When Love And Enmity Are One (11 Parts, Complete SS) - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Awww... I love how vulnerable she is. Good luck on your exams

Hey, thank you!
Im glad you like it, thanks!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Congrats for the promotion ..Maya..!! N best of luck for ur exam..!! The update was as always awesome ...Neil has surely changed an Avni would believe it too..with time..!!
p.s. do update soon..!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Amayrasharma18

Congrats for the promotion ..Maya..!! N best of luck for ur exam..!! The update was as always awesome ...Neil has surely changed an Avni would believe it too..with time..!!
p.s. do update soon..!!!

Hey, thank you! Thanks again!
I will update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Awesome
Loved it
All the best for ur xams dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Wonderful story line
But I think avni had forgiven Neil so early
She should had made him suffer a bit more
Anyway it is amazing
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kiranrathore

Awesome

Loved it
All the best for ur xams dear

Hey!
Thank you for both
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Kmhcrazyfan

Wonderful story line

But I think avni had forgiven Neil so early
She should had made him suffer a bit more
Anyway it is amazing

Hey, thank you!
I thought so to, but more people wanted them to make up quickly so i changed it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Part 11-
Neil sat with Avni on a beach
They were now married and on their honeymoon

Avni got up "Ill chase you to that sandcastle"
"Youre on"

Neil started to run but a scream from Avni made him stop
Turning he faced her

"Avni what happened" he ran over
"I think I hurt my ankle"
Neil put his hand out for her but she pulled it and stood up and ran away

"Avni" he growled rubbing the sand off his shorts
Avni stood at the sandcastle and poked her tounge out

Neil grabbed her and threw her over his shoulder
"Youre gonna pay for that"

Walking her over to the hotel he walked up the stairs, into their room and threw her onto the bed

Neil had picked up her shoes
She gasped
"You wouldnt"

"Oh wouldn't I"
"Look, theyre my faviourate we can sort this out"

"I dont think we can Avni, you broke my trust"
"Oh shut up you oaf and kiss me"

Neil chuckled, dropping the shoes he kissed her on the lips and rested his hands on her hips

"I hate you sometimes Mr Khanna"
"I love you always Mrs Khanna"

"God, youre so cheesy"
Neil winked at Avni making her giggle

"So"
"So"
"Do you think youre pregnant yet"

Avni began to cough "Ive just began my career , im not getting pregnant"
"Im your boss, Ill give you time off"

"No I want to work"
"But"
"No buts, my body, my rules"

Neil rolled his eyes "One baby"
"I already have one baby"

Neil furrowed his brows in confusion
"You" Avni laughed
Jumping back onto the bed she smiled

"But I dont mind the act of making another one"
Neil smiled and climbed into bed

Finally Avni and Neil had the ending they had both wanted!

This is the last chapter of this story!
Thanks for all your support!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
This is awesomeee...can you plzz plzz write an epilogue
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shreya_patel160

This is awesomeee...can you plzz plzz write an epilogue

Hey, thank you! Part 11 was an epilouge as it skipped forward

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