Motives, A Mother In Law And Marriage Complete With Epilouge

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I decided I didnt want to let anyone down, as more than one person asked for a continuation of Learning How To Love And To Be Loved

So I present part 2: Motives, A Mother In Law And Marriage

Avni was sitting on the sofa chewing on her popcorn, she looked up as Neil walked in

"Ive had such a long day, come here" Avni stood up and walked across the room

Wrapping her arms around Neil's neck she rested her head on his chest

Neil shoved his hand through his hair
Avni grasped his face, lowering it so he was facing her

"Talk to me" Avni begged, she hated seeing Neil this way

"Someone messed up a deal for me again, this is like the third one in a month"
Avni halted seeing his stressed out and worn out expression

"Sit down "
Avni moved to the kitchen to make him a hot drink, while stirring her mind reeled with possibilities

Was someone out to ruin Neil's hard work?
She tried not to let her own insecurites invade her thought but her concern for Neil seemed to override all sane thought


Avni brought the tea in, placing it on the table
"Take your shirt off and lie down"

Neil raised his eyebrow "Really we're not married yet "
Avni rolled her eyes, grabbed the oil and returned

Straddling his back she moved her hands skillfully over his shoulders, putting pressure when necessary

He moaned in appreciation, Avni moved her hands down to his spine, making circles over it , stopping she got up as she heard his light snores

Covering him with a blanket she went to wash her hands
The doorbell stopped her from continuing

Going to answer the door
A woman looked up at her

"Are you Avni"
Avni nodded "How can I help you"

"My name is Ragini, I am Vidyut's mother, can we please talk"
The slam of glass from behind her made Avni turn

Neil stood with both fists clenched, his glare remained on Ragini Pandit

This is dedicated to vaish_patel and Amayrasharma18 for telling me to continue!

Do let me know thoughts and suggestions!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you thank you thank you! I'm guessing it's RP who's screwing with Neil's business!
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Originally posted by: vaish_patel

Thank you thank you thank you! I'm guessing it's RP who's screwing with Neil's business!

No problem! Of course! She wants revenge!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So happy that you decided to continue it...looking forward to it :)
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Part 2:
"Neil" Avni shouted running over to him
Checking over his hands, she wiped away the tea from his chest

"What the f**k is she doing here" Neil scowled
"I dont want to cause any harm all I want to do is talk" spoke Ragini

"Avni, can we speak, alone" asked Neil
Neil slammed the door in her face and turned to Avni

"You cant seriously be thinking of letting that woman in"
Neil scowled

"You are aren't you, what are you stupid? Do you want to go through it all again, have you learnt nothing"

Neil was fuming, the hurt look on Avni's face stopped him

"Im sorry Avni, I just don't want you to get hurt, you know it's because I love you, I can't lose you"

Avni looked away
"Oh god don't cry, I dont like seeing you cry"
Neil wiped away her tears

"Im sorry, im sorry" pressing kisses all over her face, he tilted her chin up

"Forgive me" he asked
Avni nodded, smiling up at him

"I just want to hear what she has to say"
Neil nodded, grasping her hand

"Just don't let go"
Although his pretence was for her, the fear of losing her scared him more than anything

Avni pulled the door open and Ragini stepped in

Sitting down, Avni gave her tea

"For what my son did, I can never apologise enough, I just"
Ragini began to sob

Avni pulled her hand but Neil refused to let go
Sighing she stood still

"Dont blame yourself"
"Thank you, I should have been there but I wasnt, now he's dead, he was in so much debt you see, my home was gone, from right under my feet"

Ragini stood up "Anyway ill be leaving, can we maybe speak tomorrow"

Avni nodded while Neil shook his head
As they walked her to the door, Ragini hugged Avni

Neil still held her hand
Ragini stepped back making Avni's hand fall from Neil's

Stepping away she walked out of the house
Neil had a very bad feeling as he looked down at his empty hand

Look! Ragini Pandit is already causing issues and shes just arrived!
Also! Check out my new story , love is blind!
Completley different premise but I hope you enjoy it

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: radzshakti

So happy that you decided to continue it...looking forward to it :)

Thank you! P2 is now updated!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 3-
Ragini Pandit sat on Neil's sofa the next day
Neil had decided to take the day off to be with Avni

"Neil, we have a spare room, cant she stay here for awhile"
Neil glared down at Avni "Why, you want her safe, secure and warm I will pay for a small place for her but not here"

"I dont want you paying for her house Neil"
"Oh, so now you worry about me, care about what I want"

"I always care about what you want"
"Not lately you haven't"

Ragini stood up "Look, I have a friend I can stay with for a while, I just want to help anyway I can"
"You can help by leaving our lives"

Avni turned around shocked "Neil"
Ragini turned "Dont, its okay, ill go"

Avni reached out "No, dont leave on behalf of him"
Ragini hid her smile as she shook her head "No, its okay I have work to do anyway"

Avni turned to Neil as Ragini walked out
"She is not Vidyut"
"Oh come on Avni, you cant seriously be falling for this poor me act"

Avni raised her eyebrow "I dont get your problem, if im honest"
Neil shoved Avni against the wall

"I love you Avni, thats my f**king problem, I dont want to lose you because I wont survive it, I dont trust her and I want you to listen to me, why is that so hard"

Neil closed his eyes in frustration "I want you with me, by my side, for as long as humanly possible, I wont lose you Avni, not again, it nearly killed me before, I love you so damn much"

Avni stood on her tiptoes, kissing his lips
"Youre really annoying when youre mad but youre also very hot"
Her finger trailed down his chest, jumping up she wrapped her legs around his body

"Ill drop contact with her, if it will keep you happy but"
"But" Neil repeated
"Speak to me how youve been speaking to me recently and I may try out those self defence moves on you"

Neil smiled at the memory "What about the uh other kind of session"
Avni bit into his neck, sucking she pulled her fingernails across his back

"I love you Neil "
Neil smiled "Lets go to bed "

Avni looked at the time "Its afternoon"
"I know , the last thing I want to do right now is sleep"

Neil threw Avni on the bed and climbed over her
"This time next week, you become Avni Khanna, I think thats cause for celebration"

Avni pulled him down "I completley agree"

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh Avni! Please don't be naive! Listen to your hot hubbs! Guess that's not gonna happen though...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh mah gods I m so happy that you continued it Awesome ,Amazing,Fabulous
Edited by Shreya_patel160 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Heyy..Maya!! So happy u r up with another part!! Thanku so very much for continuing the story..!!
Well coming to the update...as usual thrilling..!! Enjoyed reading it a lot !!I loved the characterization of Neil here...Can't resist falling for him more and more..!!

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