Meherya SS...Divine Intervention CH5 08/18 pg11 -SUSPENDED

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I admit that sometimes I am a slave to my writing. Something will pop into my head and unless I give it attention and jot it down it will remain there festering and distracting me from what I need to be writing 😉

Anyway, in CH34 of DTM, SK killed two birds with one stone, eliminating the story villain and getting justice for an anonymous teen rape victim at the same time. Afterwards my mind kept on going back to how this simple act would have changed this young woman's fate, and the following OS evolved.

For reference the three sisters are the Fates of Greek Mythology who were said to be responsible for every life on Earth which are represented by threads. The youngest is responsible for birth, the middle for longevity and the eldest for death.

The story has no name so feel free to come up with one for me, and let me know what I should do with it😆 ...EDIT...THANK YOU Maya

DIVINE INTERVENTION

"You had no authority to do this. It wasn't her destiny, and clearly, he is bound to another! You had no right to interfere like this!"

"And she did not deserve her lot. She is just a child!"

The youngest of the three Fates stood her ground in front of her two sisters.

She couldn't explain why this particular mortal had affected her more than any of the millions for whom she had woven their life threads, but she had. She had watched the young girl shatter, and her life force fade, first after the attack on her body, and later, when the corruption around her prevented the evildoer from being punished. But a few days prior, her destiny took a twist when a man unknown, decided to retaliate on the behalf of a stranger, and give the child the justice she deserved. But teenager's thread was so weak now, and there stood a very good chance that mortal justice would come too late.

She knew that she would alter the man's fate, just as she had known that her oldest sister was no more than a day away from severing the young girl's thread bringing a sad and unjust end to the special child's life. No one would blame the teenager for making the choice she had, not after what she had been through. However, with one not entirely altruistic move, Shaurya Khanna had anonymously thrown the teenage girl a lifeline. His determination for the task, seemed as strong as the thread that represented the man. The youngest Fate ran her fingers over the man's life thread. It felt unbreakable. And that's when the idea had come to the youngest of the females who controlled destiny.

The tattered thread of the young girl's shattered life had now been reinforced by the strength of Shaurya Khanna's, and now a viable future lay ahead of her. The fact that the act would forever link the pair was problematic, but it had been the lessor of two evils in her mind.

"Do you realize what you have done, any idea how many lives you have changed," the eldest of the Moirai screeched at her sibling. In an unheard act, she ordered the middle sister to show them what would come now from the rash choice their sister had made. The man's attraction to the girl should they ever meet would be undeniable, and completely reciprocated. It would be disastrous.

The young goddess's face blanched as she watched the upheaval that would come to so many lives in the years ahead. So much pain...all due to her.

"Stick to what you know, Sister," her elder commanded her, before storming out of the great hall.

The shaken deity slumped to the ground. "What have I done," she whispered. She looked up when her remaining sibling's hand came to rest on her shoulder.

"There may be a way to fix this," she cautioned, as she approached the loom and attempted to unravel the conjoined strands without too much damage to the lives they represented.

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Many, many years later...

The interview was not going well at all. However, this time it had nothing to do with the applicant. Rather it was him. His distraction for the task had begun as soon as she entered. The sight of her had rendered him speechless; it was if a goddess had deigned to visit him. Inanely, a vision of his late grandparents enjoying his discomfiture from their heavenly abode, popped into his head. Considering that he had known neither of them, it made the thought even stranger. However, until today, the advice passed down from father to son to all the Khanna males: never to discount a female with a soft womanly figure hadn't applied much. But then again, he had never encountered anyone like her either.

Oh God, Shaurya thought, what was her name? He glanced down at the resume in front of him. Annaliese, right, he thought: Chef Annaliese M. Sh.. no way, this couldn't be.

His head shot up again and stared at the woman with an open mouth.

Sharma, he finished in his head...Chef Annaliese M. Sharma.

He cleared his throat. He had to start this interview.

"Thank you for coming today, Chef Sharma. If you don't mind me asking, what does the M stand for?"

The young woman across from him blinked. Clearly this was not what she had expected to be the first question of this job interview.

A soft pout came to the full, entirely kissable, mouth he was fixating on, and Shaurya felt the blood rush to his groin. Oh yeah, he thought. Without a doubt the man, after whom he had been named, was definitely up in heaven enjoying this. And would even more if one particular name spilled from her lips.

"Bolo Ms. Sharma."

Chapter #2

Edited by crtkelly - 6 years ago


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Shamz15 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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That was too confusing Kelly but must say you have picked some interesting plot..reincarantion of mahek 😆😆
Are you going to continue this 😛😛

Thank you for the PM 😳
Edited by Shamz15 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Res
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I am little bit confused Kelly
So mehrya not together at all
So whom SK whould married
Now this sk is Shourya Khannas grand son
Omg
Pls continue soon
Edited by Chandana2010 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shamz15

That was too confusing Kelly but must say you have picked some interesting plot..reincarantion of mahek 😆😆

Are you going to continue this 😛😛

Thank you for the PM 😳


@ bold...really😕 it makes perfect sense to me😆 . Chef Annaliese is the descendent of the anonymous teen (and maybe MS version 2😉). rather than have MehRya's lives disrupted the fates arranged for the meet of their descendants a few generations down the line.

confusing as it is do you think it worth continuing?


Edited by crtkelly - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ok..had me confused in the beginning, but caught on to it later.
You should continue, have mehrya visit their grandson and give them advice.

Thanks for the pm
Edited by bworm - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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After reading the description and the first couple sentences the words Divine Intervention came to mind.
I've only read a few chapters of DTM so have no clue about the association between the two stories but I really like this one . Specially when he was wondering about the middle name I imagined her to be Meheks granddaughter and SK I imagined him as SK's grand son no clue why. Only question would be how would he know about the pout? I really enjoyed reading this story it's completely different then any other Mehrya story I've ever read and love that! Please continue your stories are always a treat to read thank you so much for sharing them with us .😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Houstonmom

After reading the description and the first couple sentences the words Divine Intervention came to mind.
I've only read a few chapters of DTM so have no clue about the association between the two stories but I really like this one . Specially when he was wondering about the middle name I imagined her to be Meheks granddaughter and SK I imagined him as SK's grand son no clue why. Only question would be how would he know about the pout? I really enjoyed reading this story it's completely different then any other Mehrya story I've ever read and love that! Please continue your stories are always a treat to read thank you so much for sharing them with us .😊


@ bold...I love, love love it... I think this OS or whatever is has a title👏

Not that I want to discourage you from reading Discovering the Magic so please continue, but the premise connecting this story is the following that the new producer of ISC is a total bas***d and did something dastardly to make SK look bad in MS eyes.

In the course of dealing with him, SK had him investigated and discovered that when the producer worked for another network (specifically on a youth program) he had sexually assaulted a teen contestant. The network backed him up and the teenagers life was shattered when her rapist was never brought to justice. SK...had decided in the last chapter of DTM to anonymously fund the legal costs to bring the man to justice for his crime against the teenager, to rid himself of the man, and get justice for poor unknown girl.

This story ( now aptly called Divine Intervention😉) evolved from there...and picked up where the eldest fate was about to cut the life thread of this poor girl (and she would have committed suicide) before the youngest sister intertwined Shaurya's life thread with the teenagers. Unfortunately this fostered a stronger connection between SK and the teenager where there should have been none...He belonged with Mehek and no one else after all. Had they met, not too kosher things would have occurred to jeopardize MehRya's relationship

The middle Fate sister, in trying to correct the problem ( breaking up MehRya) has done her own magic put off the connection for a few generations...

So yes SK here is our SK's grandson, and Annaliese is...????😆😆

Convoluted, I concede...but I see potential in it.

Thanks for the read Maya...and the comment of course!

Oh and as to the pout...that was just a pure male reaction to a woman he has found insanely attractive😳



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you for the pm Kelly 🤗
I will reply soon as I did not get the story, my brain is not working 😛
too much vino 😉

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: bworm

Ok..had me confused in the beginning, but caught on to it later.

You should continue, have mehrya visit their grandson and give them advice.

Thanks for the pm


This really didn't translate well from what I was thinking did it😆. I have edited it some, and hope that this will un-muddle it a bit😉

There is potential in I think.

Thanks for the honest FB
Edited by crtkelly - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Diva200

Thank you for the pm Kelly 🤗

I will reply soon as I did not get the story, my brain is not working 😛
too much vino 😉


I don't think it's the wine😆...I have edited it a bit which will hopefully help when you re-read

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