MG SS : A CARICATURE OF RELATIONSHIPS |Removed - Page 8

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Posted: 7 years ago
#71
Beautiful update dear. Loved the start. Sam Is just a cunning bitch who only cares about herself in all aspects. She hate her son that's why there is no emotional bond between them and he called her from name. Good 👍🏼
Maan love his son who is results of their one night stand. But I am glad that at least Dhruv have his dad's love with him.
Maan giving div to Sam well it's good for both Maan and Dhruv... 🤗
Waiting for next part dear...
Lovely concept
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Posted: 7 years ago
#72
Loved the prologue
Would like to follow this story
Please add me in your PM list when you send an update...
Thanks
Raahi
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Posted: 7 years ago
#73
Sameera is such an inhumane mother of a sweet child
Shrub is just a mistake for.her n for her body shape.she never gave any motherly affection to her child
Maan had been tolerating her only for.Dhruv
Good if she herself gets out.from their life with her so called boyfriend
Feeling pity on the 4 year old and his young father who wishes to give all his love to his child

Fantastic update👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74

TEASER

You are going baby, asked a teary Amelia, she was all but a mother to dhruv in all these years and he was the apple of her eyes. Dhruv kissed her cheeks and hugged her close. Same was the condition for every member of the malefeur family. Dhruv khurana was a member of this English-french family.

I will miss you aunty mia, I will miss grand-mere, grand-pere too. Dhruv untangled from amelia's hug and went towards the grandfather he had come to love.

I will miss the stables grand-pere. Dhruv pouted, Philip will miss dhruv baby too.

Dhruv could have said more but a small figure clad in baby blue dress came and sat on the lap of her grand-pere making a little space where dhruv khurana was sitting.

Daddy says we will come for holidays Dhuv..

We will see each other daily... said dhruv while he kissed his best friend.

How, she asked innocently to which dhruv looked at his father standing and he in turn asked maan.

Daddy how me and Lyra can see each other..

Video chat baby.. You, Lyra, Alex can have video chat you know.

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Maan froze looking at the woman in front of him, those uncontrollable amount of black curls and honey brown eyes he could recognize anywhere, she was the one who was teaching his son. That annoying Geet handa was his son's teacher.

Maan was in trance when the chit who was holding his son's hand looked towards him and asked.

Maan khurana what are you doing here? The tone she used was not the most professional tone that should be used.

I am the damn vacuum cleaner. What the hell do you think I am doing here? He retorted


Edited by suhaaana - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75
Wonderful teaser dear suhaaana. Dhruv and the family's bonding is really beautiful.
Sometimes, relationships of love and emotions are stronger than blood ties.

But now geet is dhruv's teacher. Does she dislike maan? Maan obviously does, it is clear from his thinking.

But will the Titans clash? Or will they fall for each other? Only time will say that.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76
sad + fun teaser
maaneet meeting that's gonna be fun
I don't want to talk about sad part
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Posted: 7 years ago
#77
Nice teaser
Waiting for Maneet meeting
Aww Dhruv is so cute
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78
Funny teaser loved how maan called himself vacuum cleaner hehehehe really interesting and hilarious
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Posted: 7 years ago
#79
Wow superb teaser
At last they meet

But looks like he knows her before .

Waiting for update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#80
fab teaser!!!
Ah Dhruv has bonded with Amelia's family!
how do Maaneet know each other?
update soon


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