NK bachao -cvs please give us happy track without any negativity - Page 2

Originally posted by: -DragonFire-

Fans and cast are doing whatever is possible for them but cvs also need to do their bit by bringing positive and happy content in the show which I think is much easier to script than scripting missions and adventures

Originally posted by: darsh333

Mishti is back😕

Originally posted by: neeraja91

I agree with the execution issue. If they had given more background on what Neil had been upto, given him more screen space to show his efforts and his guilt and angst instead of token dialogues here and there this track would have worked better. Basically neo ne sirf ek bomb blast karvaya of vidyuts truck. And other than that he had avnis help to ruin the ORS powder and he sent neela to Mexico. Baaki kuch nahi dikhaya. In terms of angst we saw a few great scenes but we need more. Even now I actually like the track. I can watch avni in jail if we get to see their tadap to be with each other, their efforts to be in touch and plan together , Neil introspecting on avni taking the blame for neo, feeling angry at himself for the time it's taking to get her out. Neel should know avni is getting tortured and we should see his pain. While wevall want avni out if jail I hope they don't end it in such a hurry like the chuhi track because that is equally frustrating as a viewer...like the forced chuhi confession was cringe worthy! If they are smart and give us at least 5 -10 mins of avneil screen time in a 20 min episode TRPs will improve. And eventually give us a breather with some happy light hearted stuff for a week or two.Logically also after all this drama all Avneil would want is to take a little holiday and spend time with each other!

Originally posted by: OmNaMaSteOm

In relation to what you posted this is what I had posted on this thread :

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4945984&PID=145745914&#p145745914

I think even without AvNeilin the Jail track if they had just focussed on Neil background story after the leap it would have made a definite difference. That dream sequence was Avni's POV, there should have been an episode completely on Neil's POV that would have been the icing.

I need to add another important point here - the CV's have given Avni's character a lot of depth, but unfortunately, the CV's did not give Neil a back story post this 6 month leap. Infactmany members have been asking for this back story to understand where Neil is coming from, why he did what he did etc etc. His emotional condition has not been emphasized on. There should have been a scene where Neil and Khannas are arguing with Neil on why he arrested Avni, Neil could have shown his turmoil and angst about it. Neil could have been shown leaving Khannas staying with Neela ma to avoid Khannas confrontation everyday. All this would have helped us understand Neil's POV. This Jail track has only shown how Avni changed emotionally, the CV's did not show the transformation of Neil to Neo - some inner monologue.