RiKara DRABBLE SERIES - RAABTA - DRABBLE FOUR UPDATED Pg ELEVEN

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Posted: 7 years ago
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RAABTA

"Tujhko banaya mere jaise hi kisi ke liye..."


ONE


"May I come in sir? Gauri pleaded in a politely audible voice to the unnecessarily tall kurta clad man who had tied a weird kind of bun on his head and looked at the large hall filled with almost a hundred students. She was hell nervous ... it was here first day to college and she had messed up big time. It took her a good time to find her class. She was more than twenty minutes late.

Omkara looked at the pretty little wonder who was trying to huff some breathe standing at the door wearing and carrying all the possible colors of the world. Not just that she had pompoms and tassles on her dress. He knew had it not been the college and his class ... she must be a person extremely expressive and entertaining but with that maybe she is not punctual, she is late for class on the first day of college itself. He nodded and she stepped in.

"Bohot ehsaan kiya aapne humpar ... humaari class mein kadam rakhke. Gauri paused suddenly listening to her Just-Professors comment. She looked at him with a baffled expression. What ehsaan? Why did he say this to her? Is he angry? Is he being mean? And why is everyone staring at her as if she is Quantico returned Priyanka? Ugh! Too much. Gauri chose not to speak in front of her teacher and so with a lowered head she went to occupy the empty seat on the second bench.

The lecture continued and she began to scribble, there was nothing new in the way she was trying to understand what all was being taught but everything felt different. She has taken a step forward in her life, now she is a college student who drove herself to college on her new scooty, she does not know anybody in this new place. She will have to make friends and she has even worn a new dress today. Her excited thoughts were suddenly interrupted by the strict voice of her English sir and the continuous giggling of girls sitting behind her. She tried extremely hard to concentrate but the sudden ring of her phone disturbed the concentration of the whole class.

"Mann balwaan laage chattaan ... rahe maidaan mein aage hudd hudd dabang dabang dabang ...

"Don't you all understand that cell phones are not allowed in this class. You can happily get out if you are not interested to pay attention. Omkara warned in a decibel higher and Gauri immediately stood up, after switching off her phone of course. It is all because of you Salman Ji!

"Aap ke tevar toh kaabil-e-tareef hai mohotarma ... Pehle class mein late aati hai phir aate hi masti shuru.

Gauri opened her mouth to say something but immediately the bell rang and the class was over. She waited for everyone to ask their doubt and queries to him and then when the whole class was empty and he went back to rub the board ... she walked up to him.
"Sir ... woh ... humara pehla din hai aaj, humme pata nahi thha ke class yaha ho rahi hai ... room dhundte dhundte derr ho gayi aur humara phone ... woh bhi galti se Baja ... pleaj humme maaf kar dijiye ... sage se aisa nahi hoga ... dhyaan rakhenge hum. Gauri wholeheartedly apologized to him and kept staring at his back towards her for a while ...

"Aage se nahi hoga sir ... She said and turned to leave.

Omkara closed his eyes with a sigh.




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AfrinHrid thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Tooo goood!!
Loved Omkara's Strict teacher wala avatar
Waiting eagerly to read more
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Couldn't help myself - read it even though I should be revising😆. This was awesome Pooru. Clashing from the start. Looks like Gauri's had a major life change. Omkara seems a serious sort of teacher... is it weird that it makes him all the more attractive? I'm guessing Gauri has a goal in life in this one - I like that, because she has no particular aim other than falling for Tia's traps in the show right now.
Omkara caught her vibrancy in the first glance and soon it will infuse itself in him I'm sure. KurtaKara is a personal favourite so thanks for that. I would like to hear a part of his lecture, so if you could please oblige and add in the next update😆. Oh and please let him be single and ready to mingle - with StudentRi of course😆. Also i always wanted to see her open his hair so would you, could you please let her remove it from that pesky bun? - preferably in a moment of passion, but I'll even settle for it happening by mistake as she's swatting a mosquito away😆.

I would like to say that's it with the requests but that would be a lie. I have a special request for you, so let me know if you have time😳.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow
So cliche
Would love to read more
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Behna.. 😳
StudentRi and TeacherKara..!! Omg omg omg..!! I'm screaming..itni khushi..subah subah kya padh liya...I can't wait to read more of teaching sessions.. 😉
Omkara in kurta..uff..!!
But why that bun..? He looks smoking hot in half pony..jaal jaal ke dhua ho jaati hoon main when I see a SternKara in half pony...
So TeacherKara noticed the swing in StudentRi..the pehlu mulaqat wasn't pleasant at all...but aage aage bohot kuch hoga..
I want more of this strict professor..
Can't wait for the next one...
Let Ri irritate him more...
Hud hud dabang made me laugh to much..I can relate to Ri's situation..I'm experienced... 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I always found professor Kara tempting

So this has become my favorite already

Bad book in professor's book already or did she?

I kinda feel professor is totally impressed with her or rather affected by her

This is going to be super duper fun

Waiting to read more
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow that was amazing loved it so much.
Loved omjara's Strict avtaar.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting Start...o
Omkara as the strict teacher 😉 and Gauri is late on the first day itself...
Continue Soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome start!!
Loved it.
Proff kara n student ri..very interesting..
Guri is late on her first day itself n poor girl have to face her kadoos proff..i loved this strict proff kara..its really a treat to read..n looks like our kadoos proff is fida on ri by looking at d way he noticed every detail of her.
Enjoyed reading this..
Very excited for d next part.
Plz continue soon..
Thanks for d pm:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wonderful start... professor kara is really interesting...and he is too strict..it will be a good combination of strict kara and innocent gauri...waiting for more

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