ViDiti SS: Jealousy [Completed] - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Mazaa aa gaya!Gosh dono Aditi aur Vikrant ke jealous parts sahi the!Well babygirl I hope Guru ek villian type character na ho because I am seriously loving his funny nature.😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Well babygirl ek doubt hai...Shaina kya Vikrant ki ex girlfriend hai ya sirf aachi friend hai.Sorry par mein Vikrant ko sirf Aditi ke saath imagine kar sakti hoon.Plz Shaina ko sirf acchi dost bana ke rakhna...well agar tum chaho toh varna tum apne plot ke hissab se shaina ka character karna.😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Singhal ki tension
Ha ha
Completely perplexing one!
U are such an amazing writer
Update next spoon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Great update babygirl! Tumne to vik aur Sha ka ship name bhi bana diya 😆 aur sahi kaha guru ne..bada entertaining scene honewala Hai..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi everyone...
1. Thanks for your supportive comments.
2. Guru negative character bilkul ni hai.
3. Shaina Vikrant ki ex hai. Kyunki Aditi itni sweet and understanding hai ki mujhe ni lgta wo Vikrant ki good friend se jealous hogi but ex girlfriend se toh definitely hogi.
4. Maine VikSha name is liye rakha coz mai baar-2 'Vikrant & Shaina' likhne ki zehmat ni lena chahti ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Jealousy (Part-3)
Aditi: ha toh Shaina detail me batayiye ki kya hua hai? Aur apko aisa kyu lgta hai k koi apko marna chata hai?
Shaina: actually mai shooting khatam kar ke apni vanity me gyi aur tabhi mujhe ek ajeeb si awaz sunai di aur wo baar baar ek hi baat bol rhi thi,"mujhe tumhari khoobsurati chahiye"...
Guru: hahahhahaha...
(viditi use angry look dete hai toh wo chup ho jata hai,matlb sirf hasna ruk jata hai)
Guru: sorry wo mujhe serious situation pe hasne ki badi serious bimari hai,isi wajh se koi mujhe shok sabha pr bhi ni bulata kyunki mai shok sabha pr jata koi emotional baate kr rha hota hai toh meri hasi choot jati hai aur fir logo k hath pair mujh pe choot jate hai...
Vikrant (Guru k kaan me): agar tum chup ni hue toh mere bhi hath pair tujh pe chutenge
Aditi: Shaina please ignore them and continue
Shaina: ha, pehle mujhe lga k koi mazak kar rha hai but jb maine mirror me dekha to mujhe ek darawani aurat dikhi & then mai faint ho gyi. Aur jb hosh aya toh mai apne ghar me thi phir maine Nia,meri friend, ko pani lane k liye kaha,wo jaise hi gyi mujhe ek shadow mere pass ate dikhi but koi insaan ni tha waha mai chillayi but koi pass me tha ni fir uss shadow ni mujhe door fek diwo
(Guru ispe hasna hi jaa rha tha k Vik ne use warning di,uske kaan me)
Vikrant: agar tu hasa toh mai tujhe chatt( terrace) se fek dunga,samjha
Shaina: wo mere pas aa rhi thi tabhi Nia & Shanti aa gye aur mai bach gyi.
Aditi: don't worry Shaina hum..
Vikrant: ha Sha tum chinta mat karo main hu na,tumhe kuch ni hoga
Aditi: sahi kaha Vikrant ne Hum hai yaha kuch ni hoga apko,hum apke ghar ki talashi lena chahenge
Shaina: hmmm...ok
(Aditi and Guru toh uth jate hai par Vik wahi Sha k pass baitha rehta hai,jiski wajah se Adu fir khasti hai)
Guru: Aditi ab toh pani pi hi lo,kabse khaas rahi ho,lagta hai tumhe yahan ki kisi chiz se allergy ho gyi hai,lau mai pani?
Aditi: Guru bewajah mat ho shuru
Aditi: Vikrant toh mai aur Guru jake ghar ki talashi lete hai tum ruko yhi Sha k pass
Vikrant: yeah I think that is a good idea
Guru: hahahaha...
(Aditi use angry look deti hai)
Guru: sorry wo tab ki thodi reh gyi thi toh abhi choot gyi,mai uppar check krta hu
(Aditi & Guru poora ghar check krte hai but unhe kuch ni milta. Toh wo wapas VikSha k pass aa jate hai)
Aditi: humne poora ghar check kia but kuch ni mila
Shaina: but mai sach keh rhi hu...
Guru: ha miss Shaina pr hume kuch mila ni,shayad wo jo koi ya kuch bhi tha wo humare yha ane se pehle hi nikal gya ya gyi ho
Aditi: ha,Shaina tum chinta mat karo hum kal ate hai par tb tk tum akele mat rehna,apni dost ya koi relative ko bula lo
Shaina: Nia hai yaha
Aditi: ok then toh hum chalte hai. Vikrant car keys do mai or Guru jaye
Vikrant: mai bhi chalunga sath
Aditi: acha? Laga ni tha
Guru: ab chalo bhi. Bye ms. Shaina
Vikrant: Sha take care and kisi bhi chiz ki zaroorat ho toh...
Aditi: toh mujhe call kar dena,ye lo mera card. Ab chale?
Vikrant: hmmm...bye
(VikSha hug)
(Car me,Vikrant driving seat pr,Aditi passenger seat pr & Guru back seat pr)
Guru: bhai ab ni raha jata jaldi batao ye Sha ka kya chakkar hai?
Vikrant: chakkar hai ni tha
Guru: oho bhai aisa lag rha hai panch bottle pani pi lia ho aur kahi washroom na ho,plz jaldi batao raha ni jata
Vikrant: ok to suno...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
So everyone kaisa lga ye chapter? And maine last time pucha tha ki Shaina k character me aap kiss actress ko imagine kar rhe ho par kisi ne bataya hi ni,so ab batao,fir mai bataungi k mai kise imagine kar rhi hu.
Read, Like & comment(long plz). 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Babygirl728

Hi everyone...

1. Thanks for your supportive comments.
2. Guru negative character bilkul ni hai.
3. Shaina Vikrant ki ex hai. Kyunki Aditi itni sweet and understanding hai ki mujhe ni lgta wo Vikrant ki good friend se jealous hogi but ex girlfriend se toh definitely hogi.
4. Maine VikSha name is liye rakha coz mai baar-2 'Vikrant & Shaina' likhne ki zehmat ni lena chahti ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Jealousy (Part-3)
Aditi: ha toh Shaina detail me batayiye ki kya hua hai? Aur apko aisa kyu lgta hai k koi apko marna chata hai?
Shaina: actually mai shooting khatam kar ke apni vanity me gyi aur tabhi mujhe ek ajeeb si awaz sunai di aur wo baar baar ek hi baat bol rhi thi,"mujhe tumhari khoobsurati chahiye"...
Guru: hahahhahaha...
(viditi use angry look dete hai toh wo chup ho jata hai,matlb sirf hasna ruk jata hai)
Guru: sorry wo mujhe serious situation pe hasne ki badi serious bimari hai,isi wajh se koi mujhe shok sabha pr bhi ni bulata kyunki mai shok sabha pr jata koi emotional baate kr rha hota hai toh meri hasi choot jati hai aur fir logo k hath pair mujh pe choot jate hai...
Vikrant (Guru k kaan me): agar tum chup ni hue toh mere bhi hath pair tujh pe chutenge
Aditi: Shaina please ignore them and continue
Shaina: ha, pehle mujhe lga k koi mazak kar rha hai but jb maine mirror me dekha to mujhe ek darawani aurat dikhi & then mai faint ho gyi. Aur jb hosh aya toh mai apne ghar me thi phir maine Nia,meri friend, ko pani lane k liye kaha,wo jaise hi gyi mujhe ek shadow mere pass ate dikhi but koi insaan ni tha waha mai chillayi but koi pass me tha ni fir uss shadow ni mujhe door fek diwo
(Guru ispe hasna hi jaa rha tha k Vik ne use warning di,uske kaan me)
Vikrant: agar tu hasa toh mai tujhe chatt( terrace) se fek dunga,samjha
Shaina: wo mere pas aa rhi thi tabhi Nia & Shanti aa gye aur mai bach gyi.
Aditi: don't worry Shaina hum..
Vikrant: ha Sha tum chinta mat karo main hu na,tumhe kuch ni hoga
Aditi: sahi kaha Vikrant ne Hum hai yaha kuch ni hoga apko,hum apke ghar ki talashi lena chahenge
Shaina: hmmm...ok
(Aditi and Guru toh uth jate hai par Vik wahi Sha k pass baitha rehta hai,jiski wajah se Adu fir khasti hai)
Guru: Aditi ab toh pani pi hi lo,kabse khaas rahi ho,lagta hai tumhe yahan ki kisi chiz se allergy ho gyi hai,lau mai pani?
Aditi: Guru bewajah mat ho shuru
Aditi: Vikrant toh mai aur Guru jake ghar ki talashi lete hai tum ruko yhi Sha k pass
Vikrant: yeah I think that is a good idea
Guru: hahahaha...
(Aditi use angry look deti hai)
Guru: sorry wo tab ki thodi reh gyi thi toh abhi choot gyi,mai uppar check krta hu
(Aditi & Guru poora ghar check krte hai but unhe kuch ni milta. Toh wo wapas VikSha k pass aa jate hai)
Aditi: humne poora ghar check kia but kuch ni mila
Shaina: but mai sach keh rhi hu...
Guru: ha miss Shaina pr hume kuch mila ni,shayad wo jo koi ya kuch bhi tha wo humare yha ane se pehle hi nikal gya ya gyi ho
Aditi: ha,Shaina tum chinta mat karo hum kal ate hai par tb tk tum akele mat rehna,apni dost ya koi relative ko bula lo
Shaina: Nia hai yaha
Aditi: ok then toh hum chalte hai. Vikrant car keys do mai or Guru jaye
Vikrant: mai bhi chalunga sath
Aditi: acha? Laga ni tha
Guru: ab chalo bhi. Bye ms. Shaina
Vikrant: Sha take care and kisi bhi chiz ki zaroorat ho toh...
Aditi: toh mujhe call kar dena,ye lo mera card. Ab chale?
Vikrant: hmmm...bye
(VikSha hug)
(Car me,Vikrant driving seat pr,Aditi passenger seat pr & Guru back seat pr)
Guru: bhai ab ni raha jata jaldi batao ye Sha ka kya chakkar hai?
Vikrant: chakkar hai ni tha
Guru: oho bhai aisa lag rha hai panch bottle pani pi lia ho aur kahi washroom na ho,plz jaldi batao raha ni jata
Vikrant: ok to suno...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
So everyone kaisa lga ye chapter? And maine last time pucha tha ki Shaina k character me aap kiss actress ko imagine kar rhe ho par kisi ne bataya hi ni,so ab batao,fir mai bataungi k mai kise imagine kar rhi hu.
Read, Like & comment(long plz). 😊

Too good...plzz continue...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
guru is hilarious.aur Aditi Ki kaasi ka kuch karo
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: mitras

guru is hilarious.aur Aditi Ki kaasi ka kuch karo

uski khaasi to Shaina k jane se hi rukegi ab,she is allergic to Shaina
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
He he
Again it was awesome
Awww poor jealous Aditi
And Vikrant is Anjaan from her jealousy!
Cute one
Waiting for next now!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
Accha now im badly waiting for the next update.. ye kahani to mujhe Sunni Hai ...

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