?

Lady: Vikrant

Vikrant: Shaina

(And then Shaina Vikrant ko jor se hug krti hai & surprisingly Vikrant bhi usko hug karta hai & then Aditi coughs and wo ek dusre se alag hote hai)

Aditi: lgta hai aap dono ek dusre ko kafi ache se jante hai?

Shaina: ha hum college me sath the mtlb kafi ache dost the

Vikrant: ha kafi ache

(Dono fir ek dusre ko dekhte hai aur Aditi ko phir khasna padhta hai)

Shaina: Vik I need ur help,please help me

Vikrant (uske gaal pr hath rakh ke): tumhe mujhe please jaroorat nahi aur ye tum janti ho

Aditi: ha apki help karna humari duty hai. Hum DONO apki help krenge

Guru: toh mai ghar jau?

Aditi: hum TEENO apki help karenge.

Shaina: thanks. I'm glad Vik ki tum yaha ho (and wo yeh keh k use fir hug krti hai actually dono hi hug krte hai)

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Ok toh ab bari Guru k character ki bari :-

GURU ek 20 saal ka college student hai jiska real name kuch or hai but kyunki wo technology and flirt karne me sare college boys ka boss hai toh sab usko pyar se GURU bolte hai. Usne ek case me viditi ki help ki kuch gadgets bana ke aur fir Aditi ki request pr use team ka part banne ki permission mil gyi. Aditi pr uska bohot bada crush hai aur wo kabhi-2 uske sath flirt krta hai,isi wajah se Vikrant usse chidhta hai aur Guru Vikrant se.

So, kaisa laga prolog & Guru ka character?

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AMIKA14

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Posted: 7 years ago

Mast laga!!!!!Mazaa aa gaya dono ka jealous part dekh kar.😃

Cant wait for next part

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siya

@loveinshi

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Posted: 7 years ago

Jealousy zalak rahi Hai Ha.. 😆 maza anewala hai

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Babygirl287

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Posted: 7 years ago

Viditi SS: Jealousy

(J.N. Studios, Mumbai)

Director: ok,pack up.

Nia: Good shot Shaina

Shaina: thanks

Nia: waise aj k newspapers me padha k tumhara Rohan se breakup ho gya,mujhe toh laga tha k woh tumhara Mr. Perfect hai.

Shaina: Mr. Perfect, ha mujhe bhi yhi laga tha but no luck,anyways mai bohot tired hu,bye.

Nia: ok bye.

(Shaina vanity me makeup utar rahi hoti hai k tabhi use ek awaj sunayi deti hai)

Voice: mujhe tumhari khoobsurati chahiye

Shaina: kon hai,Nia is it you?

Voice: mujhe tumhari khoobsurati chahiye

Shaina: kon hai? Aur ye kya mazak hai? Dekho jo bhi hai bahar ao aisa faltu joke mujhe nahi pasand,bahar ao warna abhi producer ko phone karti hu ao bahar.

Voice: mujhe tumhari khoobsurati chahiye

Shaina: that's it,mai abhi producer sir ko call krti hu

(Wo apna phone uthane k liye mirror k samne jati hai aur use mirror me ek ajeeb si aurat ka reflection dikhayi deta hai aur wo darr ki wajah se behosh ho jati hai & uski team k log use uske ghar le jate hai aur kuch der baad use hosh ata hai)

Shaina: ahhh...mera sir,mai yaha mere ghar pe kaise?

Nia: tum vanity me faint ho gyi thi to hum tumhe yaha tumhare ghar le aye

Shaina: hmmm...thanks

Shaina: Nia ek glass pani la dogi

Nia: ya sure

(Nia k jane ke baad)

Shaina: pata ni wo sab kya tha,kuch samjh ni aa rha,kon hai waha?

(Use shadow apni or ate dikhti hai but koi insaan ni dikhta)

Shaina (chillate hue): Nia! Nia! Shanti! Shanti! Nia! Help! Help! Chodo mujhe mujhe chodo bachao...ughh...

Nia: Sha kya hua tu chillayi kyu? Aur tu ye niche kaise gir gayi?

Shaina: mai giri nahi kisi ne mujhe feka

Nia: kisne?

Shaina: pata ni

Shanti: didi ji koi bhoot prait ka...

Nia: shanti chup kr

Shaina: ni Nia kuch ajeeb hai yaha,koi mujhe marna chahta hai,mera phone de

Nia: ha...ye lo

Shaina: hello police

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(Shaitan chowki)

Vikrant: Arre Aditi tum abhi tak ghar ni gyi?

Aditi: ni kuch kaam tha socha yeh khatam karke jau

Vikrant: hmmm...aur ye Guru gya kya?

Aditi: ha use bhangaar wale k paas jana tha isi liye wo nikal gya

Vikrant: are wah aaj kal bhangaar khud bhangaar wale k pass jane laga,kamal hai!

Aditi: Vikrant kya tum bhi uske piche pade rehte ho humesha

In Vikrant's mind: main uske nahi wo tumhare piche pada rehta hai hamesha

Vikrant: nahi aisa kuch ni,mujhe samajh nahi ata tumne use team me rakhwaya hi kyu?

Aditi: Vikrant tum jante ho uske gadgets kitne useful hai & usine last case me tumhari jaan bachayi thi

In Vikrant's mind: jaan jala bhi toh raha hai

Vikrant: par wo 1number ka flirt hai,tumhare hi sath kitna flirt krta hai

Aditi: college me hai wo abhi,iss age me flirt krna normal hai aur wo koi cheap bate ni krta sirf tarif krta hai meri kabhi kabhi

Vikrant (in a very low voice): toh hum kya mar gaye hai

Aditi: hunh...kya?

Vikrant: are mai keh raha tha k kabhi-2 kare ya humesha flirt karta toh haina

Aditi: tum to aise keh rahe ho jaise tumne kabhi flirt ni kia kisi se,ha waise tumhe dekh k lgta ni k kia hoga

Vikrant: arre ni ni maine to bohot flirt kia hai

Aditi: kya?

Vikrant: matlb nahi nahi kiya koi flirt wirt ni kia,kabhi ni kia. Khair wo sab chodo der ho gyi hai baki ka kaam kal karna,pehle dinner k chalte hai kahin fir mai tumhe ghar chod dunga.

Aditi: thik hai

(Vikrant ko Suresh sir ka phone aya tabhi)

Vikrant: ok sir,jai hind.

Vikrant: chalo ek actress ka case hai,urgent hai sir ne kaha hai, to Mehra Bungalow me jana hoga

Aditi: thik hai mai Guru ko bata deti hu

Vikrant: ni tum ruko mai batata hu

Vikrant: ha sun konse bhangaar wale k pass bika hai?

Guru: kya?

Vikrant: abe konse bhangaar wale k pass ruka hai?

Guru: ye apni chowki k pass hai na wahi,kyu?

Vikrant: ek case hai,tu wahi ruk mai tujhe wai se pick karta hu

Guru: aur meri bike?

Vikrant: wo bhi teri hi trh hai, bhangaar toh usi bhangar wale ko bech de,10-20 rupees mil jayenge

Guru: meri bike bhangaar ni hai apki wo gadi se achi hai,aur Aditi kaha hai usne call kyu ni kia humesha to wo hi krti hai

Vikrant: aye jada uchal mat chalna hai ya ni ye bol

Aditi: Vikrant idhar do phone, ha Guru tum jaldi se yaha ao urgent case hai

Guru: ha Aditi mai abhi aya

Aditi: hmm...

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Ok toh yeh tha first part, kaisa lga, batana jaroor

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Dishi

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Posted: 7 years ago

It was amazing

Waiting for next update!!!!!

Update soon!!

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AMIKA14

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Posted: 7 years ago

Loved it babygirl!🤗Mera favourite:

JAAN BHI TOH WAHI JALA RAHA HAI

TOH HUM KYA MAR GAYE HAI

AND KONSE BHANGAR WALE KE PASS BIKA HAI.🤣

GIRL YOU NAILED IT!

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siya

@loveinshi

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Posted: 7 years ago

Mast hai yaar.. can't wait to see a very jelous aditi and vikrant.. aur bichara guru 🤣

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Babygirl728

@Babygirl728

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Posted: 7 years ago

Viditi SS: Jealousy (Part 2)

(Viditi & Guru Shaina k ghar ja rahe hai,car me)

Guru(loudly): tu tu tu meri ri ri mai tera ra ra hone laga...

Vikrant: arre oh Hritik Roshan ki bigdi photocopy, tu chup rahne ka kya lega

Guru: do large size pizza

Vikrant: do? Abe pait(stomach) hai ya kua? Akele do kha lega?

Guru: ni ek mere liye aur ek Aditi k liye,Aditi tumhe bhi pizza pasand haina?

Aditi: ha pasand hai

Vikrant: pizza sehat k liye hanikarak hota hai bilkul teri singing ki trh

Guru: jb life me tension ho toh pizza and singing kafi help krti hai

Aditi: tumhe kya tension hai?

Guru: hai ek Singhal tension meri life me

Vikrant: ha meri life me bhi ek problem hai jo sab problems ki Guru hai

Guru: mai studies ki baat kar rha tha

Vikrant: mai bhi case ki baat kar rha tha

Aditi: bato bato me tumne galat turn le lia

Guru: hahahaha...

Vikrant: has mat ye short cut hai

Aditi & Guru: acha,highway wala short cut?

Vikrant: ha tum logo ko kuch pata nahi. Acha thik hai ab tum log itna keh rhe ho toh mai u turn le leta hu.

(Aditi & Guru ek dusre ko 'humne kab zid ki' wala look dete hai)

(35 minutes k baad wo log Shaina k ghar pahuchte hai. Wahan already kuch police wale hai)

Vikrant: ha Patel victim kaha hai?

Shaina: Vikrant!

Vikrant: Shaina!

(Dono ek dusre ko hug krte hai,akhir purane lovers jo hai. Unka hug lamba hote dekh Aditi ko khasna pada aur uski khasi se dono alag hote hai pr hath ni chodte ek dusre ka & Aditi ka ispe dhyaan jata hai)

Aditi: lagta hai aap dono ek dusre ko pehle se hi jante hai

Shaina: ha hum dono college me sath the I mean bohot hi ache dost the...hai

Vikrant: Ha kafi ache dost hai,the,hai

Guru: ha wo toh dikh rha hai kitne ache dost hai k abhi tk hath pakda hi hua hai (yeh sunke dono hath chod dete hai). Waise ap log ko dekh k lgta hai k kafi time se mile ni hai aisa kyu?

Shaina: woh...

Aditi: kaam ki baat karle zara kahiniya fir kabhi sun lenge,Suresh sir ko kahani toh bata ni skte haina hum. To ms. Ya Mrs. Mehera

Shaina: Ms. Shaina, actually call me Shaina plz

Aditi: yeah Shaina kya problem hai?

Vikrant: ha Sha is everything ok?

Shaina: No Vik someone wants to kill me. I need ur help,please help me Vik

Vikrant(uske cheeks pe hath rakh k): U know k tumhe mujhe please kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi

(Aditi fir khasti hai)

Guru: Aditi u ok? Pani du?

Aditi: nahi mai thik hu. Don't worry Shaina, apki help krna humari Duty hai. Hum DONO apki help karenge.

Guru: toh mai fir ghar jau?

Aditi: Hum TEENO apki help karenge.