Imaginary Krpkab.. new episode part 10B updated on 17 dec link at pg1 - Page 24

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Cspcheziyan


No sorry please.
Your comments whenever you post -it gives immense pleasure and acts like a energy booster.
I am always looking forward to read your views. Please share if time permits

I will definitely try to share my views dear!😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Another exquisite chapter!⭐️You have switched from lighter chapter to a serious one with amazing ease!👍🏼 It only shows the depth of your awesome writing skill!👏

The chapters of this story never fail to remind me of the show and I love it! In addition these provides the things which were not exhibited in the show as well! A big thank you for that!😊

Just loved the Dev - Nikki convo! I was speechless reading that! That was an extremely mature convo written beautifully! I am in awe of your writing all the more dear!😊 I wish the makers should had shown this type of mature convos between Dev and Nikki in the show!

The first part regarding the dream was hilarious! Enjoyed it very much!
Insecurities had always taken toll on Ishwari pretty fast! And she hadn't done anything fruitful to drive it away as well!

Eagerly waiting for Ish-Sona face off!

Hope your exam preparations are going well!

Take care!😊
Edited by TAMOGHNAD11 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Every time I read a chapter I just imagine it as the true KRPKAB again I say the CV's should have visited this forum ask if they had no clue on how to venture into different tracks
here all you do is use such maturity that was excluded in the show
like Ishwari had always been fond and also had a good bond with Sona but the moment she found out Sona was in love all hell broke lose while you use their POV which really makes this story so much more interesting then the actual tracks that was shown
the dream was that Dev or perhaps Riya
will be waiting for the next chapter to see
thanks you it really was a Fantastic chapter really enjoyed it
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update...👍🏼👏 loved it totally.🤗

Every chapter is a treat to read.😃

I have a doubt now, I mean, by any chance Are you one of the initial writers of the show - Mitali or Shipra???? may be in disguise???😉 Becoz, you r writing so precisely what we expected from the show and not just our expectations, it is exactly what they promised to show thru promos... hai na??? TRP played a spoil sport... urghhh...😡

Anyways, Niki and Dev bonding was so cute & sweet. Loved her teasing her bro.😆

You have shown so much maturity in Niki, and that too to an adolescent???? Impressive, but hard to believe. I mean, She was too young when her bro struggled. Now as a teenager, she is always lost in her world, when did she observe her brother and study him so deep? OK, she may be excited to see Sonakshi as her bhabi as she is close to her. But other than that, she is ignorant towards rest of the things around her... isn't she? I didn't mean to offend you, may be in your story she is mature. Fair enough.😳

Ishwari as usual is behaving true to her character - insecure. Radharani true to her character, encashing it very smartly.😡

Ab ye kya hogaya? Where did Dev go without telling anything to anyone? Ishwari will be very angry now, aag mein ghee daalne ke liye radharani hai na?

Thanks for the pm, very sorry for commenting late...😳 waiting for the next update.😊
Edited by _ShaheErica_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 10 B


"Nikki will you please stop this otherwise I won't take your call hereafter" dressed in a light orange embroidered suit -with a high bun, which is adorned by gajras , sonakshi looked like not less than a sunshine..

"Hmm I know ,You are sooo busy with bhai in his phone calls most of the day and at night giving attendance in his dreams snatching his mobiles Then where could you find time for me? " Nikki swallowed the urge of laughing loud

"And your bhaiya is floored by you. Dev said my little sisi talking 'badi' 'badi' baatein'

'sona di , all think we teenagers are too old to have fun-too young to make decision - too smart to understand people -too immature for grown up conversations -huh no wonder teens are rebellious" Nikki took a long lazy sigh.

Sonakshi chuckled "Nikki which movie's dialogue is this? Beware someone will claim for copyright?"

"Sona di " sona moved her mobile away from her ears to bear Nikki 's shrill voice .

"Actually Riya di and Neha di were talking on phone about you two and bhai's sacrifices for us and many more thing yesterday night. I pretended like asleep and overheard everything. " Nikki had a goofy laugh at her little act and continued..


"We assumed that bhai and you are not in talking terms. They decided to talk with you about this. I woke up and called Elena di to help in this matter. But Elena di sent me yesterday's photos.and Sona di you are looking smoking hot in that netted Saree and bhai was totally smitten by you in those pictures".

"Nikki please".. Sona's face coloured.

Many voices sonakshi heard from Nikki's side.
" what happened Nikki? " she asked

"Hmm bhai hurriedly went with one cop without having breakfast -something like that mamiji is saying . Ok I'll call you later."
Nikki cut the call.


Cop that word rang a alarm inside sonakshi.

Oh my scooty! They said today we could get back after inspector resigned the case. Dev gave his address that's why the cop went to Ishwari niwas.

She was nervous now. She had no idea what was happening in his house.

"Should I call Nikki? " no no..

"A call to Riya? " no it's too not a good idea..

"Dev,, Haan Dev,, I will message him, "..

" Dev didn't even has his breakfast. He will come here only.. I should make him eat something..

"Yes, but ma is not here. Everyone went for a neighbour's house warming ceremony. I'll prepare something for him"


She decided and went to the kitchen to make some toasts and coffee.
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"But today my health check up... For that he left all his work and came.. " ishwari said to no one in particular..

"Haan he got ready and searching you jiji. But some one came and told that bangalan name.. Then phurr your Dev forgot everything- his family-his duty -especially his ma .. Hey bhagwan!! Kya se Kya hogaya humara Dev? " fakely cried Radha rani while observing ishwari from the corner of her eyes.



"Yes bua, sushmitasen err... I mean sonakshi's Scooty met with an accident last night. She dragged Dev bhai's name in this case and gave our house address. So police cop came and took away bhai to the police station. I over heard what they are talking. "

"Whattt? Police station? Jiji this 'Gareeb ki beti ' and her family never ever stepped any police station. Oh my god what else our jiji has to face coz of that bangalan? "

Ishwari's face has gone dark. She tried hard to keep her face unaffected before Radha Rani.

Maamaji on hearing the commotion came out and jumped in the conversation to take dev's side.


"Radharani will you please close your chattering mouth and stop your over acting. " then he turned to ishwari 's side and said,

"Ishwari Dev knows what he is doing..You don't give heed to this jobless people. I'll call him. Wait"..

Ishwari stopped mamaji from calling Dev and said " it's ok bhaiya, let him finish his work and come. I will go myself to hospital"

"No - then what for I am here. I'll take you. "

"The LIC waale asked you to visit them today. You waited for their call this long. So please don't miss that for me. " ishwari went towards the car.

"Jiji, wait. How could this kareeb ki beti leave you alone. Vikki ki Papa, don't you worry. I Will take care of your kachori" a subtle sarcastic tone that was. Ishwari realized that. She is the one who busily avoiding RR from coming between her son and her.But her son avoided her to run to his girlfriend.

Mamaji, without having any other option allowed his wife to go with ishwari and once again tried to get Dev on phone.

Ishwari felt defeated before his bhabhi. She rubbed her fore arm to settle her the slow fear that creeped into her heart. In her mind screen, her Dev pulled off his hand from hers and going far away.

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Being a business tycoon of Delhi, it's a very easy job for Dev to get back the vehicle from the police station without any issues and also pretty fast.

When Satish his driver started the vehicle and roughly pulled it out of the police station, Dev hurried there "Satish, what are you doing? Handle with care! ", saying that he took the two wheeler from him and rubbed its seats -handle bar smoothly as if trying to soothe it.

Satish blinked his eyes and checked & rechecked if that was a non living thing or he misunderstood someone special for his Boss as Scooty.

He smirked remembering whose that lucky thing belonged to .. But got confused if his master would ride that damn vehicle or decided to carry it because he was treating that scooty as a most delicate thing ,so he would end up deciding it won't able to carry his weight.

He gave out a relief sigh a when Dev finally started the scooty. But he wanted to pull his hairs out when even a small cyclist boy overtake them. (Dev riding sonakshi's scooty s..l..o...w...l..yyy... and Satish following back).

Finally the parade reached its destinations that is miss. Bose house.

Dev put his finger on the calling bell and heard 'aah -ouch' .

"What the hell. Now calling bells sounds are becoming more weirder. "

Then followed another "aah -maa"
He jumped in his place realizing that was sonakshi's voice that too painful one.

His luck or we could say door's luck (we all know otherwise our hero kicked it and broke to open) the door is not locked.

He ran putting Hussain bolt to shame to the kitchen at the same time Elena too climbed down and entered into it.


There the whole pot of milk spilled on the floor.
Sonakshi leaning on the kitchen slab limping to move backward.

Dev transfixed to see her state.

Elena understood the situation and asked "Sona where did you get hurt? "

Sonakshi pointed down. Dev eyes flew and fixed at her red swollen toes.

Tears started brimming in her eyes made Dev's heart Shrinked with pain.

"Sonakshi it's ok.. It's not hurting ok.. It will heal.. It's not paining ok.. "

"Dev"

"It's just first degree burn.It's not something serious. Ok"

"Dev"

He is speaking more to himself .

"Dev,breathe,calm down.I keep the affected area under running tab , the burning will stop,seeing Dev's anxiety a slow smile crept up her face.

At the very next second she was scooped by Dev and carried to the washroom.

Elena came with an aloe Vera leaf from the garden.

Dev again carried her to the main Hall and placed her on the sofa. In bright light he checked her wounds.

The skin tissues damaged and blisters popped out.

"Miss.bose . What are you? 5 years old? Who asked you try your skills in kitchen? Why can't you understand sonakshi? Why always trying to do which is not your cup of tea and ended up hurting yourself? " he looked up to her face. Concern screamed in his eyes.
"Yes it's not my cup of tea. It's your cup of tea I'm making" sonakshi tried to dilute his tension.

"Hahaha so funny! " Dev applied the silver oxide ointment given by Elena.

"aaah" Sona flinched with pain.

"Ok, OK, it's done. He bent near her toes and blew air. He rubbed her unaffected toes softly to ease her pain.

"Sorry Dev. I spoiled your morning na" she wanted to give him a nice breakfast as a token of thanks but ended up messed everything. She for the first time felt incapable of doing something.

Dev understood the havoc inside her stood up and hugged her tightly. Her head placed firmly against his abdomen. He tightened his hold as if trying to absorb all her pain in him.

Sonakshi looked up gave a enchanting smile to reassure him -she was ok.

Dev bent closer kissed her eyes and nose.

"Ahem.. Ahem.. "
Elena pretending to close her eyes with her hand and said, "guys if you're going to kiss, tell me, i'l move,don't spoil an innocent child "

Sonakshi raised her eyebrow at her "innocent? "..

Elena winked at her.

" we have to consult a dermatologist and a T. T is a must" Dev said firmly.

"No yaar. I'll manage"..

" Haan sonakshi ,Dev is right. I think blisters will pop up. Getting a doctor's opinion is no harm. Please. Dev i'll lock the house. You get her to the car. On the way we will inform mashi " elena rushed to clean the mess at kitchen.

"Dev it's ok. You don't Change your schedules. Otherwise you have to work fot late hours at night. I will... "

"Miss.bose I know you can manage all things on your own. You can run the government too. You can solve 'global warming, ozone depletion' etc all single handedly. But please do honor me by accepting my help. "

"Haan" sonakshi wide opened her mouth, make faces at him - beat him at his arms playfully and tilted her head to one side cutely - put forward her hands -gestured him to Carry her.

A soft orange candy??or a freshly blossomed orange rose - who is wearing his favorite gajra (hehe inspired by eri's insta pic) she looked so irresistible-so yummy-so delicious to him and all he wanted to just grab her and devour her to his heart's content.

But Dev 's caring side not failed to watch the traces of pain in her beautiful bewitching eyes which she was trying hard to hide it from him.

After half an hour Dev Dixit entered the city hospital carrying his lover cum nutritionist in his hands and directly faced none other than sulking Ishwari Dixit who was very much agitated by her son's absence ..

Oh how embarrassing that was!!!


Will be continued.. .. ...



P. S sorry friends for the delay. Actually I got hurt by hot oil.

Sorry again for not ishwari -sonakshi face off in this episode.will soon update next one. Please share your views. They are the energy boosters.
Edited by Cspcheziyan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
see i am first one to like and comment😊
handle the scooty with care omg😆 dev
and ishu and sona face off and sona in dev's arm😉
take care dear❤️
thanx for pm😃
beautiful update update soon👏

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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb update!!! Eagerly waiting for the next one!!!Thanks for the PM.
Edited by truekrpkabian - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: vanmad

see i am first one to like and comment😊

handle the scooty with care omg😆dev
and ishu and sona face off and sona in dev's arm😉
take care dear❤️
thanx for pm😃
beautiful update update soon👏



Aww thank you so much. You liked that part? I'm glad. Thank you so much yaar. Your gestures and appreciation keeps me writing. Thank you. I'm fine now.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: truekrpkabian

Superb update!!! Eagerly waiting for the next one!!!Thanks for the PM.


Thank you for the comments. I am glad you liked it. Will update soon. Do share your comments often please.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you for the update! Waiting for the face-off.

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