Shivika OS: Tu Hi Mera~Based on the precap of (5/1/2018)

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Kirthi

@ks_angel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Apu_915
Lovely OS ❤️
Shivika are just imperfectly perfect, nobody can separate them 😳
Loved the ending...Veer can go on ringing the bell but he'll not be able to distract Shivika 😆
Keep Writing!

Apu...😳

Thank you so much dear...

Yeah...bells he tho ring kar rahaa hein abb Annika ko pagal stapit karne ke liye...par nothing will be able to distract Shivika or break their love for each other...😆

So veer ki chopsy honi hein in the end...😆

Ok dear...Will try...

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Kirthi

@ks_angel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: panjami
That was great

Thank you dear...😊

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Kirthi

@ks_angel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: kaavya009
Kirthi like always beautiful piece of work. Enjoy reading it to the core. Well written, well balanced with so much depth. Do write more OS frequently. Love you for this one ❤️

PS: Initially I thought this story is moving towards a completely different tangent while reading your ps and pps 😉 😆

Kavya...😳

Thank you dear...

Yeah...I know...par bechari mein kya karthi...Kidkithod ideas thi poo ki..but meine aise raitha bana diya...😆

Plus uss tangent mein jaathi tho mein censor notice dalthi title pe...😉

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abhilasha

@jaansahiba

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

That was beautiful. Finally, somebody found a way. No wonder veer was worried. The most lovely part was the kiss. Loved it to bits. Thanks for the pm. Do keep writing more. Congo for the index.
Love,
Abhi

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Hriju321

@Hriju321

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Kirti...muuaaah !❤️ Its just awesome ! Please continue from where you have stopped

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@BoonAndBane

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

This was really awesome, Kirthi.😃😃

This light-hearted and sweet OS gives me such a good-good feeling. 😛😛

Loved the bonding between Annika and Shivaay. 😳😳

But what I loved more was what you did with Veer. I simply hate him. Let him ringing bell for the whole lifetime. 😆😆

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Keshi

@WinterStar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Aww kirthi this is lovely...

Hayye rabba itna hot scene woh bhi cupboard ke andar,, LOL dono ki hormones vacation pe hai. 😆

but i love your take on the scene, i just wish we had a scene like that, but dream karne mein kya jaate,

isko continue kar sakte ho ? which i love to read 😉

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kavya3224

@kavya3224

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Thanks for the PM dear...
Awesome and cute os...
Nautanki ani always my fav...
Shivaay being chalu cheez...
Awww... these two na...
khidkithod and romantic as always...
But u described their ever ending romance soo beautifully.. 😳
Thank you for tat... 😳
Sorry for being late 😭