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Posted: 7 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj

Lovely update sis..

Suraj and paakhi's lil fight s so cute..
In future is chakor write the article abt real suraj?is that ll be the reason for making his heart break in future?
The way he taught her how to hold the archeries was lovely..
Chakor and queen are always having some misunderstandings like chakor is breaking her things everytime..lol
Eagerly waiting 4 next update sis..
Luv u..tc

Thank you so much sister!
Glad you enjoyed SuKhi scene!
I can't answer to your question now dear, you will get to see it soon! :-)

I think we have to make a list of thinks she will break again! lol
Will update soon!
See you!
Love you dear!
Take care!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Interesting update

Loved Sukhi's cute fights.
Now I know why you chose archery and not shooting 😉.
Hope Chakor doesn't get in trouble for breaking the window or taking Paakhi out.
I like Suraj he's easy going and I like he's attitude towards the outer worlsd, hope that Chakor doesn't break his trust.

Eagerly waiting for next.

Thanks a lot buddy!
Happy the SuKhi scene made an impact!
Glad you got to see the Archery way of making couples lol
No no nothing will happen.
Hope the trust stays!
Soon soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#53
Wow that was such a Fabulous Chapter

The queen and Girja were appalled and surprised at Chakor's mistakes
Chakor impersonated the tutor so now she is caged in the palace I like that
Paakhi is in a wheelchair, it seems she's naughty and perhaps a joker too
Suraj been in the palace then why didn't he attend the press conference

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Posted: 7 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: taahir004

Wow that was such a Fabulous Chapter

The queen and Girja were appalled and surprised at Chakor's mistakes
Chakor impersonated the tutor so now she is caged in the palace I like that
Paakhi is in a wheelchair, it seems she's naughty and perhaps a joker too
Suraj been in the palace then why didn't he attend the press conference

Thank you so much dear!
Hehehehe They need to get used to her errors LOL
Happy that you liked the update dear!
The reason for him not being there is still a question which will be answered soon.
Thank you once again
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Posted: 7 years ago
#55
Part 8 (Previous part : Part 7 )


"I will take care of it!" Prince said as they entered the palace.
"At least you can do this when you are at fault!" Pakhi to her brother who left them and started to climb stairs but stopped hearing his sister.
"What is I told that it was you who did that?"
"All I will need to do is make a puppy face and she will be convinced that it was by error and not intentionally" she said smirking while her tutor was standing, studying the duo's exchange.
"She will for sure think you are taking revenge for not letting you out." he said as he turned back.
"Don't put bad ideas on Mother's head!" she chided her brother.
"Can I talk to the Queen? It was my fault!"
"NOoo" Both the siblings said, facing the tutor.

"I will take care!" Prince said in a firm voice, making his sister to side him with a nod as Miss. Rosella saw him disappear in the stairs.

***

"This equations, diagrams, lines Ouf they are tormenting me." Chakor said to her friends through video call.
"You have to do it for yourself dear!" Tina said.
"To know more about Prince, you need to keep on going as Tutor!" Adi added.
"He is different from what all we saw in news and magazines!" she said to her friends.
"How much different?" Tina.
"He is fun, caring, giving importance to family but the only question is why wasn't he present the day of the press conference and why he didn't still give any announcement." she said collecting the files over her bed.
"What do you think it can be Sunshine?" Adi asked.
"I think he is thinking something. Other day I heard him telling he needs time to the Queen. Possible it was over this topic."
"Oh!" her friends.
"And"

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"See you!" and she closed the chat page "Yes!" she said to the person at her door.
"Excuse us Miss. Rosella!" Miss. Girija said as she entered with the Princess "Princess Pakhi wanted to see you." as Pakhi smiled at her tutor.
"No no! I was just" getting up from bed "Preparing for tomorrow's lesson."
"I see!" Miss. Girija commented "Well! We are here as Princess wanted you to invite you to the Cocktail party this evening."
"Me?" Miss. Rosella asked.
"Yes!" Pakhi smiling at her tutor.
"It is for the well-known people of this Kingdom and Empire along with business people. And I see you are one among them" she said the last thing in a mocking way "You are also invited!"
"Thank you so much for inviting me! I will be there for sure!" she said smiling at her student who returned it.

***

Miss. Rosella who entered the party place served herself juice and stood on the side, with her phone in hand as she got in her reporter mode, Chakor.

Seeing the Queen being approached by the Prime Minister, she immediately clicked a pic.

"Highness! We are still waiting to hear few words from Prince."
"Can I know about what?" Queen asked while Chakor tried all her best to hear their conversation but it was not so possible.
"About succeeding the throne!"
"The coronation will happen as planned!" She said.
"My Highness! How are you?" a young gentleman said "Hello!" he shook hand with the Prime Minister.
"Vivaan! How are you?" Highness asked.
"I'm good! Where is my cousin by the way?" he said as he scanned the crowd "Did he disappeared again?"

Right at the moment Queen was going to reply "He is here!" "Prince!" and few other words were heard.
As the Queen turned to see, the Prince Suraj entered the premise, buttoning his hand bouton "I got lost searching my tie!" he said as Chakor got out her cell and captured a pic of the Prince along with his mother and the Prime Minister in the frame.

"I see that you are here!" Vivaan said with certain sarcasm. As Suraj acknowledged the presence of his mother and his kingdom's PM.
"Where else do you want me to be?" Suraj questioned.
"How was your trips?"
"Nice!"
"I was in England last week for a dinner with the Royal family." Vivaan said with pride showing teeth to the others.
"I was at England beaches, relaxing!" Suraj.
"You are still searching for solace?"
He just smiled in response as he took a drink from the plate which passed by and excused himself as he went near Miss. Girija.
And right at that time, Chakor clicked another pic of Prince.

"Is my brother that much inspiring!" Princess questioned as she approached Chakor who was putting her phone in her pocket with her eyes stick to Prince.

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Thank you buddies for reading!
Hope you all liked it!
Let me know your views!
Next update tomorrow!
See you!


Next part : Part 9


- Maithili

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Posted: 7 years ago
#56
How amazing yr...totally loved your writing...😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#57
Interesting update👏
Loved how Sukhi were talking about taking blame😆
Chakor is back to her job of reporting😉
Suraj seems a carefree individual, not bothered of royal duties😊
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
#58
Interesting update
Sukhi were so cute.
Chakor needs to study to teach Paakhi 😆.
I feel Vivaan wants to be king.
Will Paakhi suspect Chakor? she seems smart.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#59
Maithu deary sorry being late
loved both chapters

so cute thank you am always smiling through (such a solace from the current stress of work and the episode 😛)

just loving Chakhi so cute and also sukhi is again bliss loving them

JM is again into mode of acknowledging her act and nice that the siblings are saving her...

hmmm looks like Ms. Rosella is getting into another job too 😉 other than tutoring, reporting and hmmm clicking pics but ...

good going girls.

lovely lovely...

off topic ... How is your country... heard its terribly cold. take care... stay warm...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: HayaZehra313

How amazing yr...totally loved your writing...😳

Thank you so much!
Your comment made my day!
Feeling so happy!
Hope you like the upcoming parts and stories too!

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