I LOVED the concept and the fact that you kept it non-romantic was like breathing fresh air...odf course we love romance but I LOVE to read new things every now and then, and this is certainly one of the best one,
one advice- DONOT try to diminish or degrade your own fantastic work, everyone feels this way while posting but what I have learnt from my experience is that if we keep respect of our work, it will come out with flying colors❤️
And ya good range of vocabulary yaar
Overall, I really enjoyed it and frankly speaking didn't find even one fault