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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jayeeta_06

awesome one...⭐️⭐️⭐️...beautifully written...👏👏👏...loved it...❤️❤️❤️...thank u 4 pm...😃...


Thank you so much Jayeetadi!


Thank you! <3

Originally posted by: .Archangel.

Beautiful. ❤️

Keep Writing Choti. 👏


Thanks Shanayadi!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Wow what a beautiful poem


Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: PanchaliKaArjun

As always, beautiful piece Pro! Maybe surprise me sometimes by writing something off your usual mark. 😆 😆

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Aww Sam! You're always so sweet!


Thanks Noniedi!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: .-Amethyst-.

Wow, this one's full of imageries! <3

And loved the sharp tone and Antithesis 😳


Aww thanks Mahi ri! <3

Originally posted by: .moonglade.

This is perfect! The imagery is stunning! ❤️


Thanks you so much Ramyadi! <3

Originally posted by: Riddhimaa...

Beautiful poem...loved it


Thank you! :D
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: MinzPie

you guys are so talented..awesome work❤️


Aww! Thanks Minz di!


Thank you Nicitadi! :D

Originally posted by: .sweetchick.

When I was a kid I've left city to live in a small town... 😆now should I tell my family that we did a terrible mistake? 😆You've shown the city from another view and it was quite unexpected...😉

As always you surprise me Proteeti! Beautifully written!


Aww! But obviously every part of the world has its charm. The big cities thrive in their feverish speed while the smaller localities prefer to laze out in quiet philosophical expanses! 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25

Thanks Meenadi!

Originally posted by: AASUS

Read 3 times to understand what it meant,
life becomes lifeless - only bodies gone but the energy of those who lived are left behind.

Tried to imagine what its like in that place. So true ... there may be new ppl / beings coming again.

ty Pro ur writings make us think a lot


Thank you so much Athidi! I'm glad you liked it!


Thank you, hun! :D
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

Beautiful poem pro as always

Keep writing more...
Thanks for pm dear...


Thank you Parudi!

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

a lovely poem...❤️


thanx for pm...😃


Thank you! <3
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Keep writing hard ❤️

This was beautiful 😳


Thank you Sue di! <3


Thank you! :D

Originally posted by: Avyakta

Wonderfully written poem with full of imagery!

Looking forward to reading such good poems Radhikarani .😊


Thank you so much Di! ^__^
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28

Thank you! <3

Originally posted by: KhwabonKiRani

Good job pro dear👏

Keep writing more


Thanks, hun! :D

Originally posted by: Sadhanamomo

Pro

Poem is soo beautiful
Continue Please


Thank you so much Sadhanadi!

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Posted: 7 years ago
#29

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

Radhika, my dear poetess ... what to say? Your poem depicted a city's past glory, is an allegory of the historical journey, many cities existed and vanished in the past, just like the Atlantis, lost to time in this human history, with your word weaving power, you presented it beautifully with your metaphorical expressions. Read it 2 times, worth reading more than once!🤗


Thank you so much for the kind words Aunty! <3


Thank you! <3


Thank you so much! <3
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