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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting update👏
Loved how Sukhi were talking about taking blame😆
Chakor is back to her job of reporting😉
Suraj seems a carefree individual, not bothered of royal duties😊
Waiting for next

Thanks a lot dear!

Glad you loved the Sukhi scenes!

Chakor has to be back to her job, it's for what she has came here ;-)

It's not that he is not caring about his duties, it's just he needs time to think about something!

See you by this evening!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Interesting update
Sukhi were so cute.
Chakor needs to study to teach Paakhi 😆.
I feel Vivaan wants to be king.
Will Paakhi suspect Chakor? she seems smart.

Thank you so much dear!

Glad you liked Sukhi here too!

Hehehe she is not so good in Maths LOL

Yup dear! You are right about Vivaan!

You will see about ChaKhi soon!

Thank you once again!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Maithu deary sorry being late
loved both chapters

so cute thank you am always smiling through (such a solace from the current stress of work and the episode 😛)

just loving Chakhi so cute and also sukhi is again bliss loving them

JM is again into mode of acknowledging her act and nice that the siblings are saving her...

hmmm looks like Ms. Rosella is getting into another job too 😉 other than tutoring, reporting and hmmm clicking pics but ...

good going girls.

lovely lovely...

off topic ... How is your country... heard its terribly cold. take care... stay warm...

Hey Sumi!

No need to be sorry!

With work and fam, I can understaand!

Glad you loved the progress of the story!

I'm happy that this story could make you smile! Feeling blessed!

Heee Even here her JM form is not leaving her LOL

Another work? It's called fate! Heee

Thank you so much for all the lovely words which are so encouraging!

Yup dear!

The climate is so changing from one time to other.

For now it's good in Paris, it's mostly in the mountains that it's cold!

Thank you!

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Taahir

@taahir004

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+ 10

Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Fantastic Chapter

Suraj and Paakhi's small fight was cute

it was great seeing him teaching Chakor how to handle archery and it seems also he does not care about what the outside world thinks

oh hell the queen and Chakor always gets into some folly and the queen is now misunderstanding Chakor's intention

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: taahir004
Fantastic Chapter

Suraj and Paakhi's small fight was cute
it was great seeing him teaching Chakor how to handle archery and it seems also he does not care about what the outside world thinks
oh hell the queen and Chakor always gets into some folly and the queen is now misunderstanding Chakor's intention

Thank you so much dear!

Happy you liked the bro-sis moments!

Yup yaar! He is a free bird! That's what he wants to feel.

no no no No misunderstanding! Queen is not so fund of Chakor for now, let's see what happens in future!

Thank you once again dear!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Part 9 (Previous part : Part 8 )

Being shocked a bit of luckily not getting caught, she turned to see Pakhi with her knob stick but that didn't change anything in Chakor Oups Miss. Rosella's view "No nothing like that! As I heard that he was present, so turned to see him!"

"Oh I see!" seeing the plates of aperitif, she asked her tutor "Did you served anything?"

"Yeah! Juice!"

"Aperitif?"

Making a face "It's not my thing!"

"Same as me! Come! I will show you something!" and they went away from there.

***

"Tasty!" Miss. Rosella said as she took another bite of the pastry she was having along with the Princess as they were seated in a corner with plates of sweet in front of them.

"This is my thing too!"

Facing the little girl "Why are you so nice to me only?"

"Because you are different from others!" she replied simply.

"Different in what way? Not knowing to do reverence and by breaking Queen's things?"

"You are treating me as a normal person!"

"You are normal!" Miss. Rosella said.

"Normal girl except the crown and gown of the princess!"

"It's not"

"Hello Princess Pakhi!" Vivaan called in as he neared the ladies, making the tutor to put the rest inside her mouth as she cleaned her hand.

"Hello cousin Vivaan!"

"Having a nice time!" as he turned his eyes, he spotted Chakor "Seems like Queen has invited your new care taker too!"

"She is my tutor! Miss. Rosella Ben!" in a not so interested tone and turning towards her "He is my cousin Vivaan!"

Getting up "Nice to meet you Mister. Vivaan!"

"I prefer to be addressed as Lord Vivaan!"

"It's like asking a Ferrari owner to be addressed as Ferrari X!" Suraj said as he neared the small group.

"Do you have a problem with Ferrari" and the men continued to talk when Pakhi pulled Miss. Rosella by hand to make her sit.

"Our cousin Vivaan is jealous of my brother Suraj!"

"For the crown?"

"Yes! If Suraj doesn't take the position, the next one to be in line is Vivaan!"

"And you?"

"Girls don't have that privilege!"

"Oh I see!"

"I also don't like these rules of negligence towards women!" Pakhi said.

And the evening went on.

***

"You mean to say there is cousin of the Prince who is behind the crown and power?" Tina questioned through video call.

"Yes! But I don't think he is suitable!"

"Is the Prince is?" Adi asked.

"Yeah! I think!"

"Ohhh! Someone is turning red talking about him!" her friend teased her.

"Keep quiet yaar! Nothing like that!" adjusting her hair "I feel like we are going behind something that doesn't exist itself!"

"What do you mean?" Adi.

"Prince is wanting something! Wish I could have an interview with him."

"Try your best dear!"

"You need courage Sunshine!" her friends said before quitting for night.

***

As she was on her way to the Princess study room, the notes of piano took her attention.

Following the sound, she turned 2 turns and climbed stairs, before getting in front of the room.

Seeing the door to be open, she entered at rat steps to see the Prince there, with his hands on keys, eyes closed, playing a beautiful melody while being in another world.

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Thank you buddies for reading!

Leave your views if possible!

See you tomorrow with Zarir and HK!

Next part : Part 10

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#67

Amazing update👏

Loved the bonding of Chakor &Pakhi😊

So Vivan is next in the line to take crown

Looks like Chakor &Pakhi are not fond of him , loved the way Chakor teased Vivan😆

Chakor thinks Suraj is suitable for crown but there is some mystery about Suraj😉

Suraj was playing piano , is there any significance

Waiting for next

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 8 years ago

#68

Maithu

see I finsihed soon

very nice and smooth

hmm so villian is Vivaan... always eyeing for power.

am really enjoying Chakhi very much. poor girl is yearning for being to be treated as normal next door girl... love the bonding.

Chakor and foodie ha ha ha imagined the way she would gulped her cake.

So the prince is melancholic... that lovely, i always wanted Suraj to be the one who is a musician or to play instrument as one who plays instrument is considered to be subtle always.

for a change dude is not with his rifle hhahah... sorry I keep referring to the show na!

nice one waiting for the meeting!