Shiva OS : Shiva; An Untold Saga

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Ok guys, so first time, I'm writing something that's not a romantic fiction. yes, it is a fanfiction based on Shiva- Manish's latest character which came to an abrupt end in the show EK Shringaar Swabhimaan as the show is shutting down. Though I wasn't very keen on the show, the opening scenes of Shiva in the show did impress me! It was such bliss to watch him. But sadly, the show came to an abrupt end and so does his character. Whatever, I hate his exit as much as I love his entry. That was fully senseless. It actually seemed to waste Manish's acting and efforts. Can you imagine I sat before the TV till 11 just to watch him, despite being so tired after college? And what welcome me, such a butchering of his character I couldn't tolerate that I don't even want to talk of it. [BR




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Coming to this one shot, this is a tribute to Manish who has worked a lot for Shiva, yet his work got no value due to some silly issue that the channel created. This one will be on an unsaid shade of Shiva. It actually juxtaposes the character Shiva with lord Shiva's qualities. That's why the banner. BTW, it's my sin as well. I'm not sure if this is good, personally I think it will be boring. This is just an attempt and the first and last work on me on Shiva. [BR
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Shiva- An Untold Saga- A one shot by Roshni Menon


disclaimer: This is purely a work of fiction and I don't intend to hurt any particular religious or cultural belief with this. it's just something for entertainment and I won't be responsible for wrong perception people draw from it


"Om Namah Shivaaya!' The low yet devotional chants echoed in air as the sky is yet to be free from the shades of black. The jingle of the temple bells that kept ringing reached the banks of the river that is spread up to the horizon. It reflected the dark sky at the dawn and looked absolutely calm and tranquil apart from the small ripples caused by fishes. Not so far, pyres burned, marking an end to the physical existence of people who took birth, lived, loved and died in the land.


He sat on one of the steps at the river bank, looking at the pyres that kept burning while his black eyeballs well reflected the blazing fire. His chin rested on his left hand while his right hand ran through his lush hairs. Shiva; that's his name. Rough, tough and hardhearted; that's how he looks for any outsider. But for who knows the purity inside him, he is indeed a reflection of lord Shiva. This graveyard has been his abode much like the lord. His origin is also unknown; god knows which womb borne him for 9 months and then took the pain of bringing him to the world. Yet, he is the son of Shamshaankhand, the place famous for graveyards. He, as an infant fell to the hands of a grumpy old man who used to burn pyres for the public. He still doesn't have a clue why the man adopted him, for that man never loved him. Even in his initial, faded memories, he remembers how that old man used to shout at him, treating him in the most unsympathetic way. Corpses were always his buddies, the loud chants and shouts of the aghoris served as lullaby to him while the graveyard became his home. He was barely five when he first started helping the man with the pyres. Setting fire to the stiffened, pale dead bodies, his fear died with those burning bodies. Neither the weird smell of the burning corpses nor the disturbing sound of the cracking skull succeeded in frightening him. The tranquility and harmony was nothing less than that of the lord. He always remained as calm as a plain water body even when his stomach burned in hunger, even when his heart yearned for a drop of affection. The remnants of the offerings for the lord at the nearby Shiva temple quenched his hunger at times, while kind hearts fed him other times. When the great lord himself can be a vagabond, what about this silly creature? While Lord Shiva medicated, the letters which the priest introduced to him became his medication. Knowledge served as his salvation, moulding him to an enlightened individual.


Years passed in a gush. His insecurities fear and limitations has burned in the pyres. Shiva became the life of Shamshaankhand. Indeed he was Shiva, short tempered yet easily pleasing. Hard as rock yet soft as butter. While he became support for the weak, he became destruction for the cruel, just like Shiva became the kaal of negativity. An invisible trident rested in the fierceness of his eyes, warning all the evil. Meanwhile he spread the light of knowledge and modernity to the residents of the village, being the bridge between Gu (darkness) and Ru (Light) and thus indirectly being their Guru. The once just graveyard Shamshaankhand became a heaven eradicating the eeriness.


Eventually, the spring in the life of lord came to his life too. A girl with her beautiful smile and grace ripped through his heart just like sati impressed Shiva. She became his ardhangini, awakening the affectionate and ardent side of him. He melted in her love, while she became his 'shakti' his power.


The third eye of the lord opens when evil tries to suppress the weak and the same happened here too. NandkishoreChauhan, a Jaipur based millionaire could easily price their land, their legacy. Shamshaankhand wasn't just hectares of land for them, it meant a lot more. It was the final grave of lot of souls that NK snatched from them through his illegal ways. Shiva had to open his third eye of violence, when even the law became in favor of the powerful.


Breaking in to Chauhan house with his men, he transformed it in to a Shamsaan, showing NK his right place. Yes, it was violence, but the violence for justice. He threw NK in to the unburned pyre, just like the lord burned the demons with the fire from his third eye. No one could resist that terror and so NK. He got their land back to them, in the way of the same law which stood against them. That's it! Nothing more, he left the house in silence.


Coming back to Shamshaankhand, the eyes of many shined for him and blessed him while some saw the lord in him. He felt happy and satisfied but things didn't end there. NK's sons did come to clash with him for the disrespect and terror their father went through. But they were nothing for Shiva. The truth was on his side and so he was sure none could touch him. The boys had to come on their knees before Shiva. The boys did indeed realize that Shiva hasn't thrown their father to pyre, instead he has thrown the ego and evilness indie NK, making him understand that he wasn't the ultimate power. Moreover, Shiva's action killed NK's ego and transformed him from the ruthless and unsympathetic individual to a grounded man. The enlightenment did happen.


Now sitting in this river bank in silence and isolation, he just recalled about the day closing his while he felt a hand on his shoulder. He opened his eyes and looked back, only to see the same girl, his soul mate by him.


"I'm not wrong right?' he asked.


"No you're not. And you will never be!' said his girl, his power leaning on his shoulder. He smiled, caressed her hair and rested his head against her closing his eyes. Back in the Shiva temple too, the lord remained calm , tranquil blessing the world.


How many slaps for me? I'm sure Manish will kill me if he see this, I'm sure!!! Well, I'm ready to receive slaps but I love new trials. And now, about Shiva's girl I didn't write any specific name for her as I thought it will be better to give you all the liberty to name her. but I'm sure that there is only face in all your hearts for that character. Hmmm, baba Roshni predicts that it's Avika. isn't it? Jokes apart, I really need comments from you people now. Coz this being a new attempt I will definitely love to know your view, no matter if it's negative or positive.

Edited by RoshniMenon88 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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No slaps yaar. This is amazing. Offcourse avika uske bina or kon ho sakta hai. Waiting for ur other ff's updates. Thx for pm
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wow roshogulla this was super duper awesome hated the way they butchered Shiva's character in ESS that was so unfair disgusting & pathetic it was nk's fault at first but they showed him wrong he only came to take his land back even he was the one who changed nk but those stupids karan & kunal how dare they first see ur father's deed then point at someone else idiots hate them ur os gave such a relief yr enjoyed reading it & we all know who is the girl ;-) ;-) ;-) every Rosidian & avimanian wished for it super narration awesome story loved it
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Awww super duper os dear... nice narration yaar... I know who is the girl... After reading this story I remembered one tamil film... I'm also wait till 11 just to watch him!.. But what this ess producer doing end this show like this...again we are going miss him... K baby coming to the os OUTSTANDING... that's all... Waiting for your ff updates dear... thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow excellent os loved it thank you for pm.
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Wow roshni it was an amazing os yaar... Seriously I just luvd it... It is very sad with the way they ended his track how much he worked hard fr this role he even changed his look but feeling very bad that colors channel didn't gave value to our hero's hard work... N again one news I read that colors channel is planning to make a sequel of serial I don't know the exact name of that serial but I read that avika may be the lead n with someone else... I really can't understand y this colors channel is behind our aviman always tries to separate them... Ufff... Sry may be I'm over reacting but what to do badly missing rosid/aviman... Want to see them again onscreen as a couple... N finally thank u fr this wonderful os... No slaps nothing if manish will read this na then he will definitely feel happy... Eagerly waiting fr updates of ur other stories... Update soon... Thanks fr pm...
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Wow roshni that was incredible no one could really imagine shivas character would be like this great job dear...seriously hat's off to you...Fabulous narration dear...loved it...& we all know who is the girl...thanks for the pm.
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Awesome Os no slaps really love it. ..yes it was injustice... Beautiful narration...
We all know girl.. We can't imagine someone with manish ..crazy Rosidians or Avimanians...
Really love it...

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