#3Song Os Thon : Sang sang yun chalun by akriti154 on pg 137 Mar 29 - Page 29

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Hlw frnds I'm here with my first Os for this osthon the song is"Chaar Kadam " suggested by "Sunshine _Divan" I'm telling you people beforehand that I can't guaranteed that it will be nyc because I had completed it in just in one day...

Chaar Kadam


Raman was working on lappy inside his cabin when someone knocked the door


Raman - yes come in..


Peon - sir CEO sir is calling you in his cabin..


Raman - ok you go I'm coming.. Saying he closed his lappy & headed towards CEO's cabin he reached there & knocked the door


CEO - come in..


Raman entered insidesir u had called me?


CEO - yeah ..saying pours vine in two glass & forward it toward raman


Raman - no sir u know naa I don't drink..


CEO - yeah raman I very well know that u don't drink bt its only fruit vine not alcohol so chill & have it..raman nodded & take it


Raman - bt sir what's the matter u r looking so happy?


CEO - yeah I'm happy & u r the reason of my happiness.. he said with a wide smile


Raman looks him with confused look when he continues "hey don't be confused ok let me tell you actually bcoz of ur article our newspaper has gained no.1 position I'm so proud of you my boy..saying he pat his back


Raman became so happy "really sir is it true? when his frnds cum colleagues mihika & mihir comes from behind "yeah Raman its true congrats yaar saying both hugged raman


Mihika - you know raman ur article "NO BOUNDARIES CAN STOP YOU IF YOU WANT is trending online ppl wants you to start posting it online too..


CEO - yeah it's first time that some newspaper trending like this online you know what ur article has created buzz everywhere bcoz of ur last article that acid attack victim's family got courage to complaint about that criminal who destroyed their daughter's life & now he is behind bar..


Raman - wow sir I'm glad that criminal got punished & sir don't praise me this much bcoz what I write is not for fame but for boost the confidence in every person who suffering from many problems bt didn't had that much courage to voice out against the wrong..trio smiles hearing him


Mihika - awww raman you r really a gem..


Mihir - oye stop ur flirting don't forget ur boyfriend is standing next to you.


Mihika - offo mihir I'm not flirting with him just praising him & I know u r standing next to me so if I want to flirt with him will definitely do in absence of you..saying winked while raman & his sir laughs


CEO - ok now enough for ur teasing session I have another news too ..


Mihika - wow sir is it a good one or bad one?


CEO - good one..hearing this trio saw each other in excitement


Mihir - then tell us immediately sir we can't wait now..


CEO - yeah telling actually our director wants to send raman "Surajgarh..


Raman - Surajgarh bt why sir?


CEO - actually here people still leaving in old myths & customs & their thinking about widow just same as old time so we want that u go there & try to know about it fully & also try to convince ppl that its not ryt to destroy a girl's life just bcoz she lost her husband in earlier age she also a human being like others who wants to leave her life without any boundation & she also have full rights for living a happy life ...



Raman - I understand sir u just tell me when I have to leave?


CEO - tomorrow early morning & yeah mihika too coming with you..


Raman - but why sir?


CEO - actually that villagers don't allows single man in their village so mihika will go with u as ur sister (hearing this mihir chuckles) & yeah don't let them know the reason about ur arrival just tell them that you ppl has come there to know about their rituals, social custom bcoz you want to write a on it..which raman nodded


Mihir - sir I'm also want to go..


CEO - No mihir u can't bcoz in their absence u have to handle everything.. Mihir nodded halfheartedly


CEO - one more thing if u guys done this assignment successfully so u both got promotion raman you'll be the our new "Editor.. hearing this trio became super happy


Raman - wow sir thank you..


CEO - don't thank me its all ur hard work my boy..saying he pat his back & went there while trio hugged each other


Next morning their CEO along with mihir comes to bid bye mihika & raman for their journey about 2 hours they they reached there it's a beautiful village surrounded by greenery & lakes


Mihika - wow Raman its so beautiful naa..


Raman - hmmm yrr so refreshing also..they are talking when raman sees some schools kids were going so he called them


boy - ji bhaiya..


Raman - hello beta what's ur name?


Boy - hello my name is prateek bt everyone used to call me chotu..he said so cutely


Mihika smiles looking himhello chotu I'm mihika nice to meet you.. Saying forward her hand to him & both shakes hand happily


Raman - accha chotu kya yahan pe kahi rhne ke liye guest house milega..


Chotu - yeah yahan pass mein hi h par apko sarpanch ji(head of village) se baat krni hogi..


Raman - ok can u please take us to him..


Chotu -yeah come with me .. Saying he take them towards sarpanch's house soon they reached there


Sarpanch - aap log she her se aaye hai?..he asked seeing their attire


Raman - ji actually we are students & also we r siblings too Hume humare teachers ne ek topic diya h "Social customs & Belief & we want to live here to write on it..saying he saw him that why he is so silent so he again saidwhat happens? Why r u silent?


Sarpanch - baat ye hai ki hume apki baat smjh nhi aayi..Raman saw him in confusion when chotu called him so he went on his level


Chotu - bhaiya they don't understand English..


Raman - ohh


When one man said to sarpanchagar aap chaho toh bula de use when sarpanch ji saidhmmm ye sahi rahega par use ghoongat mein aane ko bola(hmmm it will be ryt bt ask her to come in veil) that man went to call


Mihika- chotu where is he going?


Chotu - to call ishita didi?


Raman - who ishita didi?


Chotu - actually here she is the one who knows this language very well..


After some time they saw (mihika & raman) a girl was coming wearing a pink color simple cotton suit while her head is covered with veil she reached to them & asked to sarpanch "aapne hume bulaya


Sarpanch - han baat ye hai ki yeh log(pointed towards raman & mihika) sheher se aaye hai or wahan ki bhasha mein bol rhe h to tum hme btao ki wo kya bol rhe hai(actually the matter is that these people has comes from a city & they r talking in their language which I'm unable to understand so u translate it in our language & tell me)which ishita nodded & raman tell her everything


Ishita - ye log yahan rehkr humare smaajik reeti rivaj or vishwass(social custom & beliefs) ke baare mein likhna chahte hai..hearing her voice raman mesmerized totally & wants to see her face bt couldn't due to her veil


Sarpanch - thk h hum apke rhne ka ya intejaam krwa dete hai (ok I'll make arrangement for both of you to stay here) ..saying he asked his a man who take them with him soon they got two rooms & slept for some tym when he hears someone's sweet voice he comes out of room & saw that someone is doing Pooja in temple that is in front of their guest house when chotu comes to him "Bhaiya hum apke liye naasta laaye hai


Raman - chotu who is she?..he said pointed towards temple



Chotu - wo hi toh ishita didi hai u know her voice is so sweet like honey everyone loves her a lot or apko yahan ke bare mein kuch bhi jaanna ho toh inse puchh Lena u know she know every place of this village achha bhaiya now I'm going ..saying he went from there while raman's feet automatically headed towards temple he stands behind her after completing her Pooja when she turn seeing her angelic face he lost in her beauty seeing him she passed prasad to him bt he is not in his sense when mihika comes & put her hand on his shoulder & he comes out of his dreamland & takes the prasad..ishita turns to go when he called her


Raman - excuse me Ms. Ishita..hearing she turned


Ishita - ji


Raman - aap bhut sundar hai..hearing this she saw him with shocked expression when mihika interrupted between them "actually he want to say that u have beautiful voice


Raman - yeah..he tried to cover up


Ishita - thanks..


Raman - I want ur help will you?


Ishita - ji boliye..


Raman - I want to roam in every place of this village it can help us to know more about it so that we can complete our topic asap..


Ishita - I'm really sorry BT hume nhi pta yahan ki har jagah ke baare mein..


Raman - bt chotu told me that u know each & every place of this village..


Ishita - phle hum jante the bt ab nhi..saying she went from there without hearing him


Raman - isko kya hua ye aise kyu chli gyi..


Mihika - kya pta..when ishita's mother comes from behind & said "mai btati hu they turned & saw her


Raman - aap kon?


Gayatri - hum ishita ki maa hai..


Mihika - namastey aunty ji..raman too greet her


Raman - aunty ishita ko kya hua?


Gayatri - beta humari beti ke sath toh bhagwan ne hi galat kiya hai..saying she starts telling them


(Ishita is a 22 years girl her father died when she was only 10yrs & in 18yrs age villagers make her marry with a 24 yrs boy who died after one months & now she is leaving her life as a widow)


Gayatri - u know beta meri ishu ek bhut hi khushmizaz ladki(happy girl) thi she always a chirpy girl bt after her husband's death these people (villagers) restricted her to go out pta h meri beti poore 2 saalon se sivay ish mandir ke kahin nhi gyi bilkul chup si ho gyi hai meri bachchi..saying she starts crying while mihika & raman consoles her


Raman - don't worry aunty I'll make ur happy & chirpy girl back..


Gayatri - sach mein beta tum aisa karoge..which he nodded she saw them with so respect & went from there & called them to her house after fresh n up mihika saw him "raman are u falling for her?


Raman - yeah


Mihika - bt u know na this village's custom..


Raman - I know everything & now I'm more adamant to bring her smile back.. Mihika smiles & pressed her hand on him telling him that she is with him soon both reached ishita's house where her mother welcomed them wholeheartedly soon mihika & gayatri went in another room leaving ishra alone


Raman - ishita would u like to come with me?


Ishita - where?


Raman - see me & u both don't know about this village's places so that will be fun ..


Ishita - nhi Hume ghoomna mana or ap waise bhi ek stranger h..when her mother & mihika too comes & after much insisting she agreed mihika makes her ready in mihika's attire & covered her face with stole raman asked "so r u ready to come with ur Mr stranger? Saying he forward his hand & she held it


Bin puchhe mera naam aur pataa
Rasmon ko rakh ke pare
Chaar kadam bas chaar kadam
Chal do naa saath mere (x2)

Bin kuch kahe, bin kuch sune
Haathon mein haath liye
Chaar kadam bas char kadam
Chal do na saath mere


Both roaming everywhere they eats many things slowly ishita starts mixing with him she was so happy bcoz after 2 yrs she was roaming like this she enjoying fully like a kid & raman was so amazed seeing a new ishita from that day they everyday went for outing & slowly ishita too starts loving him while raman too got very much information about that topic even he told ishita about his occupation he also come to know many things about her & with his love the old ishita coming back who lives her life happily & freely..



Hey.. bin kuch kahe, bin kuch sune
Haathon mein haath liye
Chaar kadam bas chaar kadam
Chal do na saath mere


Raahon mein tumko jo dhoop sataye
Chaaon bicha denge hum
Andhere daraye to jaa kar falak pe
Chand sajaa denge hum
Chhaye udaasi latife suna kar
Tujhko hansa denge hum


Hanste hansaate yunhi gungunaate
Chal denge chaar kadam
Yea yeah.. na na nana...
La ra la.. ra.

One day he proposed her bt she denied saying that she is not good for him bt he told her that she is the only one who made for him she was having tears in her eyes & about to say yes when they hears guns sound & they saw that sarpanch(head of village) & his men trap then from all side


Sarpanch- tumhari himmat kaise hui humare gaon ki vidhwa ladki ke sath aise ghoomne ki(How dare you to roam with this widow like this ) when gayatri & mihika too reached their seeing this mihika immediately calls mihir & informed him about everything he said her that he was coming very soon while ishita's mother pleading them that they allow her daughter to live her life happily with raman bt they are not understanding & asked raman to go back from there if he want to save his life bt he denied & said "I'll go from here after taking ishita with him


Sarpanch- wo tumhare saath nhi jayegi(she will not go with you) ..saying he glared ishita but raman saidwo aayegi saying forward his hand & ishita immediately held it..she saw him with so much love & then saw towards villagers without any fear & raman smiles seeing this

Tumsa mile jo koi rehguzar
Duniya se kaun darey
Chaar kadam kya saari umar
Chal dungi saath tere


Villagers became so angry & about to shot them when mihir & CEO reached there with police & soon everyone got arrested bt Raman said "wait sir I want to talk with them his sir nodded when raman startssarpanch ji mai aap sbse sirf ek baat puchhna chahta hu agr ishita ya phr uske hi jaise or ladkiyan ke husband unhe chhodh ke ish duniya se chle gye toh isme unki kya galti hai they also human being like us or unhe bhi aise hi jindagi jeene ki aazadi honi chahiye jaise ki ek aadmi ko hoti wo bhi khushi ki hakdar hain hearing his words everyone's eyes filled & all the villagers including sarpanch asked forgiveness from him & promised him that from now they will not behaves with any girl like this even they let them live there life their own wish IshRa, MiMi,ishita's mother & also their CEO smiles & asked the police to leave them soon Police went from there while everyone blessed ishra for there happy life while raman saw ishita & both shared a serene eye lock & both held each other hands firmly now their new beginning of life is waiting for them..



Bin kuch kahe, bin kuch sune
Haathon mein haath liye
Char kadam bas char kadam
Chal do na saath mere (x2)



Hey.. bin kuch kahe, bin kuch sune
Haathon mein haath liye
Chaar kadam bas chaar kadam
Chal do na saath mere..


That's all for this I hope you all liked so hit the like button if notthen let me know through your comments..


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Harshita
Edited by harshiidiv - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Updated my first Os for this osthon..
Edited by harshiidiv - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely os
Continue soon
Waiting for epilogue
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazingly written beautiful update os dear
Love it so much

While reading my heart beating like anything thank God Raman is back safe and fine

Ishu and baby miss him so badly

Toshiji was lovely mother in law to Ishu come mother

Flashback was fabulous

Raman fall for her at first sight

His determined to do anything for his love Ishu was awesome

Surprise was amazing

Happiness on Ishu face after seeing Raman happy tears was best

Raman talk with Ishu and baby was cute

Totally loved it dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
beautiful os
loved their love story
ishu was missing Raman but he thankfully came before her delivery
amazing
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Posted: 7 years ago
It's so sweet cute n beautiful part awww
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Posted: 7 years ago
Fantastic os di.
Totally loved it so much.
Raman falls for ishu in his first sight. Love the way raman proposed ishu. Fb scenes of ishra are amazing. Raman came back and ishu gets surprised seeing him.
Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful os[DIV]Loved it and enjoyed it to the fullest
It was a very different concept
Ty 4 d pm too
Edited by cooldilkaur - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely os dii
A different ishra story
Ishu is a widow in a village that still believes in myths
Raman fell for her and helped her to get back to the old chirpy her
Loved it dii
Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful os ..
Raman is army officer and fall in love with ishu in their first meet itself. .Ishu was adamant to accept Raman's proposal but later accepted seeing his passionate love..
Before Raman glanced at twinkling starts , waiting for her ..now ishu watching them with gloomy face was Emotional scene ..
Finally her wait is over , Raman came and suprised ishi was lovely scene.

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