RiKara DRABBLE SERIES - RAABTA - DRABBLE FOUR UPDATED Pg ELEVEN - Page 6

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Posted: 7 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: minamma

So beautiful

Omkara admiring gauri
Then sketching her was such a beautiful scene


Thank you so much
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid

Amazing update

Loving this professor kara!!
The way he was observing her beauty was amazing.
More than beauty her pure soul attracted him
Loved it so much
Waiting eagerly for the next chapter
Continue soon


Thank you so much Afrin ... Prof Kara is my favorite too. Again there are many things he is going to observe about her ... Beauty is subjective in his case ... Omkara as we know is never a man of materialism ... He invests more in purity.

Will update asap.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#53
Kuch to hai tujhse raabta...

So professor kara and studenr ri han

Your know very well i love this combo

After reading first part..was feeling bad for rii bcoz of akdu and sadu professor but part 2 made me realise he is not like that..he's a nice actually

He observe every little thing..most important today he observing her student like playing with puppies , talking with old lady ,try to read or write something or her smile her everything...such a pure soul..professor kara attracted towards her

Also he sketched her wow

Meharbani jaate jaate mujhpe kar gya

Welldone my behna..update soon

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: rikara94

Kuch to hai tujhse raabta...

So professor kara and studenr ri han

Your know very well i love this combo

After reading first part..was feeling bad for rii bcoz of akdu and sadu professor but part 2 made me realise he is not like that..he's a nice actually

He observe every little thing..most important today he observing her student like playing with puppies , talking with old lady ,try to read or write something or her smile her everything...such a pure soul..professor kara attracted towards her

Also he sketched her wow

Meharbani jaate jaate mujhpe kar gya

Welldone my behna..update soon


Jyoti 🤗

It has been such a long time ... I missed you ...

And here it is like ...

'Pheli thhi siyaah raate aai woh subah leke ... Bewajah si zindagi mein jeene ki wajah leke ..."

Yes Omkara is that strict professor with that heavy guage commanding voice and she is the naive college fresher. That is how people see him

But with that he is also a person who thinks a lot and emotes a lot. That's the real him.

Gauri is an angel ... She is simple sweet and has a heart of gold. She is Omkara's soulmate.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#55

Thank you so much aaradhya
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Posted: 7 years ago
#56
THREE

"Kya kar rahi ho tasnim? Yeh classroom hai ... tumhara bedroom nahi jo tum yaha aise sone ki koshish kar rahi ho... aur yeh koi sone ka time hai ... utho sir aate hi honge ... uss din humme daataa thha aaj tumhe daant denge! ... TASNIM!!! Gauri was growling whispers at her friend who was yawning with her head down on the bench.

"Sach kaha Gauri ... bohot zyada neend aa rahi hai mujhe aur agar Omkara sir ka lecture na hota naa toh kasam ki kasam hai kasam se ... apne room mein, apne bed pe blanket ke andar apna soft toy pakad ke so rahi hoti main. Tasnim blabbered in a drowsy tone.

"Omkara sir naa huye ... salman ji ki carbon copy ho Gaye Jo tum itna baura rahi ho humaari pagleit chirraiyaa. Gauri giggled looking at her with her head down on the bench.

"Aur nahi toh kya ... Omkara sir hai hi aise ... nahi toh tumhe lagta hai ... main apni pyaari pyaari si neend bigaadke lecture attend karne aaungi! Tasnim pouted.

"Haan haan tum karo Omkara sir ke naam ka jaap ... humme toh bade ajeeb lagte hai ... dekha nahi thha kaise chillaye thhe humpar. Gauri said recalling her first day in class.

"Haan madam ... aap class mein late aao aur phir aapke phone mein se dabang dabang baje aur sir aapko kuch kahe bhi nahi? ... badi naainsaafi hai! Tasnim rolled her eyes.

"Tum bada side le rahi ho unka! Humaari dost ho yaa unki? Gauri knotted her brows.

"Dost toh main tumhaari hu lekin ... omkara sir! Woh kitne handsome hai ... unke Baal ... unke chashme .
. unki aawaaz ... ufff ... Tasnim said dreamily.

"Haan abhi class mein aisa dhoomtananananana karenge naa ... kuch bolne laayak nahi bachogi. Gauri giggled again.

"Good morning class Both the girls were interrupted by the voice of a certain Omkara sir and the class began.

Omkara Sir. When Gauri had come to know that Omkara is one of her professors and with that he is a writer, poet, painter, sculptor and a theater artist ... she expected this Omkara sir to be a sixty something white haired kurta clad bespectacled pot bellied man but she was wrong and she is quite happy that she is wrong. The real Omkara sir she now knows is a twenty seven year old young man with the handsome features that resemble her Shankarji. His hair, his eyes, his voice ... everything. And the best part about him is that he always understands before making others understand ... he is a good teacher.

One and a half hour passed by as both the girls were busy scribbling notes and then everyone started leaving after the bell rang.

"Bohot bhook lagi hai yaar Gauri ... main canteen jaake do chai bolti hu ... tu aa Jana phir saath mein nashta karenge. Tasnim said and left.

Gauri had to stay back for a while ... she had a few doubts to ask. She walked towards Omkara who was rubbling the blackboard.

"Sir ... woh ... sir ... humme. She was not able to speak

"Ji bataayein. Omkara turned to look at her.

"Kuch poochna thha ... woh ... ye ... Gauri said showing him an excerpt from a book.

"Okay ... He took the book and read the excerpt and then explained it to her for good five minutes.

"Aap samajh gayi ... ya main kuch aur bataaun? Omkara asked returning the book.

"Nahi ... Nahi samajh Gaye hum ... sab samajh Gaye ... thankoo. She said with a small smile.

"Waise Maine dekha thha aapko. Omkara spoke referring to the time he saw her sitting alone.

"Arre sir ... aajna hum class mein time par aaye ... aur aaj phone bhi silent par hai humara ... Gauri blabbered considering her first impression.

"Haan Maine aapko class mein bhi dekha ... sach mein bohot talkative hai aap. Omkara smiled crossing his arms across his chest.

With a slight blush and a faint chuckle ... Gauri hid her face behind her book.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#57
I LOVED it
How she blushed when he teased her a little
How she was drawn to his looks and to his lectures
If given the chance she would fall in love with his character

I like this shy Gauri
Let's see what happens next ;D



YES I WAS FIRST HAHAHAHA 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#58
Awww such a cute part

Hayeee so lovely yar😳

And tasnim han...meri choti behna..she's good friend of gauri and i dont know about this..TASNIM!!!!!!

Yahan bhi lazy or bhukhad hi dikhaya gya tere ko 🤣

Tasnim ka omkara sir pe crush 😆 she came only for kara sir otherwise padhi hoti kahi😆

So kara is professor and poet, theater artist, writer also han
And gauri..she expected omkara to be 60 and something with white hairs😛😆

Ahh and at the end of lecture..rikara's convo was awesome..i loved it..

"waise maine dekha tha aapko" han class mein bhi dekha tha bahut talkative hai aap"

'Sadiyo se tarse hai jaisi zindagi ke liye..teri souhbat mein duaayaien hai ussi ke liye'

Kash screen pe bhi rikara milte😳

Eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

I LOVED it

Thankoo

How she blushed when he teased her a little

Thats the way Omie talks ... We know that baritone right?

How she was drawn to his looks and to his lectures

First things first ... That is what she observed about him.

If given the chance she would fall in love with his character

Yes definitely ... Do dil zarur milenge ... Magar chupke chupke

I like this shy Gauri

Me too

Let's see what happens next ;D

Miss universe coming in

YES I WAS FIRST HAHAHAHA 😳

We share the prize then 😉

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: rikara94

Awww such a cute part

Thankoo jyoti 🤗

Hayeee so lovely yar

Thankoo phir se

And tasnim han...meri choti behna..she's good friend of gauri and i dont know about this..TASNIM!!!!!!

Haan ... I wanted to do a college friend supporting role ... Bubbly chirpy chirraiyya wala ... Tasnim is my inspiration.

Yahan bhi lazy or bhukhad hi dikhaya gya tere ko 🤣

Haan haan ... Mujhe pata hai ... Uske two favorite hobbies hai ... Khana aur sona 😛

Tasnim ka omkara sir pe crush 😆 she came only for kara sir otherwise padhi hoti kahi

Humaari sleeping beauty blanky odhke ... Soft toy pakadke so rahi hoti ...

So kara is professor and poet, theater artist, writer also han
And gauri..she expected omkara to be 60 and something with white hairs

Phir Gauri gana gaati ... 'Main kaa karu raam ... Mujhe budhha mil gaya 🤣

Ahh and at the end of lecture..rikara's convo was awesome..i loved it..

Just imagine ... Chotu si Gauri and Kara towering her. ❤️

"waise maine dekha tha aapko" han class mein bhi dekha tha bahut talkative hai aap"

Mere favorite dialogue

'Sadiyo se tarse hai jaisi zindagi ke liye..teri souhbat mein duaayaien hai ussi ke liye'

'Phaila thha samdaro mein tanha safeena mera ... Saahilo pe aayaa hai tu jaane kis tarah leke ...'

Kash screen pe bhi rikara milte

Bhool jaao baalike ... Mann ko shaanti milegi

Eagerly waiting for the next part

Tia madam coming

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