ONCE UPON A TIME IN WONDERLAND (SS)||Complete

Khadeja Akter

@Khadeja

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Posted: 7 years ago

#401

Labour Love

It was very Hot Update!!! 😳

Tara noticed she could healed MJ's wound by holding him.
So she tried.
But it was slow process.

Then she started to kissing his wounds which was fast.
This was fast method. 😉
She healed his all wounds.😊
And with the final kiss MJ gained his sense. 😳
Tara's lips were really powerful ones. 😉

He was wondering how he landed here.
Tara explained.
She also revealed the truths of their life.
He was amazed.
And he was very excited to know that they were married. 😆

Their kiss really sealed their marriage.
He gifted her lost earrings 😃
May be they are going to show their passion for each other's.

I am not really expert for commenting on such emotional and intense update.
In short it was loving and steamy 👏👏👏
Hopefully we will get more 😉

Your query about Jairaj &Nirmala:

Jairaj and Nirmala are always my fab from our show. ❤️
At your fic they are more loving couple ⭐️
I like their understanding, specially from Jairaj.
And their affection ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
At crucial moments they stood with each other that is really great 😊

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Archana

@Archi21

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Posted: 7 years ago

#402

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04
Awesome Part Dear👏😊
Thank You😳

Tara attacked by Nandini😲
Glad that MJ saved her😃
yes, like knight in shinning armor 😃

MJ hurt Tara with his words to protect her
Fool, isn't he?😡

Tara is angry with him😡
Any one would be

Wonder how they will meet again?
Read next chapter to know more😉

Thanks for reading and commenting 😃 😃

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Archana

@Archi21

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Posted: 7 years ago

#403

Originally posted by: Greys_Anatomy
Goddd this is getting interesting day by day !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Glad to know that 😃

Cant wait for the next update !!!!!!!!!!!!
Coming soon😉

Amazing and awesome job Archu !!!!!❤️
Thanks😳

Next update is coming soon😃

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Archana

@Archi21

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Posted: 7 years ago

#404

Originally posted by: Khadeja

Wake Up Call

Great Update it was !!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Tara's identity reveal Episode... 👍🏼
It was 😃

So Tara described how she landed there.
And what had happened .
Govind now disclosed how she had power. 😛😛😛
As expected Tara was surprised how Guruji knew about her mother's family. 😉😉
Guruji knows too much about her than she knows (because he is his father😉)

So, Tara is a witch.
She has all three powers.👍🏼
She is 😃

Tara was scared, who wouldn't be ??!!
Govind assured it was not that bad to have power.
Yes, She can use it for doing good.😊😊😊
Yes, Guruji helped her calm down very well😃

Govind asked about promise and Tara told.😃
Now, how would they know what would happened if they promised to be each other's.🤔
Yes, no one knew what would happen😊

They are married !!!! 🥳
News flash😛

Yes, we consider MriAra's promises as marriage vows but they are really married.🥳
They were magically married 😃😃😃
They are😃

They could make powerful shield together.😊😊😊
Tara really lost her sense with these new information about her life.😆😆😆
It was because of information overload😆

Guruji instructed her what to do and she would trained by him for casting magic.👍🏼
Tara stayed with MJ and Guruji went for searching Kalawati.
Guruji now going to be her Guruji in real sense 😊

Finally Jairaj noticed the blood line trees.😲
He didn't suspect Nirmala at once.
Men like him are rare👏

He got the book from Vasushundhara and went through it.

He found out their first child was alive.😛
He was very confused if Nirmala knew or not.
He went to her and asked.
She was unable to reply and couldn't meet his eyes.
Obviously he was hurt but didn't lose his sense.
Wise man😃

She was very much surprised that Jairaj was not angry with her.😛
Anyone would be surprised by the way he acted😃

But then she saw the tree.
It was supposed to be dull as Kalawati attacked MJ.
She couldn't think any danger of MJ and lost her sense.😵
Yes, it was because of MJ's bad health 😭
She is a mother 😭

All secrets revealing update it was!!! 👏
So I think chapter name was suitable 😉
Commenting soon for the next part.😊

Thanks for reading, commenting, and loving it 😃

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Archana

@Archi21

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Posted: 7 years ago

#405

Originally posted by: Khadeja

Labour Love

It was very Hot Update!!! 😳
Not as hot as next update 😉

Tara noticed she could healed MJ's wound by holding him.
So she tried.
But it was slow process.
Wounds were deep

Then she started to kissing his wounds which was fast.
This was fast method. 😉
She healed his all wounds.😊
And with the final kiss MJ gained his sense. 😳
Tara's lips were really powerful ones. 😉
Her fast method was tempting😳

He was wondering how he landed here.
Tara explained.
She also revealed the truths of their life.
He was amazed.
And he was very excited to know that they were married. 😆
He had lots of catch up to do and I guess he is only man alive to know that he is married😆

Their kiss really sealed their marriage.
He gifted her lost earrings 😃
May be they are going to show their passion for each other's.
Yes, they sealed their marriage😃
Quite a gift😃
They need to unleash their passion for each other😳

I am not really expert for commenting on such emotional and intense update.
In short it was loving and steamy 👏👏👏
Hopefully we will get more 😉
You commented enough to make me proud to write this👏
All comments bring a nice and big smile on my face and motivate me to write😃

Your query about Jairaj &Nirmala:

Jairaj and Nirmala are always my fab from our show. ❤️
At your fic they are more loving couple ⭐️
I like their understanding, specially from Jairaj.
And their affection ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
At crucial moments they stood with each other that is really great 😊
They are my fav too😃
So here I added more love in their scene 😃
I enjoy writing them😃
They show how love grows😃

Thanks for reading, commenting, and loving it😃

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Archana

@Archi21

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Posted: 7 years ago

#406

Previous update on Page 53

NOTE: This update is hot😳

And Straight On 'Til Morning

Tara became weak with this move of Mrityunjay. His fingers moved on her slightly bare back playfully. She turned her face towards Mrityunjay, her mouth slightly open. She was breathing heavily, her eyes closed. A smile was on her face showing her liking of his touch. Mrityunjay smiled seeing his wife's passion. He kissed on her forehead, then on her eyes, tracing his lips to her shoulder, satisfying his wife's desire. Then he scooped her up in his strong arms and placed his wife on the bed gently. Tara moved her face away from him.

Mrityunjay was now facing her back which was still covered with criss-cross strings. One by one he pulled all the strings of her dress, undoing them one by one and exposing her to him. He slowly rolled her dress down from her shoulder, trying not to hurt her delectable little body. She tried to cover her half naked body with her hands, but Mrityunjay gently removed her hands covering her body.
Tara surrendered herself to him. She was with her husband.

Mritunjay was unbinding Tara one by one from her shyness. He held her closely to his chest with her back resting on his chest. He planted wet kisses on her bare back slowly, moving his hands on her body passionately, cupping her breast, making her realize her body. She leaned her head back on Mrityunjay, slowly eliciting his name, "Mrityunjay. Turning her face to his side, his lips once again consumed her lips. Tara was enjoying each kiss. He smiled seeing his beautiful wife feeling the pleasure and he laid her on the bed on her back. He kissed Tara on her lips. Tara seized Mrityunjay by locking her legs around his waist. She moved her hands on his bare flesh, she was igniting him more to delve her and consume her, marking her nails on his back.

"Ouch...Your nails are trying to hurt me," he said between his kisses.

"Now see how I hurt you," he said winking at her.

Mrityunjay again started planting hot kisses on Tara, making each part of her his. All of Tara was burning with desire for more and more of Mrityunjay. Mrityunjay stretched her hands slowly mapping his hands on hers and filled the gaps between her fingers by his. Tara was watching her destiny changing from a girl to a woman. Her nails were marking Mrityunjay, expressing her pain and love of his touch. He kissed her neck, showering kisses one by one on her jaw line, down to the mole on her chest which he had seen once while teaching her sword fighting, then to her torso, and back to her breast, slightly sucking it.

"Mri..tyun..jay.." Tara moaned, throwing her head back at the sweet sensation of his sucking, feeling his hands on her exposed body, raising her body more to him.

His hunkous body covered her petite body. Tara was living, loving the pain of lovemaking. He moved his hands on her belly playfully, making her lose her senses. He slowly moved his hands to her thighs caressing it, taking her pleasure to a higher level.

She moaned, "Mrityunjay," digging her nails into his body even more.

He gently lifted her and settled her on his thighs. The touch of bare flesh was tempting him more to taste her. He brushed his lips on her bare body, burning her even more. She was trying to get a hold on his back, caressing her hands on his back up and down, trying to hold his long locks. She gasped and pushed him on the bed. She took charge of this love fight.

She moved her hands towards his head brushing his lips to hold his long locks and planted a soft kiss on the mole on his nose that she had discovered once while learning sword fighting when he was too close to her. This liberated woman in her was going wild, kissing his chest senselessly, which she had seen one day glazing in the sunlight. These kisses were affecting Tara more than Mrityunjay, she was rejoicing. She traced kisses on his strong hands, in which she wanted to be crushed. She was over him, trying to cover him, which was not possible by her diminutive body. Mrityunjay wrapped his arms around her, making her a prisoner of Mrityunjay. She was resting her head on his chest, feeling peace, enjoying and loving each moment with her husband. She was smooching on his chest and burying herself in him.

Later Tara while tracing lines on his chest said, "I always wanted to rest my head on your chest."

"Really??" he chuckled.

"Hmm..." Saying this, she once again kissed on his nose mole.

He immediately took charge. "Let me see my beautiful wife, which was hidden from me," rolling her on the bed. Moving his hand touching, embracing her cheeks, moving down to her neck, arousing, exciting Tara once again, he caressed down to her chest, to her belly, to her thighs.

"Tara you are so beautiful."

Once again he started showering wet kisses on her bare body, caressing her, unleashing her more. Once again her cold body was heating up, burning with pleasure. This time more desires than before were aroused. She moved her hands to his hair holding it tight, pulling them each time he kissed her. He saw her face which was demanding more from him. He grazed her lips with his, his cheeks with hers. The shower of his kisses was once again wetting Tara. He was rediscovering her inch by inch once again. Her hands were trying to hold him tightly, trailing him from neckline to his bottom. He lowered himself slightly to enter into her but stopped and looked towards Tara once, asking for her permission. She held him by his shoulders and pulled him towards her giving him the permission to be one with her. He entered her slowly. Tara moaned his name in pain. But once he was in her, her body was in the supreme ecstasy. Her nails were digging deep into his shoulders marking how exhilarated she was. Their bodies were moving in blissful rhythm drowning them in euphoria. He slowly removed himself out of her and lay next to her. Both were panting heavily.

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Continued in next post

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Archana

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Posted: 7 years ago

#407

Continued
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Mrityunjay propped himself on his left arm and looked at Tara lovingly like he was seeing her for the first time. Tara looked at his smiling face and kissed on his lips. Mrityunjay lay straight on his back and held her in his arms. Tara was kissing him passionately. Their tongues were dancing in rhythm. Mrityunjay moaned her name in her mouth and turned her on the bed never breaking the kiss. He planted kisses on her chin tracing his lips to her neck. He was exploring her each and every curve going down towards her torso. Tara grabbed a fistful of Mrityunjay's long locks tightly to enjoy the pleasure. He drowned his head in the valley between her soft orbs and smooched. Her body arched towards him and tugged his hair tightly to lift his head. He winked at her. She held him by her legs around his waist. He continued to kiss her. His each kiss was satisfying her. He slowly laid her on the bed and curled his arm around her. She was crushed in Mrityunjay's strong arm. She rested her head on her husband's chest and they curled themselves into each other's arms.

The two souls made in heaven for each other were now one. It was two bodies, one soul. This union was the last seal on their marriage making their protection aura more powerful.

*****

In the palace, the physician informed the King that the Queen was unconscious because of stress. By night the Queen regained consciousness. The King didn't ask her anything, just sat beside her.

"Jayraj I knew from the day our son was born," she said to break the deadly silence in the room. He looked at her surprised but didn't say a word.

"When our son was born, Kalavati cast a spell and took him from us. She wiped the memory of everyone except me of our son being alive. She threatened me that if I tell anyone about this, she will kill him." She stopped to look at Jayraj's face which was filled with anger for the witch.

"Our son was saved by Govind, your prophet," she said holding his hand.

He took a deep breath. "Have you met him, our son?" he asked.

"Yes, I met him in the forest once," she said resting her head on his shoulder.

"Jayraj our son must be in some danger, that bloodline tree was in a bad state," she said worriedly.

"No, he must not be now. The tree is glowing, as healthy as it was today morning," he said kissing on her forehead. She looked at him and smiled.

"Why didn't you tell me anything?" he asked.

"The witch had cast a spell on Mrityunjay which prevented him from entering the Kingdom. Now that he has the Pearl, the spell is broken," she said.

"So we can now bring our son back here?" he enquired, happiness spreading across his face.

"Yes, we can but..." she stopped. The King looked at her worriedly. She continued, "Govind said he will return Mrityunjay to us when it's time for him to return."

"Oh..." said the King. "I am so glad that our son is alive," he said kissing the Queen on her lips.

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I hope SR was as per your expectation 😳

Thanks Shaina_b for making it readable😃

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

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Posted: 7 years ago

#408

I loved it when Mrityunjay carried Tara in his arms to the bed!!!!❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Tara was initially shy but then she seemed to be even more passionate than Mrityunjay!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

It was sizzling hot!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

So Tara finally revealed that she had always wanted to rest her head on his chest!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

For a magical wedding, they surely had an absolutely magical wedding night!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

I love it when Mrityunjay keeps saying that she is beautiful!!!!❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Finally they became one!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

It was just beautiful!!!!⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

This would make their bond as well as Tara's magic which she uses to protect Mrityunjay stronger!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Jayraj is truly too good as a husband!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

He is not angry or upset with Nirmala!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Finally Nirmala said the truth to him about all that had happened!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Now the tree is glowing and healthy again and obviously it will be as Mrityunjay is healed and with his Tara!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

The suhaag raat was fabulous!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

The chapter was phenomenal!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#409

Awesome Part Dear👏😊

Both Tara and MJ are lost😔

Aradhana is worried for Tara while Guruji is worried for MJ

MJ is feeling guilty for hurting Tara

Both are thinking about each other😭

When MJ manhandled Tara???

How come Tara told Nirmala about her son???

Nirmala wants to meet Tara😃

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Pooja trivedi

@kumari27

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#410

And straight on till morning!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wow you nailed it 👏

every line is hot😳

mj kissed and tara surrended heself😳

actually both want this😆

awesome line by tara"I always wanted to rest my head on your chest."😳

both were into one other thought but now they became one😳😳😳

tara looked more passionate 😳😳😳

here nirmala fainted !!!!!!!!

jairaj is too good as husband 👏👏👏

he is not upset with nirmala👏👏

so finally nirmala said truth which is good👏👏👏

now plant is green again👏👏👏

offocourse plant has to be green afterall tara is with mj😉

so this SR is too good and above the expectation👏👏👏

but why every SR in jungle try one more in palace😉

thanks for this chapter👏

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