Imaginary Krpkab.. new episode part 10B updated on 17 dec link at pg1 - Page 23

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: _ShaheErica_

Beautiful, very beautiful.😃

Again, well written.👏👍🏼

You are giving exactly those kind of scenes what we craved for in the show. Sonakshi missing Ishwari's caring nature, and she shared it with her mom... very nice.

Riya supported her Dev bhayya, understood his condition, and without hesitation told off maami not to create problems... well said.👏 This kind of support was missing from all of his sisters in the show.😔

Ishwari, analyzing her thoughts, acts... very interesting. Again this was mainly needed in the show. An insecure mom trying her best to feel happy for her son, and acknowledge his decision. Instead of showing her in a total negative shade and overnight change of heart, the makers should have taken this route👍🏼
Ishwari was so cute & funny in the beginning, but later became the most hated character.😡

Dev's dream is very adorable.

Thanks for the PM. And sorry, I checked it today.😳


Its something pleasurable to read your comments. Thank you so much for your wonderful comment and looking forward for another one for the new update. Do read it and share your views please.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Gauri.0109

Wonderful chapter. Loving your story to the bits!!! Thanks for the PM. All the best for your exams👍🏼

Do update whenever you get time, looking forward to it:)


Thank you for loving this story.
Thank you so much for your wishes and continuous support.
Next part updated.do read and share your views.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: TAMOGHNAD11

Wow!What a fabulous chapter!👏👏Totally
loved it!You know reading each chapter of this story really gives the feeling
that I am watching the show itself!⭐️Ican't thank you enough for this beautiful ff! You are such a gem of a writer!⭐️


You are a master in choosing subtle instances and use those in the story
plot very aptly which makes the story more amazing!That's why your writing is
more mature!Just loved the use of the embroidery part in this update! i wished
the makers had showed it in the show!You are shaping the story with amazing
beauty!


Ishwari was always very fond of Sona until she fell in love with her son!
You are depicting their povs towards each other with utmost maturity which make
the story more endearing!


Loved Riya taking stand for his brother!


And I think the last part is a dream of either Dev or Sona!Am I right?


Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon dear!


Thank you for the pm!


All The Best for your exams!




Awww thank you so much for your wonderful comments.
It's a pleasure to know that this story gives you the feeling that you are watching the show.
I'm honoured.
Thank you so much for your wishes.
I am very grateful to your continuous support.
Next part updated. Do read and share your views
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: TAMOGHNAD11

Sorry for commenting late!

Superb chapter as always!👏👏 Loved it! I am loving each chapter of this ff!⭐️
Enjoyed Sona drooling Dev very much!And the part where the Bose family is pampering Dev is utmost endearing!You are a true expert in depicting those kind of scenes!👏
You described RR's pov amazingly well! Her reasons can't justifying her deeds!
Now Ishwari got to see a photo of Dev with the Boses!I hope he is not going to be in trouble!
Felt sad for Sona in the last part!You have beautifully penned her emotions!
Thank you for pm!


No sorry please.
Your comments whenever you post -it gives immense pleasure and acts like a energy booster.
I am always looking forward to read your views. Please share if time permits
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: LiveLife321

With each passing update i am falling in love with your FF a little more. At the same time, its also making me sad with this thought that what all we missed in the show and the injustice they did on the name of dynamism to each and every beautifully carved characters. I really hope you wont leave it in the middle because we all wait for your updates so eagerly.

All the very best for your exams, do well and update when ever you find free time. As usual will be waiting for your next update till then.😊



Felt happy as well as nostalgic to read your comments. I will continue as long as I am getting beautiful comments like yours. Next part updated. Do read and share your views.
Thank you so much for your continuous support.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: 8310497jah97n01

nice update👏

thanks for the pm


Thank you so much for your likes and comments.
Next part updated.do read and share your views.
Thank you in advance
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: vanmad

that was beautiful dream

and the 2 person are riya and hmari ishwari mata if i am not wrong😊
i hope dev's was not audible enogh to ishu😉
amazing update👏
post soon😃



Yes it was a dream. And Nikki 's part is introduced. Hope you would like it.
Next part updated. Do share your views please. Thank you in advance.
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Posted: 7 years ago
i am overwhelmed and grateful to u for writing such beautiful ff for us😊
thank u for fulfilling my wishes of witnessing the scences which i so wanted to see in serial
i can actually visualise every scene⭐️
thank u for pm😃
update soon👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you so much. Very beautifully written. Brother and sis conversation was very beautiful. You are giving us what the serial didn't give. The way the slowly the story is moving take care of all the small minutes details.


Regards
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Posted: 7 years ago
This brother-sister duo is so cute. 😆😊 I had a hunch that the last part of the last chapter was Dev's dream, and it was so adorable. I loved Nikki's advice to him about working to turn dreams into realities. Like wake-up-and-set-to-work-call. And I secretly hope he doesn't handle the matter like he handled Sonakshi's infertility in the show.

I am sensing fireworks at the upcoming Sonakshi Ishwari face off.

Amazing chapter. 👍🏼
Waiting for next.


- Tia
Edited by dreamy.tiara - 7 years ago

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