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Posted: 7 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: teju111

Letter from her Dad and
these lines "Like a bird" and Last one "God did not promise" are fab👏👏
I am totally in love with this update thwish...
glad Anni is back to her old self...
Thanx for the PM dear...
Waiting for weekend is the most abnormal thing in IB fandom...
You are making me do that😳😳


Teju dear
Thank u so much!
It's bout the perspective🤗

With this we feel love of shivika 24 hours of the day,7 days a week. It's my way of connecting with you all too.so let's look had for weekends too😳
Edited by Thwisha617 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Srishank

Hey Thwish

Firstly thnks for the link 😃
It feel so gud .To read this fic of urs
So amazing
Pinky's redemption is above everything
N the SSOnis no were to be seen
It's only Annika Shivaay
From his leaving his OM n his luxuries
N widout thinking a bit jus holding Anni hand in her most difficult times n understanding her to the core
His love for Anni is limitless wid out boundaries
The happiness of Anni on coming to know her home n the guilt if shivaay is explained very well
Very happy for u darling
Luv u to moon n back. 😳👏


Sri🤗

IF isn't complete without you. Love u to the moon n back too!

Thank you for taking out time n reading this 😳 n loving it!
Edited by Thwisha617 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#53

Thank you dear.
Thank you for reading it!
Edited by Thwisha617 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54
Thwisha,

I felt like listening to a song while reading your story ! Your narration had a music in itself... I am not talking about the story but your writing style... its has a very unique flavor ,style with a poetic flow ! And I loved reading it ! As much as I enjoyed reading the story, I enjoyed even more the narration and the story telling !

What makes a writer stand out is his/her style of narration and I can clearly see you there standing out with your own style !

Coming to the story, I loved it and how you have drawn parallels with the nature and the story !
Rightly said that Shivika are in such a phase of relationship where a physical separation is impossible.. they have gone through so much that this thing of past cannot undo the relationship base that they have shared together right from the day one!
So yes the emotional separation does a complete justice to them and both of them are right in their own place !
I cannot wait to read how Annika overcomes this past and ventures into the future with still the doings of the past as memories which make their relationship even stronger !

This is to you 👏 as I am guessing that Shivika has brought out the inner writer in you !
Edited by ithihaas - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: ithihaas

Thwisha,


I felt like listening to a song while reading your story ! Your narration had a music in itself... I am not talking about the story but your writing style... its has a very unique flavor ,style with a poetic flow ! And I loved reading it ! As much as I enjoyed reading the story, I enjoyed even more the narration and the story telling !

What makes a writer stand out is his/her style of narration and I can clearly see you there standing out with your own style !

Coming to the story, I loved it and how you have drawn parallels with the nature and the story !
Rightly said that Shivika are in such a phase of relationship where a physical separation is impossible.. they have gone through so much that this thing of past cannot undo the relationship base that they have shared together right from the day one!
So yes the emotional separation does a complete justice to them and both of them are right in their own place !
I cannot wait to read how Annika overcomes this past and ventures into the future with still the doings of the past as memories which make their relationship even stronger !

This is to you 👏 as I am guessing that Shivika has brought out the inner writer in you !


Rohini,😳

I m out of words to even respond to that. All I can say is Thank you so much for writing so deep for me.The day I m demotivated to write I shall see this n be inspired!.
I shall frame it and keep it at my writing desk!😳

Yes you said it right armaan toh pehle bhi The likhne ke and I used to write for my office but it's only shivika that has bought out this shade in me and all the people who we are associated with us across the forum who are inspiring me to write more.

Thank you once again for your kind words.I m in awe of it:)
Edited by Thwisha617 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#56
I love this fic. This is so beautifully written. Loved reading the last two updates ❤️
The emotions are so beautifully written. The lines in between & the letter was amazing. Such an heart touching update this was!
The hug too was so amazingly described. Shivika have surpassed physical relationship, their love inspires their heart, mind & soul. Finally Anika has started coming out depression, she has started looking forward to her future with Shivaay. It was just beautiful. I can't describe in words how much I loved reading the updates 🤗
Can't wait to read the nxt!
Thank for the PM :)

Sorry for the extremely late reply. Had been really busy last week with assignments & hadn't been online as well!
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PART III A

DARKHAST-A REQUEST

My nights? They we're sleepless

My Thoughts? They were endless

Pitter Patter the rain drops fell making a humming music of their own in the background. Laying in his arms for quite some time now Anika realised one thing that Home wasn't a place, Home was here, being safe in his arms. How much she missed him all these nights, precisely those 30 nights when they slept in different rooms, life singing a different lullaby, each to their own.

Holding Shivaay close she wanted to let go of those still nights where she would hear nothing but silence around her. She prayed to lord every night to take away the pain, take away the suffering, take away her troubles and restore peace and tranquillity in her life. Shivaay also must have been broken seeing me drift apart but he still thought of ways to hold me close. Thank you god for having him by my side in those times. There were times when she wanted to run to him but something stopped as she walked these dark alleys of her life. She further justified, "You were not wrong in your design of life but I was right to walk out too.

Then suddenly reality stuck her and she felt sad that he had left his family for her too. He was the great wall of Shivaay and was loved by everyone deeply too. "What wrong did he do to suffer like this? That thought made her shrug a little away from him, but he caught her caught her at the right time, holding her close yet again.

Eyes still closed he whispered, "What makes you think that I'm going to let you go, now?

Hesitating to say she finally conveyed putting her head close to his heart, "Your Family must be waiting for you back home, I know what they mean to you and you must go back to them now. I will be fine.

Shivaay taken aback by her thoughts, opened his eyes and pulled her face up towards him looking into her eyes, "If I had to go back, why would I be here in first place?

Anika silent with nothing to say kept on looking into those now pale green eyes that she adored to death. She could see that his eyes fell the same pain too as hers. Shaking her a little, he added and wait a minute, "So you mean to say you are not my family?

She was now more silent and looked down.

After 10 minutes with tears in her eyes she looked above and said, "I didn't meant that. I just wanted to say they must be waiting for you. I'm fine now and I can take care of myself.

Craving for a conversation after a long time he frowned, making it look that he understood that the biwi wants to push him away, he got up his elbows still holding her in his arms, "If you are fed up of me & want me to go, please tell me straight, don't hide behind MY family. MY because he knew it was too early to have a tiff with her on OUR Family. He further went on to lie on his side, faking some anger, with his back facing her.

Bereft of the warmth she was getting used after a long a haul, she frowned too. But she shifted herself entwining her fingers with his and giving him a back hug. Close as much as she could. "I didn't mean it that way.

Knowing that she wanted to be by his side, he kind of smiled but kept the frowned mask on not saying a thing. So she again went on, " I would never want you to go. But they are your family right and they love you and I don't want to be the one separating them from you. I craved for a family all my life and I know how it feels to be without one.

Still wanting her to speak her mind he pretended sleeping.

Until She nudged with her nose on the back. He closed his eyes, quite bereft of the sensation, he just revelled in the glory of it. His each sleepless night would be consumed by falling tears, broken dreams and all the more wishing she was here. The only way to keep her alive was to not let her go mentally. So he passed these difficult days echoing her voice in his ears as he browsed through the old videos, with her perfume by his side to fill in her senses as the night slipped by. He would sleep off to her voice laughing with him in her dreams hoping for better times soon.

She very well knew that he wasn't asleep hence not getting a response she huffed over his back she now moved to her side, paving way to a real tiff now. But by the time she reached her side he had already reached her side clearly communicating that he doesn't want to be far away from her anymore. And held her captive in his arms, closer to her ears, taking in her fragrance he said, "You are my family too and I chose to be by your side.

Not wanting even an inch of air between them now, he held her closer as he reminded her of his vows,

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With tears in her eyes she now turned back. Nuzzling close to her heart she just said, "hmmm. To further cheer her up, he reminded her, "In short, zindagi mein tum jitney bhi raite phelaoge, use hum saath milke sametenge.

Understanding the hidden sarcasm, she looked up and with a teasing smile curving her lips, she said , Hawww, matlab isme bhi meri galti hai? Haan, shivaay?

Imitating her, he laughed, " Haww maine kab kaha aise

And they rolled over and danced in laughter feeling like kids again in love. Rain happy to pour a little more, trying to make them understand that Life isn't waiting for the storm to pass, it's about dancing in the rain.

Laughing for some time in their own banter like kids he dimmed the lights on the sides and held her close asking her to sleep. While a beautiful song played in the background. (I urge you guys to put that song "Darkhast from the movie "Shivaay and read the story further.)

Iss qadar tu mujhe pyaar kar
Jisey kabhi na main sakoon
Phir bhula...

Zindagi laayi humein yahaan
Koi iraada toh raha hoga bhala

Anika closing the distances between them held him close, thanking god, "Always love me to such an extent that even if different lifetimes I'm never able to forget you. I'm sure we were meant to be as I see life had an intention to bring us closer. I was out in the sea or lost in its waves, but right here in your arms is where I want to stay. And if I'm wrong to love you like this then I want be wrong again and again and again.

Ki darkhast hai yeh
Jo aayi raat hai yeh
Tu meri baahon mein duniya bhula de
Jo ab lamhaat hai yeh
Bade hi khaas hai yeh
Tu meri baahon mein duniya bhula de

Shivaay understanding her thoughts breaks her out of her reverie with a little shake with eyes still closed conveying silently, "Anika, I request you to sleep on this beautiful night that has made us come closer after a long time. So here in my arms tonight, forget the world and your worries and please retire for the night. These moments are very special as I hold you in my arms so let go of all your pain and forget the world and your worries in my embrace. Since,

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To Be Continued...😳

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PART III B

MY YELLOW UMBRELLA

Sunday Morning, rain is falling
Steal some covers, share some skin
Clouds are shrouding us in moments
Unforgettable
You twist to fit the mold that I m in.

Next Morning Shivaay opened his eyes first to the sound of rain still splashing on the roof. Aware of Anika in his arms he shifted back a little and peered at her face. She looked so serene in his arms. Silently looking at her for a good amount of time he carefully got up, to open the curtains of the room. To allow some light in metamorphically thinking, "Every Sunrise softly sings, nothing is ever lost and it just begins again. Hoping for it to be a new beginning for them starting today, he left her sleeping for a little more time & went in with a smile to start his lazy Sunday with his fav. Saira Bano, as Anika loved to call it.

After an hour Anika got up to a beautiful yet dark morning, still raining in bits and pieces. She smiled at how beautifully Shivaay had opened the curtains to flow in some light and let her sleep a little more. Knowing he must be all ready and making themselves breakfast in the kitchen, she got up and changed.

When he entered the room with their breakfast, "Good Morning said he in his beautiful honey coated voice."

And she chirped back, "Good Morning Shivaay!"

"Come you must be hungry, I have got us some breakfast."

They walked in to the balcony that opened up from their room and had breakfast under a big umbrella as she called it with a seating arrangement. The sound of the rain and their chitter chatter blended themselves well for some time. After the breakfast was over Anika helped him in closing the kitchen for the meal. Once done she took his hand in hers and dragged him into her then, before room.

"Where are we going?" said he.

With him behind her as she marched ahead she said, "I need to show you something."

Shivaay analysing the direction of where she was taking him kept quiet as he knew what was coming.

In her old room she made him sit on the sofa and gave him the magic box, urging him to open it. Shivaay hesitant a little, thought it was too early, "You don't have to do this Anika, I need not see"

She kneeled down beside him and with pleading eyes, said "Why, aren't you a part of me? I want you to see...please."

Shivaay still a bit anxious with Anika's past in his hand opened the box with much care n concern. He first saw and smiled at the picture of all three in their happier times and Anika looked up to him and smiled too pointing, "This is the picture of my 4th birthday, See Ma, Pa and Me."

Shivaay was delighted to see Anika's eyes gleaming with happiness as she explained some memories of her 4th birthday. He was now eager to explore the magic box fast.

He saw some Toys that Anika must have played with. Much to his amazement, they were not dolls, they were cars! Fast racing cars! Understanding his thought she explained, "I used to love high speed cars in those days."

Correcting her, " You mean racer cars right?"

Rolling her eyes, she said, "Haan wohi." Continuing further she explained "whenever we used to go out while other girls wanted dolls and kitchen house, I wanted a high speed car and papa used to be very proud about it. Happy that her daughter was different and liked pace in life."

But her expressions grimed, "But what's the use life suck out my happiness in the same speed!"

And Shivaay heart crashed seeing her sad again, "Anika, look at me."

Still kneeling down she looked into those beautiful green eyes that now looked happier after the last night, "Did you know?"

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Understanding want he wanted to convey she urged him to open the next thing, the wrappers of Dairy Milk! Anika eyes widened at the seeing some food and Shivaay smiled as she went in search for a dairy milk kept in her room "I didn't know that you loved those?"

While she searched for them in the room and got one for them, he asked "Where did u get those from?"

"That's not important Shivaay" said she standing above him. She further went and sat on his knees facing him and offered him a piece holding it in her mouth quite casually. Urging him to bite into the other half, which Shivaay did quite surprisingly.

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While sitting on his lap she now gave him the letter that her father had written for her and asked him to read it aloud. Holding her close he began reading it absorbing the meaning behind every word that formed into a sentence. He realised as he cradled her close that she quite resembled her father in spirit. She was like the wind, open and free. That's why whenever he caged her she retaliated with equal strength, like a tornado in the ocean. Thank God, he never tried to transform her once they both accepted their marriage. Also he realised because she was like the wind, she always chose to be beside him. No wonder she was the support to the Great Wall of SSO.

Lost in his thought as he read the letter, he felt ,She was carefree, the one with both hustle and the heart, glowing the most. Their initial days came to his mind. She always understood ambition was more important than approval and that's what made her glow. She stood out among the other girls for him because she didn't care to fit in. Nothing or nobody could ever dim their light. Instead she taught him how to drown and feel the things above the sky.

But he was sad about one thing, after marriage, somewhere her ambition had diminished. The girl who was once proud of being a working woman in all circumstances had been reduced to just manging their lives. He made a mental note to push her to plan her career more diligently now with him by her side.

As he read the letter to her she realised she was her daddy's daughter grown up to be just like him. Smiling as she rested on Shivaay's shoulder she knew she was always living carefree before god and thus was his favourite child. Setting and wearing the watch of her father at the current time she said to self, "off the storms God had given in her life, he also had given her the calm and peace in terms of Shivaay and like her father said she had to grace this blessing and continue with life.

Last two things left in the box now, were her mother's sarees and the photograph of the complete family. To which Shivaay, asked her "Who is the other girl in the photograph? As far as I remember one of those days in the middle of the night, you have been speaking a name called..."

"What name? "asked she.

Shivaay tried hard to remember, and finally came with it! "Chutki!"

"Hmm... Strange when I went to see more at Uncle's house I heard the name Chutki too as two girls played in the verandah."

"May be you have a sister?"

With this she got up from his hold & her eyes, grew wide with hope, "We need to find her Shivaay! God know where she would be and how she is now. We need to find her now."

"We will find her Anika, give me some time. But I promise we will find her soon!"

With happy tears in her eyes she went in the closet to find the final element of the Magic Box. Her mother's saree. Shivaay confused with whats coming next stood silent at where she had left him. She came to him and draped her mother's saree around them, signifying the completeness that she felt within, after letting him be part of her past. Happy to be around her he held her in his embrace by the waist, under the blessing of Anika's parents in all the form they had. He thanked his stars to be able to guide her towards what was Anika's for all these years.

As she held him by his shoulder under her parent's blessings, the heavy rains showered outside reminding her of their challenges ahead. She didn't ask God for lighter rains because she knew Shivaay will leave no stone unturned to find her sister, the only person from her family alive. Instead she thanked God for having Shivaay in her life. Hence, away from the world under their embrace she held him closer & looked into those beautiful eyes, which meant the world to her. Finally kissing him longingly, she conveyed, "You are the silver lining to my dark clouded days. So thank you for being my Yellow Umbrella. Reuniting themselves back into their own world.

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Edited by Thwisha617 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful Thwisha , loved it. Waiting for part 2.
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hayye Thwisha... it's so beautiful... ❤️
It's a deep and thoughtful conversational piece, and you put a lot of feelings in it. Gorgeous 👍🏼

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