RiKara OS ~ The One I Lost

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Ms.Lizzie

@Ms.Lizzie

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: StarryStarryNyt
This is beautiful. At first I thought, it was Gauri watching him and my heart ached a little. You have captured Omkara so beautifully.

Thank you so much

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Ms.Lizzie

@Ms.Lizzie

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: ahista
My girl only you can think of such out of the box scenarios
This was excellent
I believe this is the OS about which you told that you got a new idea the other morning

Thank you

Yup, it's the same OS

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Ms.Lizzie

@Ms.Lizzie

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: MITHMA99
Lovely Os ❤️

Thank you

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Aarathi krishnan

@Aarathi85

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#44

I must say it's differerent thought because nobody is writting in perspective of riddhima...it's amazing

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Ms.Lizzie

@Ms.Lizzie

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Aarathi85
I must say it's differerent thought because nobody is writting in perspective of riddhima...it's amazing

Thank you so much

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

After the mention of tiny woman

I got the idea the pOV was of someone else

Great built up

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Roaiba

@roaiba

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Geez, I got so scared for a moment that it wasn't Gauri when Ridhima mentioned that he might be there with a woman. I thought it was Gauri's p.o.v but when she called Ri tiny I was like phew no need to worry 😆 but this was something totally different and refreshing to read, great work 👏

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