RiKara DRABBLE SERIES - RAABTA - DRABBLE FOUR UPDATED Pg ELEVEN - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
#31
Loved the update so much.
Continue soon please.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: sirimiri

Loved the update so much.
Continue soon please.


Thank you so much
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33
Imagining the entire scene in my head
I love professor Kara a lot

How attentively he is observing her!
So beautiful

Omkara has a disturbed life when he was young. But glad he has overcome it and became a better person

Wondering how this become something more than student teacher relationship in their life
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie

Imagining the entire scene in my head

I love professor Kara a lot

How attentively he is observing her!
So beautiful

Omkara has a disturbed life when he was young. But glad he has overcome it and became a better person

Wondering how this become something more than student teacher relationship in their life


Lizzie 🤗

Thank you so much for such a lovely comment.

Even I love Proffesor Kara a lot ... All bespectacled and Kurta clad ... Drawing something ... Writing something ... Thinking something ... Oh my my ☺️

That kind of attentiveness is the trait of an artist and right now he felt inspired by a certain someone.

Yes ... Omkara has a havoc in the name of a life and the traces of which we are going to realize soon but with that she is the solace for him.

This one is going to be subtle, simple and romantic ... For the next class Ri is in trouble.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35
Sooo many feels Pooru!!!!!
His observation of her... the artist in him recognising his muse. Her kindness reflecting her pure soul so he could glimpse the real Gauri - such a contrast to the MUs in the show. What's the age difference here? Just curious.😊 I'm remindied of the clip of Shrenu playinbg with the puppies - you've described it perfectly.

Of course she is unbelievably loving and now he's seen that, how is he ever going to convincingly scold her again -m she's worming her way into his heart.

I love this story Pooru and am eagerly waiting for the next bit already.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
Couldn't wait to read..aur aagayi..
I love Professor Kara...he's so observant towards everything..as if he is trying to learn how to live..the young boy in him died a long ago..but what I loved most about his character is he's not thinking of his past and trying to make his life worth living..trying to learn from each and every moment...
Finally the artist found his muse..
The best thing is he easily recognized the pure soul..more than her beautiful face, her inner beauty attracted him..
And Ri is firecracker as usual..she's chirpy, she's young, she's bubbly and she has a beautiful heart and soul..You know..
I can't wait to read how their life get tangled with each other..
Aah..!! I've the same question as Kashish..what's their age difference..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: kashishsr

Sooo many feels Pooru!!!!!

His observation of her... the artist in him recognising his muse. Her kindness reflecting her pure soul so he could glimpse the real Gauri - such a contrast to the MUs in the show. What's the age difference here? Just curious.😊 I'm remindied of the clip of Shrenu playinbg with the puppies - you've described it perfectly.

Of course she is unbelievably loving and now he's seen that, how is he ever going to convincingly scold her again -m she's worming her way into his heart.

I love this story Pooru and am eagerly waiting for the next bit already.


Kashish 🤗

Yes! Mutual! So many feels ... Writing this made me so happy.

Yes ... This is the soulmate connect ... The real Omkara realizing who the real Gauri is ... Without knowing anything ... Not her name ... Not her age ... Its just him and her.

I did not know about Shrenu's clip but I love puppies. So wrote them.

Well here the age difference is seven years ... Gauri is 19 and he is 26 ...

Is he going to scold her? Well wait for my next update ...

Unbelievably loving and kind and affectionate ... That is Gauri for you ...

I want to tell you that here both my leads are multi dimensional ... They will take their time but they will be explored.

Will update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Couldn't wait to read..aur aagayi..
I love Professor Kara...he's so observant towards everything..as if he is trying to learn how to live..the young boy in him died a long ago..but what I loved most about his character is he's not thinking of his past and trying to make his life worth living..trying to learn from each and every moment...
Finally the artist found his muse..
The best thing is he easily recognized the pure soul..more than her beautiful face, her inner beauty attracted him..
And Ri is firecracker as usual..she's chirpy, she's young, she's bubbly and she has a beautiful heart and soul..You know..
I can't wait to read how their life get tangled with each other..
Aah..!! I've the same question as Kashish..what's their age difference..


Okay ...

Tasnim 🤗

The age difference has to be seven years ... Like nineteen and twenty six.

Even I am so much in love with ProffesorKara ... Yes he has been through a lot ... Faced a lot ... Handled a lot but the brighter side is that he wants to be happy ... He is trying to learn how to live ... You got me exactly.

Yes he recognized her because she is the one meant to be for him and the purity of soul is always more important for him than any superficial beauty.

Gauri is relatable here. She is naive, innocent and simple... Has her own set of expectations from life and is simply doing what all the other girls of her age are supposed to do ... She is the happier soul here.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39
Poorva dear after so longgg
So professor kara has already sketched our little chiraiyya.

I am sure he is falling hard for her simplicity & innocence.

Can't wait for next update plz update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Cinnamon_Kisses



Okay ...

Tasnim🤗

The age difference has to be seven years ... Like nineteen and twenty six.

Even I am so much in love with ProffesorKara ... Yes he has been through a lot ... Faced a lot ... Handled a lot but the brighter side is that he wants to be happy ... He is trying to learn how to live ... You got me exactly.

Yes he recognized her because she is the one meant to be for him and the purity of soul is always more important for him than any superficial beauty.

Gauri is relatable here. She is naive, innocent and simple... Has her own set of expectations from life and is simply doing what all the other girls of her age are supposed to do ... She is the happier soul here.

Ahaan..!! So I got what you tried to convey..yaay..!!
Age difference is okay..
You know what I want..I just want Ri to make him experience all those moments of life again that he missed..
Chalo..let me read the hot wala update...
I'm going to freshen up and will be back with my bakbak..see you at Be Intehaan thread.. 😆
Edited by tasnimrodela - 7 years ago

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