Ideas to progress Udaan without the leap - Page 2

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Interesting discussion everyone, here how I would've taken the story forward:

Chakor wins the elections and kick hyar out who end up staying in a small cottage in Azaadganj and villagers keep making fun of them (they can stay in a villa in Lucknow because their shady business hasn't been exposed yet).

Suraj convinces Chakor to go on honeymoon before taking office and she agrees. We can see their romance, they'll stay in a small hotel, the owner is harassed by a big businessman to sell it and Sukor will help him in his fight, meanwhile hyar sent their goons to kill Sukor but all their attempt are inept.

After their return, Suraj will restart the water bottle factory and hyar will try to sabotage it but it will finally open, after a few months people start falling ill and the water is blamed, Chakor comes under attack in the media and vows to find out the truth. Hyar are behind the contamination and they end up going to jail.

Originally posted by: Ruby7

The leap promo has released and they has been a mixed response to it. Some excited, some apprehensive, some confused and some like me who firmly believe they don't need to take any leap story wise

Let's look at some crucial points and options they should have considered before taking another leap

Sukor have never really stayed as husband wife under one roof. The writers could focus on showing us that transition. Sukor moving into the haveli, sharing the same bed.

Before Sukor move into the haveli they can show Sukor lavish wedding.

Tejaswani has been away from Sukor for so many years. They could show some of their bonding. They never showed chakor calling Tejaswani mas properly. They could dwell on their relationship. They could show Tejaswani has developed some mental

illnesses bec she was locked on a room for yrs. They can show Sukor get her treated

Yes suraj wants a baby and chakor to wants to fulfill his dream of a happy family but I want to see the journey, I mean suraj discovering chakor is expecting again, Sukor scenes with the doctor, he taking her for regular checkups, a happy godh bhai and suraj being there when doc congratulates him for the birth of the baby girl. Suraj thanking chakor, both holding their baby for the first time. All this phase can be shown slowly over 6 months of so side by side with the a drama based track

The makers could have gone through a infertility issue track too. If executed well that track can get trps up because trp aunties love emotional drama too. They could show Sukor go abroad for treatment.

An abroad track could have been used. They could show chakor is called for some marathon contest and Sukor go abroad. Their they faces conspiracies due to rivals who don't want chakor to win

They could show Sukor collect evidence against hyar and then a mini court track, where Sukor lawyer will turn out to be old enemy of RV

They could show a solid climax for the RV imli track, with high voltage drama. Suraj confronting Imli. After all that, if they don't show that, then what's the point.

They can get rid of imli for few months and bring a new villain, someone linked to RV

They can show a track centering

Chakor marathon career

Suraj opening some NGO or factory

They can show Sukor search for the brides imli sold off and bring them back to their families

They can show ragini come back and claim the property

They can show either kn or vivaan being alive and making come back

They can show new family enter azaadganj who is powerful and their clash with Sukor and villagers

They can show a doc enter azaadganj and he/she create probs

So many ideas, I don't think they need a leap with a baby in the picture.