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LOVE_ASAD_A_Lot

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Posted: 6 years ago

#11

Great and nice OS

You wrote it beautifully.

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Amaya Rishikesh

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Posted: 6 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Nonie12345
Wonderful OS Shreya⭐️but it was so heartbreaking💔

Thank you so much, Nonie :)

Originally posted by: SilverBell
This Was Well Written.
and Its Heartbreakingly Sad.

Thank you Nicita! :)

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Amaya Rishikesh

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Posted: 6 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: .-Amethyst-.
This is shattering! He deserved better. </3
Fantastic OS Shre!

Thanks Maahu ❤️ I am kinda a sadist that way 😳 I secretly love sad endings. 😆

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
That was, jerking! Lovely presentation, and the flow was amazing <3

Glad you liked it Pro! ❤️

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Amaya Rishikesh

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Posted: 6 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: .moonglade.
It's amazingly heartbreaking! I'm totally at a loss of words.

Thaanks ❤️ You know I am a born narcissist, and sadist, and pessimist. 😆

Originally posted by: Viswasruti
It's always difficult to evoke pathos rather than happy ending stories Shree. 😊
You did it with poise and sangfroid, succeeded taking the reader with you into that struggling heart's screaming silence by that open ending! 👏

Thank you so very much Madhuri. I am glad you liked it. 😳

The praise you give me is extravagant, though. I am not that good a writer, but I hope I improve.

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Amaya Rishikesh

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Posted: 6 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: ...OohLaLa...
This was heartbreaking 💔

Thank you Nandu!

Glad you liked it. 😳

Originally posted by: -PyaariBhootni-
Such a heartbreaking write up💔
Loved the way u have described sanskar's feelings👏

Aishu! Long time no see.

Glad you liked it. 😳

Originally posted by: LOVE_ASAD_A_Lot
Great and nice OS
You wrote it beautifully.

Thank you very much :)

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Amaya Rishikesh

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Posted: 6 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: SenAnu
Mom, first of all, I feel so happy to read this kind of a thing from you, something out of the usual genres within which you write. And trust me, it was AMAZING. JUST PLAIN AMAZING. Probably more, but surely not less.
This could almost be like a script for a short film. Really, you're too good!

Loves!

RIP Chester Bennington.

Aii, do not get me started on Chester. 🤔 I will have a huge rant at people who b***h at him, and this is not the place. 😆 I hate the fact that they call him names, and I hate that they hate him, but the haters do not know anything of his life so they have no business judging the man. If you led a life like him you would never hate him for what he did.

No one has the right to judge another based on actions they do not understand. IMHO, he left on a high note, and Good Goodbye was a slap in the face for his haters. The song is epic. ❤️

Thank you for your praise, doll. I am glad to hear it from a magnificent writer like you. ❤️

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