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Posted: 7 years ago
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The Carcass of a City

Hush! There sleeps a big town; a city-
In the quiet it screams like the bus that rollers down
The street, with its gravels and gritty
Dreams of factories with a mowed lawn.

Look, and say what it be!
Blustering be the cast,
Or a damsel in heart unfree?
Oh and did I tell you of its past?

Quite an oldie I should think.
Close your eyes now, and 'spire
Into the waxy aroma at the brink
of, ere the cataclysm, myrrh.

Clever flakes make a dusty ride,
Into, of yours and mine, noses
And reminds of quite the stilled
Protests of men and women and kids back in the ages.

Hark! Don't you hear the life pump
In and out of the city veins!
Rise and false sallow sump
In the lowest of the plains.

Come, lets touch that what remain
Of the dead. Memoirs?
What else? They floored even
The graves. Dust to dust, but the spirit yet soars.

This is the carcass of a city,
Once happening, no more so.
But this is a cycle. Witty
Men will come to take them further low.
Edited by Radhikerani - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful Poem dear
Keep writing 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: LOVE.GOLD

Beautiful Poem dear

Keep writing 😊


Thank you so much Di!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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awesome one...ā­ļøā­ļøā­ļø...beautifully written...šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘...loved it...ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø...thank u 4 pm...😃...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful. ā¤ļø
Keep Writing Choti. šŸ‘
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow what a beautiful poem
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Posted: 7 years ago
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As always, beautiful piece Pro! Maybe surprise me sometimes by writing something off your usual mark. šŸ˜† šŸ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing poem Proteeti
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow, this one's full of imageries! <3
And loved the sharp tone and Antithesis 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is perfect! The imagery is stunning! ā¤ļø

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