#3Song Os Thon : Sang sang yun chalun by akriti154 on pg 137 Mar 29

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Sanjna55

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Posted: 7 years ago

#501

Hey

Wonderful Os Akkuu

Love it

Sad. at last

He is living in her memories or to say imagining her

Felt bad for ruhi

But Beautifully written

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#502

very emotional os. loved it.

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lakshmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#503

Tere mere

Sorry for late reply dear

Superbly written dear

Amma is too much she doesn't care about her daughter happiness more worried about community and all

Vishal was amazing person because of him only ishra had courage to convince their love to their family

Poor girl she plan to quit her life

Both are in deep pain thank God finally they become one

Loved his gifts

Last part was awesome dear

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Sanjna55

@Sanjna55

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Posted: 7 years ago

#504

Hey

Sri..

Wonderful yet Emotional Os

Love it

Beautifully Written

Such a lovely One

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lakshmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#505

Soch na sake

Sorry for late reply dear

Amazing os dear

Ishu is superb first meet itself she feel his pain his loneliness

Loved Ishu parents a lot now one can take some random boy to their home give him everything he wanted moreover a family to him

He loves her so much but doesn't want to hurt her parents and Ishu want to move away from them

Thank God this separation make her realised Raman is more than a friend to her

Ishra meet up was emotional

What an amazing father he is

He doesn't care about society

Moreover he accepts Raman as his own give his daughter to him was outstanding dear

Finally Raman confess his love to her

She is so bold love her like this

Totally loved it

Happy for ishra

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sweetdivya24

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Posted: 7 years ago

#506

Superb n emotional os..

Raman use to get drunk to kill his loneliness..

Flashback was so emotional..

He took a case against mla's son n won it..

Mla as a revenge hurted ishru landing them into coma..

Raman lost the essence of his life..

Ruhi came out of coma giving some hope to raman ..

Omgg ruhi plead to raman for a kiss to ishu was emotional.

I wish if ishu would have also came out of coma .

Then it would have been a happy os...

Beautifully penned down ..loved it...

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lakshmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#507

Tu meri Aashiqui

Sorry for late reply dear

Heart wrenching update dear

Poor Ruhi

I am unable to control my tears while reading

While reading I doesn't feel it's hallucinations of him feel like real

He doesn't accept moreover his heart doesn't accept she is no more in this world ..

He is seeing her everywhere .

Poor girl she lost her mom and his papa is in another land

She has so much pain inside and unable to handle her papa

Moreover doesn't want him to hurt go on with flow

Really she is amazing daughter to ishra especially Raman

She hides her pain for him

He his complaint to Ishu that she is always interrupting their privacy with out knowing she is not with him

Fantabulous

Outstanding written ⭐️⭐️⭐️

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arooshi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#508

Sorry If I would hurt anyone...But one thing I want to say...

This is the second time I am reading a story where Raman fought to bring justice to a raped and murderer victim...And he himself get brutally punished for that. By loosing his everything..His wife..His daughter.. his parents..

So my question is ..What message writers want to give us by this... That do not fight for any wrong.. let it happen...You keep your eyes and ears closed.. otherwise you will loose everything in your life...

Many people read these stories...They may get scared seeing the out come these stories give...People will never help anyone in fear...

PLEASE its a request dont do this...Spread positivity...

I didn't intend to hurt anyone...Maybe they want to write just a story...Or want to show people who saved himself gets destroyed...But these things repurcate in our minda.. please write positive stuff dear...

There are writers also who write this stuff but at the end shows good wins...They overcome the evil...End on a positive note please...

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Jasmine

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Posted: 7 years ago

#509

Raman is a lawyer who had to suffer just because he punished a criminal.the murder attempt scene of ishru was very painful.I have seen this in 2 Malayalam movies.but what I liked here is they both didn't die unlike the movies.thank you for that.ruhi recovering from coma and her scene with ishra was very emotional .loved their hope that ishita will also be alright one day.beautiful song to suit the situation

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Ishrasoul

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Posted: 7 years ago

#510

hi friends.
Enjoy reading
Ishra One Shot: Mera Mehram tu

Kuchh rishton ka namak hi duri hota haiNa milna bhi bahut zaruri hota hai
Raman sitting on bed holding the photo frame of ishita holding with their three year son... Tears were flowing from his eyes... He traces his fingers on photo and says: ishita why you dont understand me...
Dum dum, dum dum tu meraDum dum, dum dum mera hal
Dum dum, dum dum..
He takes his phone and dails ishita number after rings ishita finally takes the call and raman says: ishita...
Ishita doesnt respond...
Tu baat kare ya naa mujhseChaahe aakhon ka paigham na le
Raman: ishita muje bhi samajhne ki koshish karo... Adi mera beta hai mein usky liye kabhi kuch galat nahe chahonga...i know you are angry with me but leaving the house is not the solution... Tum sun rahi ho na..

Par yeh mat kehna arre oh pagleMujhe dekh na tu, mera naam na le
Ishita: tumhara kiya decision hai...
Raman: tum janti ho...
Ishita ends call while raman tries to convince her but nothing works as ishita has already ended the call.. Raman closes his eyes in frustration not able to clear the mess between both...
Tujhse mera deen dharam haiMujhse teri khudayi
Tu bole to main ban jaoonMain Bulleh Shah saudaiMain bhi nachoon
Raman: ishita aik chance to do muje ... Meri baat rakhne ka moqa to do.. Muje tumhain manane ka moqa to do... Milne jata hoon to tumhare appa milne nahe dete aur jab phone karta hoon hamesha tum cut kar deti ho...
Main bhi nachoon manau sohne yaar koChaloon main teri raah bulleyaMain bhi nachoon rijhaoon sohne yaar koKaroon na parwah bulleya
He was looking at floor all with lost hope his mother toshi bhalla comes there and feels bad to see his son broken... She walks towards him and touches his shoulder...
Raman looks at toshi jee and cries hugging his mother saying: maa... Mere adi ko meri zarorat hai.. Muje ishita kay saath rehna hai... Ap janty ho na meri galati nahe hai...
Toshi: raman tu ja aur aj ishita say mil kar hi a usy bata to sahi uska baap kiya khel khail raha hai...ja mere bache meri bahu aur poty ko lay aa...ye ansu ponch...
Ramam wipes his tears and gets determined to get his wife and son back and defeat mr iyer in his game...
Mera har dum dum har dum tu
Mera har dum tu..
Mera mehram tu, marham tuMera dum dum har dum tuMera har dum dum har dum tuMera har dum tu..
He moves out of the house and settled on his bike and start his journey towards iyer mansion...
He gets lost in the flashback how happy they were one month ago...
Flashback
Raman bhalla belongs to a middle class hand to mouth family he works as a Junior account office at multinational company... He meets ishita at a deserted road and saves ishita from goons.. Ishita was full flat on his heroisim...
Ishita daughter of vishvanathan iyer millionare businessman... She gets details of raman and start meeting him.. Both become friends then lovers.. Raman comes with his family to ask ishita hand but mr iyer insults them and reject raman... But ishita stands with bhallas and proves that love matters to her only money is nothing for her...she is not money minded like her dad... She cuts all the ties with mr iyer
Raman and ishita gets married and start their new life.. Everything was going smoothly ishita easily adjusted in bhallas although raman doesnt earn huge but they all were happy whatever they have... Raman and ishita blessed with a son and their life got more beautiful...
One month ago, doctor diagnosed that their son VSD, hole in his heart. Raman and ishita were totally broken listening to the news...
Adi requires a surgery but raman doesnt have enough money for surgery... There mr iyer again marks his entry in ishra life and extending his hand for help but raman refuses and state that he is capable to take care of adi...mr iyer warns raman that he will take away ishu by proving how wrong she was in choosing raman...
This become the bone of contentions... The motherly love of ishita makes her restless she ask raman to take mr iyer help but raman doesnt agrees.. This makes ishita leaves the house...
Flashback ends...
Raman driving his bike remembers all the beautiful moments they both shared how their happiness gets doubled with adi coming in their life..
Mana apna ishq adhooraDil na is pe sharminda haiPura hoke khatam hua sabJo hai aadha woh hi zinda hai
Raman: mein janta hoon ishita tum bhi adi kay liye majboor ho mein mr iyer to kamyab nahe hone donga...
Ho baithi rehti hai ummeedeinTere ghar ki dehleezon peJiski na parwaz khatam hoDil yeh mera wohi parinda hai
He enters iyer mansion and sees ishita standing near window while little adi was in her arms sleeping... His face lit up with smile seeing them..
Ishita looks down and sees raman standing there...raman calls her name but she leaves from there closing window
Bakhshe tu jo pyar se mujhkoTo ho meri rihayi
Tu bole to main ban jaoonMain Bulleh Shah saudaiMain bhi nachoon
Raman looking at close window while ishita too looking at raman hiding behind curtain...
Main bhi nachoon manau sohne yaar koChaloon main teri raah bulleyaMain bhi nachoon rijhaoon sohne yaar koKaroon na parwah bulleya
Mera har dum dum har dum tu
Mera har dum tu..
Raman enters the house mr iyer tries to stop him but raman straightly heads towards ishita room all determined... He enters the roon and sees ishita and adi laying on bed while ishita was caresses adi hairs...
Tu yaad kare ya naa mujhko
He comes and sits beside her.. Ishita ignore raman but raman pulls ishita closer joining their forehead and says: ishita...
Mere jeene mein andaz tera
Ishita pushes raman and glares at him...
Sar aakhon par hai teri naraziMeri haar mein hai koyi raaz tera
Raman looks at ishita with pleading eyes while ishita looks away.. Raman sees his son sleeping carefree he kisses his forehead making adi smile ishita looking at father and son with core of her eyes.. Raman turns to ishita both shares an eyelock their eyes were speaking to each other
Shayad meri jaan ka sadkaMaange teri judai
Raman holds ishita hands in his and takes it to his heart and says: aik baar meri baat suno...
Tu bole to main ban jaoonMain Bulleh Shah saudaiMain bhi nachoon
Raman: tum galat nahe ho per mein bhi galat nahe hoon meri baat to sunlo...
Main bhi nachoon manau sohne yaar koChaloon main teri raah bulleyaMain bhi nachoon rijhaoon sohne yaar koKaroon na parwah bulleya
A lone tear eacape from her eyes... Raman hugs ishita and cries while ishita too clung on him and cries...
Mera har dum dum har dum tu
Mera har dum tu..
Mera mehram tu, marham tuMera dum dum har dum tuMera har dum dum har dum tuMera har dum tu..
Raman breaks hug and wipes her tears and says: ghar kiyon chora...
Ishita looks down: raman adi needs surgery... Appa ne kaha wo help kar daingay.. Ap maan nahe rahy thy... I cant see pain of my son...
Raman: mein mar gaya tha kiya...
Ishita: yehi ego raman...phr wohi...
Raman: ego nahe ishita... You and adi are my responsibility...
Ishita: appa nana hai adi kay...
Raman: muje loan mil gaya hai ishita...adi ki surgery hosakti hai aur usky liye mr iyer ka ehsaan nahe lena hoga...
Ishita looks at raman...
Raman: tumhain pata hai meine kiyon mana kiya... Mr iyer mere bete ki bemaari ko use kar kay tumhain ye prove kar dein that i am not capable to fulfill the needs of my wife and son aur tum muje choor do...
Ishita shockingly looks at raman... She says: appa aisa nahe kar sakty...
Raman: aisa hi hai ishita... Tumhain meri baat pay yaqeen nahe hai kiya...
Ishita: wo itne kaise gir sakty hain... Mein abhi ja kar baat karti hoon..
Ishita gets up and runs to mr iyer room to talk to him but gets shocked listening to mr iyer who was talking to bank manager to cancel raman loan at any cost..
She was totally broken she moves back and goes back to her room start packing her bag and was continuously crying... Raman holds ishita hand... Ishita looks at raman and cries: i am sorry raman... Meri galati hai sab i shouldnt have trusted appa..
Raman hugs her and says: it wasnt your fault..
Ishita: chalo ghar chalty hain raman..
Raman nods and takes adi in his arms and trio were leaving the house when mr iyer comes and stops them.. He start his drama...
Mr iyer: ishu where are you going
Ishita: apne ghar...
Mr iyer: this is also your house ishu... You will not get anything by going there your husband is just good for nothing he cant even afford to treat his son... Wahan jaogi to tumhara adi mar jayega...
Listening to his words ishita gets angry and shouts: enough... Bus chup ho jaiye... Warna mein bhool jaongi kay ap mere baap hain... Dont you feel shame apne hi naati kah bare mein aisa bolte hue...
Mr iyer: ishu...
Ishita: i trust my raman... He never deny any of our wish he will make our son alright apki tarhaan nahe jo is chahty hain kay raman ka loan disapprove hojaye... Sharam ani chahiye...
Mr iyer: haan to galat kiya hai isme.. Dekhna khud wapis aogi aur mery samne roogi... Ye raman kuch nahe kar payega..
Ishita: today you have proved one thing that i am an orphan in this world meri amma Kay saath appa bhi nahe hain.. Aur mein kabhi wapis nahe aongi... Chahe kuch bhi hojaye .. Meri family say door rahye.. Aur apni games band kar dijhe warna police complain kar dongi...
Mr iyer: ishu...
Ishita: i just hate you...
She holds raman hand and trio moves out iyer mansion... Seeing ishita too much disturb.. Raman hugs her and says: parehsaan mat ho humara adi theek hojayega... Ishita nods and rest her head on his chest and says: i know...
Raman: ab smile to dedo...
Ishita smiles... Adi opens his eyes and sees his papa.. He exclaims: papa... Raman hugs him and showers kisses on him and says: dadu kay pass chalain.. Adi nods and smiles widely.. Trio heads to their home sweet home promising to each other to be in every thick and thin of life...
Thats it my dear friends.. I really hipe you all will like it waiting for your lovely response... Dont forget to hit like also...

Edited by ishrasoul - 7 years ago

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