Meeting My Future Wifey -AvNiel ss chapter 3 updated

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Takia

@Bookaholic1988

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Posted: 7 years ago

Hi guys!!! I am a huge fan of Avni and Neil's relationship. I am kind of upset with the current storyline for NK but I don't want to give up on yet because of Neil, I can't lie the man is extremely good-looking. But anyways this story is au of what could have been the start of Avniel's relationship. Three things to remember for this story, dayawanti and all the drama related to that has been dealt, two Juhi does not exist and lastly, Neela Ma is still alive. This is just a story of Neil wooing Avni.

Meeting My Future Wifey

Prologue---

She stood there, lowering her eyes, batting back her anger. Within a second, she brought her eyes back up nearly clashing with my eyes. I being a peacemaker decided to turn my eyes down.Looking at her clenched her fists instead. I hid my smirk every time her knuckles turned from red to white, whenever DD said something based on the law and what her penalty should be for hitting his sirji. I guess that was what got her lose her head because she started to silently hiss it at the poor man, telling him that it was my fault for crossing at the red light. Again, DD must not care for his life because he ended up calling her a liar and a criminal. Claiming that he would make sure that she would end up with a life sentence for an attempt of murder on the ACP. The poor man, he set the final nail to his coffin, without even realizing it. My dear assistant didn't even realize that it was useless fighting against her, after all, she is The ACP's future wife, even if she didn't know that yet and almost tried to kill. But still, Avni Ayshea is too stubborn for her own good, maybe that is why I am so attracted to her. Jab se usse dekha hai tabse usme dubhne ki mein main karta hai, usme mein kho jana ki main karta hai.

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Table of context

Prologue - above

Chapter 1- page 2

Chapter 2- Page 3

Chapter 3- Page 4

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Please comment, hit the like button, or pm me. TBH it is my first time actually trying to write an ss. So I would appreciate any ideas or revisions for my story and thank you 😛

Edited by Bookaholic1988 - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago

looks very promising. looking fwd to reading the FF:)

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Zaini

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Posted: 7 years ago

amazing...looking forward to it...will be waiting...so plz do😉😉😉 update soon

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devil31

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Posted: 7 years ago

Hey!! I loved this plot!! Great storyline👏 I can't wait to read next😳When will you update the next one??????

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Takia

@Bookaholic1988

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Posted: 7 years ago

Chapter 1 - Seeing and loving her

3 months ago

I was trapped. My mom knew that I can never say no to her puppy eyes and that is exactly what she threw at me to force me to come with her to meet her friend. I knew that even if I somehow was able to say no to her, I would have faced a wraith that would have even frightened the devil. So I the great ACP Neil Khanna allowed his mom to drag him for a possible marriage proposal and my wuss of a dad couldn't even save me. So, I suck it up and go inside "Neelu" Aunty's house hoping to not be married by the time I leave. While my mom waited at the door, I stepped towards the garden where I heard a bag drop and then a rope fell. Ever heard of the saying curiosity killed the cat, well I was silently hoping that I don't get martyred in my mom's attempt in marrying me off but I still let my curiosity get to me. I saw her use the rope and jump down from what possibly seemed like her room's balcony. To be honest, I noticed her than, in other words I was bluntly checking her out. With a simple white top that wrapped itself around her and the plain skinny jeans that showed off her curvy girl, she had managed to caught my attention then.Making me realize for the first time in 28 years that I had a type, curvy girls. But guessing from her attempt of running away she didn't want to get married either, but that was fine with me I had no intent on marrying a complete stranger regardless how beautiful I thought she was so I let her walk away while I dealt with our oblivious yet loving mothers. As I sat down and talked to Neela Aunty, couldn't stop thinking about her gorgeous daughter, I wonder if she was anything like her mother, gorgeous and elegant or if she was like filled of different shades and colors but I guess I will never know. So I forced myself to stop thinking of her and pay attention to the conversation.

1 month later

I saw her again. She was waiting in her car for the light to change, when a little girl selling things, she looked at the girl and smiled, increasing her beauty. It felt like forever, while I saw her talk to the girl. I noticed at one point her eyes were filled with unshed tears, while she caressed the girls cheeks. She continued talking to the girl, when all of a sudden she had exited the car and asked the girl something, the girl then nodded and got into her car and they drove off. Later on I found out that the girl was taken to Neela Aunty's house with the girl's family. From what my mom told, the girl's father was died so she was the breadwinner of the house while her mom took care of the babies, and Neela Aunty's daughter had offered the girl's mom a job as a cook for their house in return she got a place to live with them and they would pay for her children's education. She was gorgeous and kind, something that's lacking in a lot of people was found in her. After that moment I couldn't get her out of my head no matter how much I tried.

1 month later

She was dancing in the rain, laughing with the kids who were circled around her. She looked at peace and happy. I wondered what she would like when she was pissed. Probably gorgeous and adorable or maybe she turned into the color of a tomato, naa she would probably only do that when she blushes. All of a sudden the rain stopped and after a good ten minutes so did her dancing with the kids. I saw her shake her hair with the kids acting a bit childish and adorable, while she stepped into a stall and brought cups of tea for herself and the kids. She spent a good amount of time talking and laughing with the kids. Afterwards she had left leaving the kids with a bit of chocolates and a kiss on their cheeks. She was adorable.

1 week later

I was stuck in traffic when I saw her again. She was pissed and screaming at her friend who was trying to calm her down. I, being Sweta Khanna's son ,had learned to eavesdrop on peoples conversation without getting caught since a young age and that is exactly what I was doing, eavesdropping on this cute girl that I knew nothing about apart from her kindness, child-like behavior with kids, and her lack of enthusiasm for marriage. I heard her screaming at how horrible the system was for making an innocent man into a criminal and she was unable to stop it from happening, even though she was a lawyer. Even though it was her job to make sure that he didn't get sent to jail. But she couldn't save him because the goddamn system was filled with corrupt criminals who would do anything for a bit of money even if it meant to sell their own morals and consciousness. Oh... So madam is a lawyer. Well that's interesting and she hated the system that I was a part of. Yep, how much do want to bet that she is going to hate me when she finally meets me. Her friend had replied saying that "the system was always wrong but that doesn't mean you has to give up. It means that you has to try twice as harder to make sure the innocent people were given justice while the criminals were in jail. And yes, it will be hard. But when has a bit of hard work make the Great Avni Ayesha give up And so what if you lost that case keep trying until you get that innocent man out of jail and the real criminal behind bars."

The speech had ended with Avni giving her friend a hug with a "thank you Sunheri" and them walking towards the pizza store. I had learned her name and it felt right. It felt right calling her Avni, it felt right knowing that she was passionate about her job, looking at her felt right even though she didn't know that I existed. But that was going to change soon, I wanted to know her without looking like a stalker. I wanted to see her without it being a pure coincide. I wanted to talk to her instead of eavesdropping on her conversations whenever I do see her. And for some weird reason, I wanted to call her wifey and spend the rest of my life with her. Pretty weird, huh? I barely know this girl and yet I can't get her out of my head. But let's see what destiny has in mind. After all, everything has a reason behind it, so I am going to just assume that if I ever see her again by pure chance then we are simply connected and probably meant to be.

3 weeks later

I was crossing an empty street road even though there was a stop sign in front of me. But what can I say apart from the street was empty. There were no cars when all of a sudden I got hit by a car and hit my head. Before I blacked out, I saw her face, her gorgeous worried face finally thinking maybe we are meant to be in destinies weird way. Maybe she is the part of me that I was looking for.

Edited by Bookaholic1988 - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago

Beautiful. Just awesome! Please write more soon! Can't wait for them to officially meet. You have written it very well.

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Shaiksafia

@Shaiksafia

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Posted: 7 years ago

wow this is beautiful 😳 very refreshing story loved how presented avni and how neil is mesmerized by each and every emotion of her amazing writing please update soon 👏

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Chocolatebond

@Chocolatebond

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Posted: 7 years ago

This is really very interesting please continue eager to know how he will get to know her without becoming a stalker and how the destiny connects them forever

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Takia

@Bookaholic1988

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Posted: 7 years ago

Chapter 2- the start of us

Present time

When I opened my eyes again I was in the hospital listening to a bickering D.D. and Avni, all while trying to not die from laughter and not get caught. All of a sudden, Avni looked at me and noticed that I was up. She started striding towards the bed and slammed her on the beds. She looked me straight in the eyes, with her wide chocolate brown eyes and said,

"Oh good, your up. Now tell your little constable that I didn't hit you with my car."

"Oh, really then why am I in the bed?"

She rolled her eyes at me and irritably said,

"Because you were walking at the red light"

I replied in nonchalant voice with "Only because there were no cars."

"Well then you should have looked both ways before crossing"

"Well, then you should have honked."

"I -uh-um. Okay, let's be honest. I wasn't looking at the road when I hit you and you were jaywalking. So let this problem be. You gain nothing from making this into a huge issue"

"You are right but you see, I am the one who got hurt and I am currently laying in the hospital bed. So, yes I do have something to gain. "

"Really, an ACP being petty over a small accident that happened. And you are not hurt that badly. You just had a minor concession and bit of basic wounds on your arms. Stop acting like you just escaped the jaws of death."

"Well, Ms..."

"-Avni Ayesha"

"I still got hurt and you were speeding and not looking at the road. Both of those facts can still put you in jail."

"Listen, Mr. ACP. I got better things to do then go to jail for something that was also your fault. So let's just fix it here"

"Are you trying to bribe me, Ms. Ayesha? "

"No, you dumbass, morally injust being-

" Hey"

"No offense but I don't trust cops. Plus, I am a lawyer and that is going against my morals to bribe somebody. But I am trying to say is that I am willing to do anything that's is deemed appropriate by me to just let this problem pass."

I turned my eyes away from hers and gave her words a thought, producing a way for me to spend more time with her. Just as I was about to say something, the devil's spawn, DD had decided to open his mouth again.

"Sirji, I should tell you that your mom called. And I told her that you were in the hospital because you got into a car accident-

"WHAT? WHY DID YOU TELL HER THAT?NOW SHE IS GOING TO LOOK ME IN MY ROOM FOR GETTING IN AN ACCIDENT!!!!"

"Uh, Sirji. If my calculations are right she will be coming to the room right now."

And just as DD said those words my mom had burst through the door and ran to hug me nearly crushing my organs in the process. I glared at DD causing him to cower away and hid away from me by leaving the room. I turned my gaze towards Avni, who looked as she felt a bit out of space. After a good few moments, she turned her gaze away from eyes and looked at the window, while trying to hide her blush from me. I finally told my mom that I was okay, but I won't be if she continued crushing my organs causing a snicker from Avni and hit from my mom. My mom heard Avni's snicker and stood up to look at her. She then asked,

"And who are you? Are you the monster who caused my poor Tillu to get hurt?"

Just as Avni was about to answer. I had possibly taken the biggest risk I have ever made and replied with

"Mom, this Avni Ayesha. My girlfriend."

And with those words both my mom and Avni had turned to me with shocked faces.